The mysterious pisser

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  1. sammiez

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    It's already past 1 AM as Jack decides to take a short break at the next gas station.
    He had been driving for over 10 hours straight and both he and his truck were thirsty + Jack needed to piss really bad. So he gets off the highway looking for the next gas station and maybe even a small restaurant.
    Being a lucky son of a bitch Jack's eyes catch the lights of a distant roadhouse as his mouth already starts to get wet at the thought of a huge hamburger with fries and a small cesar salad.
    When Jack arrives at the roadhouse he grabs his wallet and secures the truck. He can hardly wait because he hasn't eaten anything for almost half a day but before he can silence the screams of his empty stomach he first of all has to empty his bladder which feels like it's about to explode so Jack quickly rushes to the public restroom.
    With force he pushes the door open, his huge trucker belt already unbuckled and his hand already reaching down his pants to pull out his snake which is about to disgorge its venom.

    Aaaaaaaah, this is better than an orgasm Jack thinks to himself when he's finally able to open the gates wide and let the waters break forth. He leans back with his upper body and lets his head tilt back while his bladder is beginning to empty itself with a powerful stream.
    The lights at the ceiling start to flicker for a second and suddenly Jack sees a stranger standing right next to him at the urinal. He's wearing a long black leather coat and a huge leather hat. He cannot see his face, only the silhouette of the stranger which makes Jack's hair stand up on his neck.
    Not only is the stranger enormously huge and enshrouded in an aura of fear and intimidation but his face almost looks like it's not human. The traits are rough and crude, the skin is dry and sunken in.
    The sight of the stranger sends shivers up and down Jack's spine which makes the almost orgasmic feeling of emptying his ready to burst bladder quickly fade away as he begins to sweat in sheer panic trying to piss himself out of this terrible situation as fast as possible but his bladder is still far from being empty.
    Split seconds which feel like hours, seconds which feel like days. Jack turns his head to the other side trying to blind out every part of the stranger standing right next to him as he suddenly hears a sound which almost makes his blood freeze in his veins.
    The sound of the stranger's urine stream which hits the urinal with unimaginable brute force almost slicing through it as a blowtorch through butter.
    Jack starts to shake all over his body. His eyes are wide open in total terror as he slowly turns his head and looks down trying to find out what unspeakable thing causes this unbearable sound which pierces Jack's eardrums. Slowly his view travels down towards the stranger's crotch....



    [to be continued]
     
    #1 sammiez, Apr 26, 2011
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