The Island (Straight)

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  1. Danny_H

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    The Island

    Part 1 - The Wakening

    David woke suddenly and immediately realised something was seriously, horribly wrong.
    His head throbbed with a dull ache that felt like a cross between a severe hangover and the after-effects of concussion he vaguely remembered from his days playing rugby football at university. His eyes blinked painfully in the light that streamed through the single window of his room. Gradually, his eyes adjusted themselves and he started to recognise the shapes and blurs that surrounded him. At first glance he felt that he was laid in some kind of hospital bed, several monitoring machines stood beside him on his left hand side. Faint and rhythmic beeping could be heard coming from these although he couldn’t see the displays as they were turned away from him. As well as the large full height window to his right, there was also single door straight in front of him with a large mirror beside it. Other that these, the room was sparsely decorated, with plain white-washed walls and ceiling. The floor had a greenish-bluish tinge and a similarly clinical appearance to the rest of the room.
    David shut his eyes and tried to remember the events that might have led to his arrival in this place. Although he knew he should be scared he in fact felt oddly calm. His memory seemed blank and he found it hard to try and recall anything that might have explained his current situation. His body had a strange numb feeling and heaviness that he also couldn’t explain. He tried, without success, to lift his head off the pillow. His arms were also heavy but he could feel the cool crisp feel of the starched white sheets against his upper body. His lower half and legs were completely numb and he tried to gaze downwards to check his legs were still actually attached to his body although, due to a sudden feeling of extreme dizziness and nausea, he gave up and closed his eyes again. Soon, he seemed to drift off into a dream-like state. Partial images and sounds appeared to him like he was watching scenes from a film. Dancing. Bright lights. Drinking. Laughter. Losing his friends in a bar. Drunkenly stumbling into a club. Meeting a dark haired stranger…. Then blackness.
    He opened his eyes again to find his vision clearer and the numb feeling in his body gradually subsiding. His head cleared although his memory was still absent. The view through the window was obscured by blinds although a faint green tinge and the gentle movement of what might have been trees was just visible behind them. His eyes fully focused and allowed him to look down at himself better than before. The feeling of dizziness and nausea had passed and did not return. Each of his arms had an intravenous drip attached, through which clear fluid appeared to be flowing slowly. His legs still felt heavy and numb although he could now move his arms a little, and lift his head from the pillow. With a grateful sigh of relief he saw the outline of the toes of both feet sticking up from the sheets at the end of his bed. “Thank God!” he croaked, his voice hoarse and dry. He tried to clear his throat. “Hello?” he attempted, his voice still breaking slightly. “HELLO?” he called out, louder and clearer this time. There was no response. The room stayed eerily silent except for the faint beeping of the monitor beside his bed.
    Have I been involved in some kind of accident? David thought to himself. He still failed to recollect anything that might have happened to explain why he had come to wake up in this strange and hospital-like environment. He hoped that he was not paralysed in some way, perhaps due to severe injuries to his back or lower body. There was no way to find out and his legs remained stubbornly immobile and numb. Despite straining with effort, gritting his teeth and almost tears of desperation he still failed to lift his legs or move his toes with even a flicker. He had to know the truth. He had to see if there were any wounds or signs of damage to his lower body or legs.
    With patience and further effort his arms became a little stronger and he was finally able to lift them up a few inches off the bed. The drips tugged slightly but otherwise the movement of his arms was unimpeded. He stretched and exercised his fingers, trying to get the movement back to be able to grip the sheets. After what seemed like a few minutes he managed to lift his arms almost up to his head although they flopped back onto the bed as soon he relaxed again. He knew his next attempt would be successful.
    With a deep breath he lifted his arms and gripped the edges of the bed sheet as it lay over his lower half. Slowly he managed to roll the sheet down, until his belly was exposed. So far so good, he thought. He inspected himself for wounds, scars or dressings and saw nothing untoward. He lifted his arms again and managed to roll the sheet to the tops of his hips, suddenly realising that he was naked under the sheets although his groin was unusually hair-free and looked very freshly and cleanly shaved. He paused at this point to recover his energy and to lift the sheet as far up as possible so that he could see all the way down to his feet. With a faint grunt of effort he lifted his arms while holding the edge of the sheet, wobbling slightly as he raised them further.
    He looked down, as the light of the window illuminated his lower body and revealed the shocking truth of what now lay below the sheets.

    “Holy fuck!” he cried out, “What the fuck is that?!”.
     
  2. Super66

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    I'd like to see where this goes.
     
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    this could be good... it's well written !
     
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    Definitly a good start.
     
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    Slow start good description I would like to see where this goes
     
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    While a promising start, this story will take about 10 years to finish at the current rate. I hope this guy is just temporarily busy, anyway.
     
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    The Island

    Part 2 – The Explanation

    David’s mind span and swam. His arms had already flopped back to his sides and the sheet that covered his body lay partially covering his legs and torso. The reason for his shocked response and incredulity lay partly exposed, resting snugly between his thighs.
    It was like a cross between some kind of nightmare and dream. David had no sensible frame of reference for what he had seen. Both his legs looked normal, his muscular thighs were perhaps a little paler than he could recall but otherwise of normal shape and size. His knees and lower legs continued on down to his feet and appeared to be intact and healthy looking. His groin was completely hairless and sprouting from this was what appeared to be a hugely bloated tube of flesh that rested into the space between his thighs and all the way to his knees, where it ended in an obscenely swollen and elongated glans, the tip of which was half exposed from under a massively distended foreskin. The hole in the end of the glans looked like it could admit a finger easily, if not two. His balls were similarly enlarged, taking the appearance of two brown hairless grapefruit-sized but egg-shaped orbs over which the fat shaft of his penis sat in a gentle curve. If his penis were to lie sideways over his body, David thought, it would be sure to hang over the side of his leg with the huge head resting on the bed itself.
    David tried to reach down and hold it, thinking it must be some kind of mirage or visual hallucination. Although his fingers could grasp and attempt to hold the ridiculous-looking organ he was still too weak to lift it from its position between his legs. It felt real enough to his hands - firm and warm - but he could feel no sensation below his belly to confirm this was his own flesh. If it was his penis, it was unrecognisable from its original form – a generous but by no means massive 8 inches when fully aroused (he remembered one of his girlfriends experimenting with a tape measure years ago and telling him this with glee). David imagined that his penis was now twice this size if not more despite being apparently flaccid.
    While he pondered over his current situation, trying to grasp any memory of recent events or come up with a logical explanation for the condition of his genitals, the door to David’s room opened. He looked up to see a strangely familiar female face although he couldn’t recall the name. The lady was tall and slim with long, wavy dark hair. She wore a white coat, the kind a laboratory technician would wear, and had a professional air about her like a surgeon or senior lawyer might have had. She was the first to speak.
    “Good morning David,” she said pleasantly, offering a warm smile.
    David cleared his throat and tried to stay calm. “Good morning. Who are you?” he asked.
    “My name is Doctor Alice Davenport. I am the chief operating officer and scientific lead for this institution.” she replied.
    “And what exactly is this institution – some kind of hospital?”
    “In a manner of speaking, yes. But we like to simply refer to the whole facility around us as ‘The Island’” she explained.
    David thought for a while, considering his next question. “I suppose the most obvious question I should ask you now is this: why do I seem to have an enormous penis and why can’t I feel my legs?”
    Alice smiled again. There was a hint of mischief behind her eyes this time. “I’m glad you asked me David. You deserve a full and frank explanation.”
    “I’m all ears. And quite a lot of cock as well.” he replied, deadpan.
    “Well. To put it simply, I chose you as the subject of a fantastic and ground-breaking experiment. For several years we have worked on a method of increasing the size of the human penis many times greater than normally possible, even taking into account genetic variations and heredity.” she paused to allow this to sink in. David continued to listen politely and in silence.
    “When you met me,” she continued, ”it was in a bar I often visit to try and find guys like you as volunteers. I hoped to find a mid-20’s, tall and well built, preferably handsome man who would be adventurous enough to consider our proposal.”
    “And what proposal is that?” asked David.
    “Well. To join our institution. To go through our experimental process and, if successful, to continue to work for us and enjoy a considerable remuneration package… ahem... as well as a considerable package.” she smiled to herself, enjoying her own joke.
    “Joking aside though, “said David, “how the hell did you get me to agree to this. I don’t remember a thing. You must have drugged me, or something.”
    “Quite the opposite David, “ Alice replied, reaching down to her clipboard and sliding a sheet of paper off it, “You fully consented and signed an initial contractual agreement in the presence of witnesses and our legal team.”. She handed the sheet to David.
    David looked at the sheet. It was short but looked authentic. There was his signature and a date, seemingly weeks after he could last remember anything clearly. Scanning through the sheet quickly he noticed a few notable phrases – “…penis in its enlarged state will remain the property of the company….”, “… shall be entitled to claim an annual salary of no less than £1.3million…” and “…agreement to non-disclosure for the first 50 years…”.
    “OK. That seems genuine. “ David admitted, “But I don’t remember anything about this at all, let alone agreeing to be some kind of guinea pig for your crazy experiments.” He handed the sheet back to her.
    “No, that’s your copy to keep if you wish David.” She replied, turning away. Seemingly offended she turned back to him. “And I should say that far from being crazy experiments, your case has been an amazing and most satisfying success, as the evidence should demonstrate.”
    “Oh I don’t deny I now have an elephants trunk for a dick, “ David replied, starting to get angry, “but could you just explain to me why I can’t feel my legs and why I’m so weak as well? What’s the use of a giant penis if I’m paralysed in bed?”
    Alice leant onto the bedside and looked deep into David’s eyes. She smiled, the warmth and empathy seemed real. Her concern was genuine. “David, relax. There are simple and good reasons for all this. It is all part of our process.” She reached into her lab-coat pocket and pulled out a pair of latex gloves and put them on. Resting her clipboard on the table beside David’s bed she pulled the sheet down over his legs until his entire body was exposed.
    “Oh my! That is certainly our finest specimen I can happily say!” her eyes could barely drag themselves away from David’s incredibly enlarged genitals. She turned to David again, her eyes glittering. “Let me show you what we have been able to create. With the help of the latest medical techniques, scientific discoveries and very, very expensive precision instruments we have successfully created a human penis that is much bigger, more expandable and sexually capable than could even be dreamed possible.”.
    With that she lifted his penis from the bed and held it vertically up from his body. Struggling to obtain a good grip with both hands, she wrestled it up in the manner of someone handling a python or similarly sized snake. The gargantuan organ was like a third leg, the flesh of its shaft rising from his groin like a small tree. The massive head bulged out from the top of the shaft, appearing to be almost level with the doctors shoulders. She slid the foreskin slowly back until the glans was free of its confines. Even his glans alone was a size that would have put most men’s whole penis to shame – it must have been the size of a large orange but elongated and sloped with a graceful curve ending at the tip with a hole big enough to drop a pen into without touching the sides.
    “See. Look what we have done for you. Isn’t it beautiful?”
    From David’s perspective his penis looked massive, and mesmerizingly so. He couldn’t believe the length it reached held up like that. It was easily long enough to swing between his knees. “A little impractical though, don’t you think?” he said.
    “Perhaps. But it really depends what you expect to be doing with this beast.” The doctor replied. “Wait and see. You’ll realise that this may only be the beginning of your adventure. What we have planned is going to totally blow your mind.”
    David had to admit he was intrigued, already thinking about the possibilities, the huge sums of money already promised and the unimaginable response once the rest of the world got to know about this. However, there was still one more answer he didn’t have.
    “You still haven’t told me why my groin and legs are numb.” he said.
    “Oh yes. I apologise that I hadn’t mentioned about that yet,” she replied, “In order to successfully initiate the treatment and produce these results we had to chemically sedate you and ensure you were pain-free throughout each procedure. We have one more course of therapy to provide but we thought you would like to be awake for this, by way of explanation as well as to see the final step before we move to Phase Two.”
    “So my legs are only like this temporarily?” David asked, pleased.
    “Yes. Your general weakness will improve as the sedation continues to wear off. We have put a special device and an infusion tube into the base of your spine to keep your lower body numb. Its the only way you would have been able to tolerate the procedures to be honest. We discovered this very early on in our testing.”
    David was relieved. He closed his eyes and rested his head fully on the soft pillow. When he opened them again, he realised that the doctor was still holding onto his penis and was stroking and admiring it in a curious way.
    “You love it don’t you?” David said, beginning to realise for the first time the possible effect his new massive genitals were going to have on women.
    “Of course I do David, “ she replied, “I have spent years trying to develop the science and techniques and only now has it all come together to create you – our most prized and perfect example!”. She gently placed his penis down between his legs, noting with some pleasure the length it passed along them and just past his knees. She lifted the sheet up and back over his lower body and turned to leave, stopping only to adjust the setting on a small machine beside the base of Davids bed.
    “Get some rest,” she said, “We will be returning within the next few hours with an adjusted enlargement device that has been built and tuned especially for you. You will be able to witness the process fully and see just how far we can go.” With that she stepped through the door and gently closed it behind her.
    David was soon feeling drowsy and fought in vain to keep his eyes open. Finally giving up, he dropped into a deep but fitful sleep.
     
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    This is good but more regular updates would be great?
     
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    This is one great start. Please don't leave us hanging.
     
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    Great stuff. Very interested to see where it goes.
     
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    Great stuff there, can't wait to see where it's going.
     
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    great story
     
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    A little repetative and a wee too much detail attributed to the non important... parts. When juices are flowing it be best to keep them simmering or moving forward. Once backward movement happens it is very difficult to regain an audiences attention, whether it be science fiction..or porn fiction. Great ideas though, original.
     
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    Depends whether you finish with a lighting storm, a thunder storm, a tornado, hurricane or cyclone, or a sunshower.....so many options......................Solar flare....I dunno...
     
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    This has so much potential to be a great story, please don't quit. We would all like to see you do more, maybe even finish it.
     
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    It's been 2 years since OP posted. I don't think he's coming back. :frown1:
     
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    maybe someone should continue the story?
     
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