The mountain cabin

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Act 1 - The trip

I was dating Emily for almost 6 months now, and things were really getting serious. This was to be our first big trip together. Emily's family was in Colorado, and she invited me to come with her for a wedding + meet her family trip.

Both of us were moving up as young professionals, I was a 28 year old manager for an advertising company, while Emily was a hospital administrator. Both of our jobs were very stressful and we really were looking forward to an escape. To add a little relaxation time to our trip, Emily scheduled for us to stay at a mountain top resort/spa for two nights before the wedding. It sounded like an ideal place for us to get some good alone time together before the stress of “meeting the parents” in the following days.

I couldn't be happier with Emily, at 26 she was an absolute knock out. She had mid length brown hair , big green eyes and an unbelievable body. Her large C cup breasts always stood out from her trim, body, and made her the attention of men everywhere she went.

She was extremely driven and hard working, she had always wanted to be a doctor but could not afford medical school and so was working her way up in a hospital. Her steely work ethic really impressed me, she would often work late and even bring work home. The reason she had never settled down with guys is that she had never found a man who could keep up with her professionally, the town we lived in had a lot of dead end job workers in our age group, bartenders, drug users, and I was the one she liked because I was so straight edge and had a great salary and career path.

It was kindof fun seeing guys try to hit on her, she had this cold, evil side to her, built up from years of getting hit on where she could turn guys away with just a look. No one had a chance, she had high standards and needed someone like me.

I am a good looking guy, 6' 2” with blond hair and I exercise and go to the gym often. I work on my body to be muscular and fit, and never had a problem getting girls based on looks alone. But no one had ever made me as horny as Emily. The first time we had sex I only lasted about 2 minutes, he big green eyes looking deep into mine as I thrusted deeply into her just made me explode. I usually couldn't last with her and had to play mind games with myself to keep from cumming too soon.

Our sex life was getting better as I found out what she liked and the idea of a mountain resort sounded great for sex. I was a little disappointed when she asked if her younger sister could join us on the second night.

“Well, I thought we were gonna just have some alone time? Arn't we going to see her when we get to your house anyway”

“She just ended a relationship with her college boyfriend, and I thought she might need some friends. We will still have our time, to … you know” Emily said to me with a knowing glance.

I Laughed and agreed,

“How old is your sister anyway?”

“Shes 20, a junior in college.. She is so pretty and so sweet!" she told me

I decided it might be kindof fun to ge to no her sister away from her family, she was in college so she would probably like drinking with us and having some fun at the resort.

"I guess it runs in the family" I said, patting emily on her tight ass.

"hehe " she giggled, and gave me a kiss. It was going to be a fun few nights.

I put one hand on her leg as I pulled her body close to mine,

"Hey not tonight.." she said, we have to getup early to catch the flight, she protested.

"It's not too late yet..." I said

"Tom. I'm tired and we have to getup early"
Emily was very moody and whenver she got serious I knew it was rarely worth arguing with her.I decided it wasn't worth pushing too hard tonight, so we finished packing and went to sleep, me with a raging hard on , looking forward to tomorrow night in the mountains.



Our flight was delayed and we didn't land in Colorado and until just after dark. We got to the rental car center an had to deal with some problems there too. Apparently with our flight delay, the car rental place had figured we had missed or skipped our pickup time, so they had given our reserved car to a different customer. Emily was not happy. I was arguing mildy with the middle aged man at the customer service desk when she moved me out of way.

"Look, we have a wedding to go to and this car was reserved in advance! I want to talk to your manager right now!" she said angrily, staring coldly at the man. This was her way, you did not want to get on the wrong side of her and he could tell by her tone she meant business. He said he had to speak with someone in the back.

"You don't have to get so angry", I told her

"Well you wern't getting anything done" she scolded me, still riled up. I didn't like when she got in these moods but new I had to pick my battles carefully.

The man came back and said they ha found a car for us, a nice SUV. Nothing like an attractive bossy woman to get a few favors.

The drive to the cabin was miserable, we were in such a hurry to get there before it was too late, and having never been to the area before I made several wrong turns. Emily was still in a bad mood and we hardly talked as the clock ticked passed 9pm. Finally we got to the cabin at 10.

The resort consisted of roughly 10 large log cabins all separate. There was a large outdoor area with at 3 separate hot tubs that immediately caught our eye.

"Lets just check in so we can head out to the hot tubs, have some wine" I suggested

"Ok" Emily said, obviously still frustrated we had gotten in so late.

I knew her sister was coming in the following day, so I wanted to make sure I had some good sex tonight, not knowing how much privacy we would have the following evening.

Emily brought our stuff to our cabin while I checked in. The owner was a nice middle aged man, he gave me the keys and told me the layout. The hot tubs were closed after 11pm so we were not supposed to be out after that. Sure .. I thought.. doesn't seem like people would notice it was so empty and remote. He told me that he was leaving and that his son would be taking over the front desk for the night shift. I thank'd him and gave him a nice tip.

"Have a romantic weekend" he winked at me "My son Mark can help if you need anything"


I hurried back to the room. The cabin was big, two full bedrooms and bathrooms and a large living room and kitchen, there would be plenty of space, even once Emily's sister arrived. We changed into our swimsuits so that we could make our way to the hot tubs but emily got another angry look on her face.

"There arn't enough towels, we have to get some more."

"Let's call the front desk, the guy seemed pretty helpfull, I think his son is coming in to work the late shift"

Emily phoned the front desk

"Hi we are in cabin 4 and we need some towels" she asked.

She listened intently on the phone and seemed like she wasn't hearing what she wanted to hear.

"Well that's just... ok" she finally said and hung up.

"What is it?" I asked

"That idiot, how old is he he sound like a teenager."

"The guy said his son was coming in what's the problem they don't have any towels?"

"No he just said we will have to pick them up at the front desk."

The main office was a couple cabins down from the hot tubs, so we made our way toward the tubs with clothes on top of our bathing suits. It was a beautiful view, a cold clear night, the stars where the brightest I had ever scene.

"You pick out a hot tub I will get the towels" Emily told me

I reached the hot tubs and pulled out my secret flask of alcohol. I figured I could make us a few drinks and Emily would really calm down and relax. I had only gotten glimpse of her in her bathing suit but it was enough to set my mind racing. For all the stress I had to put up with due to Emily's mood swings, her body was really worth it. I couldn't wait to get my hands on her.

I got into the water, it was very hot, and the contrast between the cold Colorado night air and the hot water felt terrific. I waited for what seemed like a long time but was probably only 5 minutes until Emily showed up. I noticed she didn't have any towels and she seemed upset.

'That kid is such an asshole' she announced, taking off her cotton shirt and revealing her black victoria secret bikini.

"He didn't give you any towels?" I said, trying to hide the fact that I was lustfully glazing at her body

"He said they were still in the dryer, and he would bring them out to us, but he just.. "

"What?"

"He is like this teenager and he was just like smiling and staring at me like a horny kid, I got angry at him and he was just like laughing at me.. I hate assholes like him"

"Well I guess this isn't the four seasons but, just relax babe" I said, trying to change the subject

I took in the site of her body as she eased into the tub

"oh it's hot!" she gasped, finally smiling for the first time that day.

"I made us some drinks" I said, moving over to her side of the hot tub

"Perfect" she said, giving me a kiss.


Emily and me had a few drinks and I was feeling her wet body against mine in the tub. I was getting an erection and she felt it pushing against he abdomen. She gave me a knowing look and put her hand on my aching member, lightly stroking it through my swim trunks.

"Oh god that feels really good" I told her as she kissed me deeply on the mouth

"Got em fresh here" I heard a stranger say loudly in the distance. The guy, presumably the manager's son walked up holding two white towels.

"About time" Emily said coldly to him.

He laughed and put the towels on a table a few meters away from our hot tub.

"Least you could do is thank me" he said, pulling out a cigarette and sitting down.

"Oh my god can you bring them too us at least" Emily complained, her voice hardening to the one she always used when she expected men to do things for her.

"Not with that attitude" He laughed, "You will just have to get them here"

Emily was fuming but I told her to calm down

"Hey man, it's freezing cold and we don't want to have to walk over there and get them when we are all wet" I said calmly.

"Well that ain't my problem. It says two towels per cabin, I didn't even have to bring you these ones"
I saw instantly that Emily was right about him, he had this couldn't give a damn look on his face like he owned the place.

"Fine" Emily said

Before I could say anything, Emily pulled herself out of the hot tub and walked quickly and angrily to the towels.

He sure got an eyeful, emily was practically naked and he was blatantly staring at her as she walked toward him. Unbashfull, Emily gave him a disgusted glance as she grabbed the towels. The kid just laughed and puffed out from his cigarette.

He gave a fake cat call whistle and remarked "Not bad, you got a feisty one there, not bad at all" he said to me.

Emily got back in the tub with me and turned her back to him. We sat silently waiting for him to leave.

After he finished his cigarette he got up.

"The name's Mark, let me know if you all need anything else, Ill be working all weekend. Have a good night Tom" as he left, purposefully not wishing a good night to my girlfriend.
 
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Act 2 – The night and next morning

Our moment ruined, I waited a few minutes before moving in close to Emily.

"Just stop ok, I hate this place already." she said

"You are going to let that kid ruin your night?"

"It's not just that, this whole day has been a nightmare" she said

"well we can change that" I said, pulling her body into mine. I quickly reached full hardness once again and put one of her hands onto my stiff cock.

Emily quietly began pulling at my cock again, but she seemed still distant, but I was enjoying the feeling of her body and he hand milking my aching hard on.

After a minute of this she she looked at me like she had turned over a new leaf

"Lets go back to the room and fuck" she said. Her green eyes were radiant and I knew it was now or never.

We practically raced out of the tub and back to our cabin towels and clothes in hand. When we got back, Emily pushed me against the wall, then stepped back, doing something she had never done before.

She stood in front of me showing off her body in her swim suit while I just gazed in anticipation. She slowly moved her hands up her body , highlighting her tight curves and physique. When her hands reached her breasts, she slowly pulled them up, pushing her immense cleavage up in her suit for me to look it.

"Oh my god baby you are so fucking hot" I told her

She went back to her gentle strip tease, dancing slowly and rhythmically. For such a hard working and driven girl, she could really move well. I knew that she didn't really like dancing even with her girl friends but she sure had a talent for it, turning around and showing me her ass as she slowly lowered herself down to the floor and then back up with the balance of a gymnast.

My cock was so hard I thought I was going to cum right there without her even laying a finger on me. My dick was pushing out my bathing suit like a tent.

She turned back around and moved back in on closer to me, again using her hands on herself. She put two hands on her suit bottom and slowly lowered it down, exposing her shaved pussy. Now Emily has got it all, great tits, a tight skinny waist, but her pussy is best I have ever seen, tight and trim, I could almost feel it aching for my cock to stretch out her narrow channel. I started to reach out to touch her but she put my arms back against the wall, showing me that she wanted to be in control. I had never seen her act this way before.

She put both hands on my swim suit and gently pulled it down, freeing my aching penis from all constraints. It stood straigh up at full mast. She leaned in, just lightly touching her chest to mine before slowly rubbing her tits down my stomach and over by cock. I got excited as Emily had rarely given me any kind of oral play before and with he down and almost face level with my cock I was hoping she would take me into her mouth.

Instead she gave my cock a playful slap, "put a condom on stud" she said, we always used condoms even though she was on birth control. I quickly moved toward my bag where I had several of my favorite condoms stored away. I grabbed one and ripped it open as fast as I could, placing it on the tip of my cock and rolling it down my shaft. Emily put one hand on my shoulder and and helped to lift her so that she was straddling me, guiding my cock into her pussy.

The warm feeling of being inside her was almost too much, I knew I wasn't going to last long. Emily started slowly grinding her hips in and out, absorbing my full cock all the way inside of her as deep as I could go. She started pleading in my ear.

"Fuck me Tom. Fuck me hard".

I decided I needed to really give it to her now. I used all my strength to lift her up and cary her to the couch, where I hungrily placed her with me on top. I started humping her faster, working her with every thing that I had.

"I think I'm getting close" she told me.

But it was far too late for me, with one more pump I felt my cock erupting deep inside her, filling the condom with the largest orgasm I had felt in weeks. I kept pumping her, hoping that the last few pumps would get her to orgasm but she was not quite there

"Did you cum ?" she asked

"Yes.. " I said sheepishly

"That's ok, it felt really good" she reasurred me, although obviously not having reached the orgasm she had been building toward.

"Don't worry, I will be fucking you all weekend" I told her.

We showered and went to sleep around 1 am, it had been a long day and both of us were exhausted. It would be great to get a full night sleep and we had the cabin to ourselves until 2 pm when Emily's sister was arriving. I fell into a deep sleep.

We slept late, until nearly 11 am. Emily was just as tired as I was, and I was carefull not to wake her as I got up and started making breakfast. I had bought some eggs on the way up, and I thought I would set her in a good mood by serving her breakfast in bed.

When I brought her some scrambled eggs she gave me a smile

"Aww! You re the best" she said and gave me a kiss. We watched tv in bed, and started planning the day.

"Maybe we could go for a hike, get a little exercise" I suggested.

"well I do have some work to do, i think I will just stay in for today, but you can go if you want" she told me.

I was disapointed that Emily was planning on doing work, she had a hard enough time tearing herself away from it and the last thing she needed was any more stress.

"How about you get one hour of work in while I go for a quick run. Then we can got to the liquor store and stalk up for your sis"

"Sounds good" Emily said.

I changed into workout clothes and prepared to go out into the cold.

"Is it getting cold in here to you?" she asked.

"A little" I said "we are up in the mountains, maybe the doors arn't sealed all the well" I suggested . Emily was playing with the thermostat as I left for my jog.

I thought about the previous night as I ran along a pleasant trail that went though the mountain our cabins were on. It did make me angry that Mark had ruined the hot tub with me and emily, but I was also thinking about how strangely Emily had acted and how I had never seen her be so sexual before. Although she looked so good, she was a very proper girl, she hadn't had many lovers or boyfriends, she had been the valedictorian of her high school, and over achiever who spent most of college studying for med school. Although she Aced the Mcats, she didnt' have enough money for the school she wanted to go to and had put off being a doctor to the more practical matter of paying the bills right away.

I think in many ways she still regretted this, as her work as a hospital administrator was very demanding and yet wasn't what she had always wanted for herself. I made more money than her and could afford to pay for things we both wanted to do, but I decided she must be stressed out. She probably really needed some good sex to get her mind off of things, and that is why she had been acting out of character yesterday. I decided I needed to fuck her good, and make sure she reached orgasm this time.

When I got back to the cabin, Emily was packing stuff up, once again in an angry mode.

"Whats going on?" I asked? "its freezing in here"

"The heat is out in our cabin" she said.

"That douschebag Mark said it will take a few days to bring in a repairman so we are going to have to move cabins"

I was in a fairly good mood from my exercise, so the prospect of moving to a different cabin really didn't bother me, but I wanted to let Emily have a stress free day, and this was not what she needed.

"This is ridiculous. I am going to go talk to him" I told her

"And do what?" she said "Fix the heat? There s nothing you can do" she said, as though she had already considered the options.

"Well I can at least make sure the new cabin is the best one we can get. Make sure he stops being such a little shit to us"

"ok" she said.

I walked to the front desk. Mark was there, checking in an elderly couple in his typical slow, lazy way. It took almost 10 minutes before he looked up at me.

"How was the night Tom? Sorry about the heat but there's nothing I can do for you."

"Listen Mark, me and my girlfriend are here for a very special trip, and so far your service has been terrible. If things don't turn around I am going to be complaining on every Yelp/ trip adviser/ expedia mobile / web / review site how shitty this place is. I am going to tell your father how bad you suck at your job and that you single handedly ruined this vacation for us."

Mark took in my complaint and relaxed into a smile.

"Go ahead, no sweat off my back" he laughed.

"You don't care about your job? How old are you "

"Im 19. My dad owns the place, he doesnt care what some stuck up business man has to say."

"You little shit. Where is the new cabin?"

"Cabin 6, our biggest one." he said

Surprised, I decided my deriding him wasn't accomplishing anything.

"Just give me the keys" I said

"Emily told me you have another guest coming, that will be $100 per night for the extra guest" he said, grinning.

"Thats bullshit, it didnt say anything about a charge per guest on the website" I remarked

Prepared, he pulled out a lengthy document and pointed to the relevant section. It said that each additional guest beyond the pre-paid 2 required a $100 per night fee. He then pointed to the next line, it read: "failure to pay the additional guest fee will result in loss of security deposit and eviction from the premises."

I was getting beyond angry now, I wanted to punch the asshole in the face. He was looking right at me, expecting my reaction. I decided to do the opposite, years in the corporate environment had taught me that when things get heated the worst decision is to overreact. I didnt want to lose the cabin as we had no other options set up, and with Emily's sister already on the way, it would be too much of a problem to blow it all up now.

"Our guest hasn't arrived yet, when she gets here we will pay" I said calmly.

"Excellent" Mark said cockily, as though he had won the argument.

He handed me the keys. I walked back to old cabin still angry but decided I needed to take control of the situation and not let Emily get more upset. She was used to getting things her way and the last thing she needed was to here how he had just strong armed us into paying an extra $100.

"I got us the biggest cabin, cabin 6" I told her.

"Really? Ok lets move our stuff, Stacy just texted me she is almost here.
 
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Soon after we had settled into the new suite, Emilys sister stacy arrived and we welcomed her into the spacious cabin. The first thing I noticed about stacy, aside from her stunning beauty was how tiny she was. She was shorter and thinner than Emily, extremely slender and smaller in demeanor than her sister. Although she was 20 years old, I would have guessed much younger, she had that innocent young girl look to her with bright blue eyes. She didnt have as large a chest as her sister, but she had solid B cup breasts which looked bigger on her small frame. Her blond hair was in a cute bunn on her head as though she had been in a hurry to arrive. I tried to prevent myself from looking to hard at her, as I found myself instantly attracted to her.

Stacy was very bubbly and happy, not what I had expected knowing her sister and that she was coming out of a tough breakup. I let the two girls exchange pleasentries and get caught up.

"Emily tells me you are just the sweetest and best guy Tom! It's so nice to finally meet you" she said with a warm smile.

"It's great to meet you too stacy, hope you can enjoy the mountains with us tonight"

"OH my god Yes! Lets get some drinks !" she said .

"We had only a littl alcohol left, so I let the girls have a drink and talk while I went to get some more alcohol at the local liqour store. When I got back , stacy was in tears, she had clearly been telling Emily about her break up and Emily was consoling her"

"Oh Tom, sorry, I didnt want you to see me cry, I just had a tough week" I felt bad for her, she was such a pretty and sweet girl, even though I barely knew her I felt a protective urge to make her feel better.

"No worries, we all go through tough time... Nothing a little booze won't help" I said cheerfully holding up the new array of drinks I had brought back.

It was still early in the day, but we proceeded to drink fairly heavily as we told stories to Stacy about how we had meet and started dating. Stacy told us about college . She was so bubbly and engaging I could hardly believe her and emily were related. They were both knockouts, but a stacy was much happier and fun to talk to than Emily ever was.

We got to our 3rd or 4th drink before I remembered I still hadn't paid Mark for our extra guest. Just as I was thinking this, we heard a knock on the door.

I opened it to find Mark, tall and lazy grinning ear to ear at the door.

"Oh I see your new guest has arrived" he said cheerily

"Hi I'm stacy!" stacy yelled back to him, clearly tipsy from the alcohol.

Mark did a doule take when he looked at stacy, clearly taken in by her looks.

"Hi stacy, I'm mark, let me show you around your cabin" he said pushing his way past me and into the cabin. Me and Emily gave each other a look trying to figure out what to do, but before we knew it, Mark was leading stacy into the other rooms by the arm, shifting into a sort of fake Tour guide mode
"The longhorn bedroom, built in 1972, this room has hosted such guests as..."
We could here stacy giggling, seemingly eating up Mark's fake helpfulness.

"Lets get rid of him" I told Emily

"Wait.." Emily said.

"Stacy is having a rough time, it might be good for her to get some attention." she said.

"Ok, but as soon as it's not rude lets get him out of here." I said, worried that Mark was going to reveal the extra $100 charge to Emily.

Mark and Stacy came back into the room, arm in arm.

"Hes CUTE" stacy mouthed silently to Emily, an action that almost made me gag.

"Ladies I know you are having a drink, 5 pm is a game of igloo freeze out by the hot tubs! You should come play, he said, looking directly into stacy's eyes."

"YES!" she said without hesitation.

"See you there", mark said before nodding to me to meet him outside.

I stepped outside the cabin door after him.

He gave me a look and I handed him $100 in cash I had taken out of the ATM.

"Thanks man, lets give the girls a good time, come out to the hot tubs in a few min" he said

I gave him a go fuck yourself look as I turned and went back into the cabin.

"Oh my god he is cute and funny, I like him" stacy said.

"He was kindof a jerk to us Stac, but he does seem to like you."

"Oh really? He is so confident" stacy said.

Emily nodded in agreement seemingly giving her approval to my surprise.

"Lets have another drink and go out to the hot tubs, what did he call it? Igloo freeze? " Emily said

"Sounds awful" I said

"Lets just get drunk and have fun" stacy suggested and me and emily decided to go with it.

After another drink, we all changed into swim suits and headed out for the hot tubs.
 
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We got to the hot tub area to find mark sitting in one of the 3 hot tubs, holding a beer in one hand and smoking a cigarette in the other. He was very skinny and I inwardly laughed at the site of him thinking he is some sort of big shot.

“Ok here are the rules” Mark said, putting out his cigarette.

“First, everyone has to take off all their clothes, and get into one of the three hot tubs.“

Emily rolled her eyes,

“give it a break mark, were are not just going to get naked “ Emily snorted. I was glad that she was not on board with this idea.

“No no I havn't finished yet. You see each person goes in one at a time while the other people close their eyes. Then once we are all in the water, the game starts. When anyone yells igloo freeze, Everyone has to cover their eyes unless you are trying to switch tubs. The first person to switch hot tubs gets to make a new rule”

“This is retarded” I said.

“No it sounds fun” said stacy, “ Common we are out in the middle of no where what is the harm”

After much protesting between me and emily, stacy finally convinced us that there was nothing more than some harmless fun. One at a time, we undressed and got into the three hot tubs while every one else covered there eyes.

“No peaking” stacy yelled toward mark as she quickly stripped and slid into one of the three tubs.

“I saw everything” mark joked, prompting a laugh from Stacy.

As I was stripping I was a little concerned about the... erm.. situation.. It was very cold out and as I looked over myself I noticed I was at a less than impressive shrinkage level. I decided I would not be doing any hot tub switching to avoid any embarrassment.

Soon all 4 of us where naked in the three hot tubs. Me and Emily in one, Stacy in another , and Mark in the third. The hot tubs were about 10 feet apart, so there really wasn't much you could see outside of your own tub.


“Ok first lets just get comfortable” Mark said sipping his beer. Then suddenly

“Igloo freeze!” he yelled.

All of us stayed in place waiting for something to happen, but nothing did.

“You see thats just the test, Everyone has to close and cover their eyes unless they are switching tubs”

“Ok ok this just doesnt seem like much fun” Emily suggested, clearly bored. We were all pretty drunk, but even in that state it didn't seem like this game was going to work.

“Lets try it again, this time, everyone has to cover their eyes.”

“Igloo freeze!” yelled Mark.

Me and Emily half mockingly covered our eyes, we could hear frantic splashing, then laughing, as Stacy had run and jumped into the tub with Me and Emily's.

Now mark was alone in one tub, three of us in another, and the third one empty.

“Ok stacy gets to make the first rule”

“Oh yes!” she exclaimed.

“First everyone has to have another drink” Stacy declared.

“A good rule” mark agreed sipping from his beer.

As me , Emily and Stacy drank from our beverages, I became acutely aware that I was sitting with two completely naked women. The bubbles made it impossible to see through the water, but I found myself resisting the urge to sneak glances at stacy.


“Igloo freeze!” stacy suddenly yelled, and we all covered our eyes. The sound of a splash let us know that Mark has switched hot tubs to the one stacy has previously occupied”

“Ok rule time!” mark announced.

Emily and I groaned.

“Ok, my rule is, couples rule, Emily and Tom have to switch tubs together.” Mark said.

“What? Im not going anywhere” Emily said.

“well if you do go, you and tom have to go at the same time” Mark added

“Whatever” Emily said dismissively to Mark.

“Igloo freeze!” Mark yelled. Suddenly things happened fast. Hearing the sound of Mark running toward our hot tub, Emily grabbed me in an effort to get us to switch away from him. Before I knew what was happening, me and emily were running to different hot tub while Mark ran and jumped into the one with Stacy.

It all happened so fast, there really wasnt a chance to see anything and Emily was laughing hysterically. I decided this game was stupid but not all that bad.

“Ok good job, couple gets to make a rule!” Mark said.

Now me and emily were in one tub, Mark and stacy in another, and the third one empty.

Me and emily discussed for a bit, we both decided that we should try to embarress mark as he was sitting dangerously close to Stacy in their hot tub. Emily came up with the rule

“The next igloo freeze, Stacy gets to keep her eyes open and Mark has to go” she laughed.

“Hey ok, a rule is a rule", mark laughed.

“Igloo freeze!” Emily yelled.

Me and Emily covered our eyes. It seemed like this one took longer but we eventually hear the splash to let us know that mark had in fact switched tubs. We opened our eyes and saw Stacy staring in disbelief. Mark was just grinning.

“What happened?” Emily called out to Stacy.

Stacy didnt answer for a second before mouthing something to Emily. I couldn't quite make out what stacy was trying to say, but I thought I saw her mouth the words “Huge” . I didnt like this one bit

“What?” Emily was asking Stacy to clarify.


“Stacy again mouthed something to Emily but it was difficult to make out. The expression that Stacy had on her face was some mixture of shock and excitement.

“Igloo freeze!” Emily yelled, getting up and running to the tub to join Stacy.

Now the two girls were in one tub with me and mark in the other 2. Stacy and Emily were whispering to each other and giggling.

“New rule!” emily said.

“This time both the boys have to go and the girls get to keep their eyes open!” Emily yelled.

I was somewhat dreading this now, as I new that I was not going to look very impressive in my flaccid state running in the cold air. I was not so much worried about Emily, she had seen me naked enough times, but for some reason I was embarrassed for Stacy to see me.

“Igloo freeze!” Stacy yelled with a giggle.

I decided I had to play along, that if I ran fast enough no one would really get a good look. Climbed out of the tub and saw mark doing the same. I headed for his newly vacant tub as he headed for the girls. I sprinted as fast as I could and jumped in. When I looked out I saw that rather than run, Mark had been walking slowly toward the girls, in fact he was still out of the water. Dangling between his leg was an enormous flacid penis, swinging heavly from side to side as he walked. Both Emily and Stacy were just starting right at it.

Mark got just to the edge of the hot tub and rather than jump in, just stood there. Emily's mouth gapped open as she starred at his massive cock in disbelief.

“What do you think girls?” Mark asked .

Ther girls were both silent. Emily was normally aggressive and demeaning in these situations, but she seemed truly in shock at the moment.

“Is it big or small Emily” Mark asked condescendingly.

Surprisingly, Emily answered.

“big” Emily said calmly.

I was suddenly humiliated, here was my serious girlfriend absolutely staring at this man's cock.

“Maybe Tom wants to show you what he's got” Mark continued teasing, loving the attention he was getting from both girls.

I realized now that I was trapped. Although I didnt want to get out of the water, the girls were separated from me. Worse yet, my clothes were over by the hot tub the other three were in.


“I didnt know they could be so big” Stacy said wide eyed, never lifting her eyes from marks cock.

I noticed that Emily's face was turning flush red. I decided to call out to her.

“Emily lets get out of here” I yelled to her, not quite sure what to do.

“OK” she said, not taking her eyes off of Mark's cock and not even really comprehending what I was saying.

“Gonna have to get your clothes first tom, are you afraid of the girls seeing you ?” Mark asked.

“ Emily bring my clothes to me” I yelled to her.

“umm... huh..mrff” emily just mumbled. She was still gazing at Mark, who was now sitting on the edge of the hot tub, letting his huge manhood hang down in front of the two girls sitting in the water.

I was completely trapped, I didn't want the girls to see my tiny shrived cock next to Marks, and at the same time I didnt want to let Emily just go off into her own world with some stranger's dick in her face.

“Emily, now” I said, and for the first time she seemed to remember that I was here and snapped out of her trance.

“Ok, I will bring them” she said. She got out of the tub, but as she was doing so she was clearly showing off her body to mark, arching her back gracefully and showing her full breasts as she pulled herself out. Mark stared at her as she slowly walked by him and picked up her own and my clothes and towel. She gave his dick one last look and made a sort of “wow” gesture with her lips before she walked over to me.

Red faced, I quickly hoped out and wrapped the towel around my waste.

“Lets go back to the room, NOW” I yelled and pulled her forcefully. Emily seemed in no hurry and she looked over at Stacy.

“Im ok , Ill'e stay here.' Stacy said.

Me and Emily walked back to our cabin, me searing with anger and humiliation while Emily still seemed dazed.
 
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Me and Emily proceeded to get into an argument. I was yelling at her for so obviously staring at Mark, and for humiliating me. Was more or less agreeing with me, explaining that she hadn't planned her actions, and she couldn't control the way she felt.

“Look , hes got a big dick, Im sorry I was starring at it but I couldn't help it.” She said, "it was SOO fucking big. I mean, god, no wonder hes so cocky."

“Couldn't help it, you are not some animal, you are a grown women. I thought you were in love with me.” I yelled

“Tom! I do love you , its not about that.”

“Then why would you be looking at a young kid like that?” I asked

“Hes not a kid, hes a man Tom, and Im sorry that hes got a bigger dick than you but you don't need to take it out on me.” She said, becoming annoyed by my lecture.

“I thought you liked my cock” I said


“Well, I did... I mean.. I do... its just.. umm look Tom. There is a difference between love and lust, and I just don't feel that lust with you sometimes.”

“What do you mean, we have sex all the time” I asked.

“Well we do, and I know you like it... its just that, sex with you is what I thought was what I wanted, but , mark's dick is just so much bigger, im not even sure you can compare sex with your cock with his. I always thought it was all just kidnof the same, but, after seeing mark, i don't know if I can think of sex in the same way"


I was hurt by this and stood in stunned silence.

“I guess, I always thought the problem was my fault... and it is... but, today I really felt really horny and it was because Mark has a big dick...”

“Stop talking about mark! This was supposed to be a vacation about us”. I told her more firmly.

“You are right, look lets just try to forget about it, I will make it up to you I promise.”

I agreed and we decided to go out to dinner at a nearby restaurant. I was worried about stacy but Emily didnt seem worrried, “She will be fine, she knows what shes doing” Emily said.

I tried to change the subject and talk about other things during dinner, but Emily seemed distracted and not really interested in talking about anything, even the wedding we were going to the following day.

“Look maybe Im just tired ok, lets go to sleep early tonight” she said.

After dinner we came back to the cabin , but we opened the door to a lurid scene. Mark was naked, holding Tracys legs up as her hands were donw on the couch. He was fucking her from behind, giving her long deep strokes. Unphased by our entry, he was sawing in and out of her with his massive dick. It was massive and thick and I could not believe stacy's little body could fit it into her.

Stacy was clearly enjoying it, with each stroke she gave a moan of pleasure. Emily once again went vacant eyed and her mouth opened wide as she watched her sister get plowed from behind.

“I had to give it to her, Emily. She likes it” Mark said to her.
“Do you like it Stacy?” Mark asked.

“Oh god yes, I love that dick!” Stacy yelled and mark began to thrust more quickly prompting louder moans from stacy.

I pulled Emily to our bedroom, shutting the door, but it did no use. The sound of Mark and stacy fucking whent on for more than hour. What made it worse was Marks cocky taunting as he fucked stacy.

“Hows that dick feel stacy, is it big for you?” he asked

“Its the biggest, oh you have the biggest dick, it's sooo good” she yelled.

After a while we started hearing loud slapping noises.

“Oh my god mark your balls are fucking huge, oh it feels so good those big balls slapping my, holy shit!” stacy moaned.

Throught this whole affair, Emily was in her stunned state, no matter what I tried to say to or do she seemed to only want to listen to the sounds, not to me or anyone else. Eventually the noise stopped and me and emily were able to fall asleep.

As I slept, the sounds of Mark fucking stacy continued in my dreams.

“God I love this dick, this big dick is what Ive needed, Ive needed it for so long!” Stacy moaned.

There were slurping sounds as Stacy gulped on his cock with all her power, but his dick was too big for her little mouth.

At one point in my dream, Emily took a condom out of my bag to give to Mark, but laughing, mark couldnt even fit it around his cock head.

“Damn thats fucking thick!” Emily said.

“Do you want to suck it?” Mark asked Emily

“Yes. You fucking memorized me with that dick and I need to suck it right now!”

Emily was on her knees, throat fucking Mark's massive cock.
“Sorry Tom, Emily needed some real dick” he said.

“You needed real dick didn't you Emily?” he asked her.

Emily just nodded her head.

Emily bobbed her head back and forth. She stopped sucking and kissed Marks cock right on his fat head.

I need you to fuck me, she told him.

"You know im the boss. you have beg me for it." mark said

"Please fuck me, i need it more than anything, i need to feel your big dick inside me."

"You are used to telling men what to do arn't you, I bet you've never been fucked like you needed before"

"Please just put it in, oh please, I need that dick, Mark, it's fucking huge!"

"Get on the table." Mark ordered.

Emily complied and spread her legs for his massive girth. Mark put his massive erection just on top of her pussy, showing her it's size.

"Oh wow, its just so big! Holy shit, Im gonna cum so hard !" Emily was having a massive orgasm as her body clenched and strained. It took almost a minute before she calmed down and mark started teasing her pussy with the head of his cock, gently rubbing it as her pussy we soaked by her own juices.

"Your gonna get it baby, your gonna get the dick you need."

"Oh please, yes youve got it, youve got the dick I need"

"her it comes baby, here it is" Mark starting inching his dick into emily.

"OHHHHhH yesssss" she yelled.

"Thats' good baby, you showed me that body the first night, showed me that body in your bikini. Arch you back for me baby, show what my big dick makes you feel."

"OHHHH god, you fucking own me! shit I love this dick! You are such a big dicked jerk, but i love your cock you big dick jerk!"

"yeah the jerk is gonna make you cum again isnt he" mark teased

"Yes! shit, you fucking asshole your fucking dick is so good ohhh YESSSS!!!"

As Emily went through her second orgasms I woke up from my sleep. Emily wasn't in bed with me. I walked out of my room to find emily on the table, Mark working her with his dick all way inside her. Had I been asleep? Was it just a dream or was this actually happening?

"Im sorry Tom, Emily needs my cock" Mark said to me .

"We wanted to use a condom, but... you condoms don't fit." he said.

"How come they don't fit emily?" he asked

"Because your cock is too fucking big, you fucking stud. Fuck thats so big!" emily moaned as Mark went into her balls deep.

"Ive been saving up to cum in Emily Tom, I knew she was going to get my seed the first night I met her."

"Oh please Mark, emtpy those big balls, i fucking need it!" emily pleaded as he continued fucking her.

"I didnt cum for stacy because I knew Emily needed it more." Mark said

"Oh yes, oh fuck yeah I nee your cum, you got me you asshole, you got me with your huge dick in me and it's so fucking big."


"This is what you get!" Mark yelled looking at her angrily.

"Oh Mark, shit... ohhh....ohhh please its so good"

"Yeah,, yeah. How you feel now that my cocks in you EMily, how you feel now you stuck up bitch " Mark moaned as he erupted into Emily

"OHHHH MY GODD YESSS, Fill me up! oh Thats soo GOOOOOD!" emily moaned, arching her back and putting her hand around Marks neck.

"Milk that big dick off in your tight pussy,"

"Oh yess, I want every drop..Oh mark.. Oh I will do anything for you... Oh your cock is soo good. I love you Mark. No ones ever fucked me so well. Shit those are some big balls, oh fuck....You fucking stud, you fucking filled me like I needed."
 
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Hey Biltmore, glad you started writing again. I really like the type of stories you create. This is probably the best new story on here in a long time.

I have a few suggestions/constructive criticisms though. First of all, I think you missed an opportunity in the last section to have it be even hotter. I think one of the hottest/most promising bits of the build up was when Emily was talking about how seeing Mark's cock made her pretty much completely rethink what sex could be. It would've been really hot to have her saying things, when she was finally experiencing it, about how different getting fucked by a dick like this was, how it doesn't even compare to sex with Tom, how she had never felt anything like this or come this hard, how sex was ruined from now on with smaller guys, things like that. There was a bit of this, but more of the dialogue focused on her thoughts about Mark, rather than this new experience/perspective. Also it would've been really hot for Tom to have come out to the room right before Mark was about to put it in his girlfriend, and have her see Tom but still tell Mark to fuck her, because she just had to feel it inside her.

Other than those suggestions, great story. Also, instead of letting it die, you should have another scene at the wedding, where Mark makes a surprise appearance. Maybe he's a friend of the groom or bride, maybe he works for the catering company on the side (great way to meet hot girls, maybe while wearing some tight pants that show off his obscene bulge). You could have a good dynamic with Tom trying to deal with what happened the night before while meeting Emily's family, while also having to deal with Mark acting cocky around Emily and Stacy. Then maybe one or both of the girls disappears and Tom investigates, walks in on them fucking Mark in the coat room or something like that, while they're moaning about how they had to have that dick in them again, hadn't been about to stop thinking about it, that kind of stuff.

Anyways, great stuff, look forward to reading more of your work.
 

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People really need to use the tags and post at the top of the story what type it is. I started reading thinking it was gonna be a normal m/f and then when stacy arives it was gonna be tom and the 2 girls.
I am so disappointed right now. :frown:
 

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Hey Biltmore, glad you started writing again. I really like the type of stories you create. This is probably the best new story on here in a long time.

I have a few suggestions/constructive criticisms though. First of all, I think you missed an opportunity in the last section to have it be even hotter. I think one of the hottest/most promising bits of the build up was when Emily was talking about how seeing Mark's cock made her pretty much completely rethink what sex could be. It would've been really hot to have her saying things, when she was finally experiencing it, about how different getting fucked by a dick like this was, how it doesn't even compare to sex with Tom, how she had never felt anything like this or come this hard, how sex was ruined from now on with smaller guys, things like that. There was a bit of this, but more of the dialogue focused on her thoughts about Mark, rather than this new experience/perspective. Also it would've been really hot for Tom to have come out to the room right before Mark was about to put it in his girlfriend, and have her see Tom but still tell Mark to fuck her, because she just had to feel it inside her.

Other than those suggestions, great story. Also, instead of letting it die, you should have another scene at the wedding, where Mark makes a surprise appearance. Maybe he's a friend of the groom or bride, maybe he works for the catering company on the side (great way to meet hot girls, maybe while wearing some tight pants that show off his obscene bulge). You could have a good dynamic with Tom trying to deal with what happened the night before while meeting Emily's family, while also having to deal with Mark acting cocky around Emily and Stacy. Then maybe one or both of the girls disappears and Tom investigates, walks in on them fucking Mark in the coat room or something like that, while they're moaning about how they had to have that dick in them again, hadn't been about to stop thinking about it, that kind of stuff.

Anyways, great stuff, look forward to reading more of your work.

Really good suggestions and feedback, I agree with pretty much everything you have said. I wrote the whole thing in one night, it was getting late, and the whole last part was very rushed, while I really forced myself to take my time with the opening. Then again this forum isn't really meant for novels, its more get me interested and make it hot, then "get to the point". I think the hardest part in these kind of stories is coming up with an original "Reveal" of the big dick , there are already so many strip poker, caught in the act stories, the whole idea for the story really came from the seemingly innocent outdoor hot tub game, which may have been a little zany but at least original.

Some people really get turned on by the humiliation factor, others the opposite (see posts above) so I tried to not go too heavy into that and focus more on the relationships between the male and female characters instead of hammering away on poor Tom.

I really get bored writing the non-sexual parts, obviously I am not a writer so my stories do tend to end up looking rushed and not fully flushed out (and full of spelling/grammar mistakes). I think if I had more time and was a better writer, I could have made it into something much more than what it ended up. To bad I don't have an editor! Anyway I appreciate the feedback and next time I have an idea I will try to incorporate it, or even revise/ second draft this one if I feel the urge.