The Naked Truth

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  1. rendvoux

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    The Naked Truth by Rendvoux

    An Erotic Short Story in Three Posts


    1. A Saturday Evening by the Pool

    Early one Saturday evening, as it was getting dark Erwin Hillgrand stepped out onto the veranda at the back of his large secluded residence. He gazed out onto his property and noticed his wife Judy swimming in the pool silently, barely noticeable amidst the faint pool lights. She was doing lengths of the pool in an unhurried, serene manner. Erwin headed down towards the pool as Judy dived and turned to swim toward the shallow end. As he came nearer he saw that she was gazing at him, as she gracefully swam nearer and nearer. As she rose steadily out of the pool at the shallow end, Erwin gasped inwardly, Judy was swimming in the nude! She looked
    incredible. Her beautiful voluptuous form was resplendent in the faint glimmering pool lights. Her large slick breasts jutted out as she smiled at him lustfully. The reflection of the light on her moist body gave her a kind of sexual glow that only added to her beauty.

    Judy was a typical voluptuous beauty with large E-cup breasts. However as large as her breasts were, it was not the twins that people fixated upon when they looked at her. Judy had a huge bubble butt. It was high and round and beautifully shaped but there was no getting away from the fact that it was huge. Although her girlfriends teased her about it, calling her a variety of amusing names such "apple bottom"and "J-lo". She made no effort to hid it whatsoever. Judy would always parade it about in the tightest of skirts, swaying it seductively as she walked. Sometimes this habit provoked a certain resentment among her slimmer counterparts at the country club, not that "apple bottom" cared in the slightest. Judy's amazing body never failed to turn Erwin on but he also found it somewhat intimidating. Erwin had often questioned his ability to satisfy his big titted Amazonian lover. His insecurity was down to his poor endowment which was in length and girth, significantly smaller that what most would consider an average sized unit. His insecurity was deepened even further a few months earlier when he discovered that his wife had a sex toy secreted in her bedside locker. He came across the large pink dildo when he was looking for his passport. Although he had said nothing about it to her it did really shock and upset him. He was surprised at its size which was almost twice as large as his penis. He had even gotten a tape measure and measured the proportions of the dildo. Its length was nine inches and its thickness was just short of seven inches. His own penis was only five inches long and quite slim. His wife had chosen to purchase this dildo instead of a smaller one. Clearly, this dildo represented her ideal of a satisfying penis size. Despite all his worries, their sex life had never been better and Judy's desire to jump his bones at every given opportunity was as strong as ever. Tonight would be no exception.

    Judy went over to a deck chair and began to dry the water off her body with a towel. As she was doing this she turned away from Erwin as he approached and bent her glistening body over invitingly. Turning her head she looked at Erwin playfully "Didn't see you there honey" she said teasingly. He swiftly moved up behind her and slapped her right butt cheek and then grabbed the left one tightly. A surge of excitement swept up Judy's body and she responded by bending over even further. Erwin smacked and massaged her large rump until it turned red. He noticed some sun oil on the deckchair. He squeezed some onto his hand and slowly massaged her butt. Judy was in ecstasy and moaned in response. After a minute of this, she climbed onto the half extended deck chair and bent over and buried her head in the cushion so that her pink bottom protruded outward. Erwin sat behind her and kissed and bit gently into her bottom. When Judy shifted and moved her legs slightly apart, Erwin licked her pussy from behind. Judy was becoming wetter and wetter. After a while he broke away and undid his fly and button and dropped his pants and underpants to his ankles and hurriedly kicked them off along with his loafers. Straddling the deckchair he spread his wife's cheeks and inserted his rigid penis into her pussy. It disappeared into her in an instant and he began to fuck her relentlessly. After a few thrusts Erwin's penis slipped out but he put it back and started thrusting again, after a while as Erwin was building up to an orgasm it slipped out again. This time Judy, grabbed his penis with her hand and popped it back in. Doing it doggy style for Erwin was a big turn on but he had to admit it wasn't a practical position due to the shortness of his penis and the full extent of Judy's butt cheeks. Erwin began to get a little tired and slowed the pace, it wouldn't be long until he came, he thought, he would quicken the pace up in a minute or two and orgasm only his penis fell out again. This time however Judy pulled away and sat up. She brought her head underneath Erwin's genitals and licked his penis, "Let me suck you off honey" she said looking up at him. Erwin moaned happily in response and sat down on the deck chair. Judy sucked his penis, its whole shaft disappearing into her mouth and waggled her tongue against it, then she clasped her lips tightly around the base and moved her head up and down. After a minute of this Erwin quickly came in her mouth. Unfazed she continued to lick his penis and sucked all of the cum off until it was clean and moist. After she finished, they both held each other and hugged and kissed each other.

    Erwin wanted to go up to the bed room and start all over again but the tender silence was interrupted by the loud techno ring tone of Judy's cellphone which she had left beside the deckchair. Judy rushed to answer the phone as Erwin put his clothes back on. "Okay, no problem, I will be right over" "Give me about 15 minutes to get ready" said Judy into the phone excitedly before she pressed the off button and turned to Erwin. "Sorry honey" said Judy, I have to go over to Janice's place. She is going to be helping out at the volunteer center next week, she hasn't done it before so she wants me to go over the basics with her" "Yeah sure" said Edwin, "Go ahead" "Are you sure honey, you don't mind". "Sure I'm sure" said Edwin,"I'll just head inside and make myself a sandwich or something". "Thanks hon" said Judy as she quickly gathered up her stuff and headed off into the house. Somewhat dejected, Edwin put his clothes back on and lay back on the deckchair.
     
  2. rendvoux

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    2. A Commotion near the Onsen

    After Judy had gone inside Edwin looked at the glistening azure pool longingly. He wanted to get into the water and relax but he didn't really feel like swimming. Instead he decided he would unwind by spending and hour or two in the hot tub and relax. Firstly Edwin went inside and made himself a large tuna and mayo sandwich and got a beer out of the fridge. After he had prepared his snack he went outside and made his way past the pool to the bottom of the garden. The hot tub was not really a hot tub like most people had, it was a series of baths cut into the natural rock which the landscapers had purposefully revealed at the bottom of the garden. The design of the bath was inspired by the many Japanese onsen baths which he had been in on his business trips to Japan. The heated bath had been created at great expense but it was one of the most truly unique and luxurious features of his well appointed property. Although all of Edwin's neighbours in the neighborhood of Fentwick were extremely wealthy people, nobody had a hot tub quiet as magnificent as Edwin's. Edwin smiled contentedly as he munched on his sandwich and admired the red stone statue of a dragon which was set among the rock formations. He had imported it from China and it was quiet the centerpiece in his private onsen. Most of the neighbors also had a hot tub, often located in the same place at the bottom of the garden, and although the neighbours residence were in close proximity, every one's privacy was assured by the large fence and cluster of trees at the borders.

    It was satisfying that it was so private thought Edwin as it would be really embarrassing if anybody could see him in his naked state with his little acorn out and about. Putting his finished beer aside he lay back deeper into the piping hot water, closed his eyes and soaked contentedly. Edwin relaxed this way for about a half an hour until his pleasant thoughts were interrupted by voices from the nearby property. Over the gargle of the water he though he noticed a woman's voice. He ignored it but a minute later he head a woman's voice followed by a mans loud harsh laugh. The voices had come from the nearby Patterson's house, but of course it wasn't the Patterson's house any more thought Edwin. They had moved away to Austin about a year ago, and the property now belonged to a man know as Robert Holland. Edwin had seen Robert around the neighborhood, however he had never spoken to him at length, nor had he desire to. Unlike most of the residents of Fentwick, Robert was a bit ordinary. He had never even been to university. Robert had not made his money as an ivy-league educated corporate warrior like most of the menfolk of Fentwick but rather as a self-made man. He had left school early and started some kind of fast food franchise, the success of which allowed him to retire in his late 30's after he had sold the business for millions. He had moved to Fentwick after a divorce apparently. Judy had talked about him once, mentioning that he was supposed to be quiet the ladies man. She had said that during the day she had often seen several attractive women going into his house.They might be call girls thought Edwin, truly what a sleazy guy. Suddenly he heard the woman's voice again, he heard short measured pants or moans or something just audible above the noise of the water. That Robert Holland must have one of his women in the hot tub thought Edwin. They were definitely the sounds of a couple at play.

    Determined to find out more, he climbed out and walked quietly over to the fence set behind several lines of trees. Looking up at the top of the fence he noticed a large hole in the fence where a knot in the plank of wood had been. It lay just beside a thick branch of the tree he was standing beside. He climbed up the trunk and lay on the branch. It was able to support his weight but he was a little uncomfortable in his nude state, but if he could only get over near the hole in the fence and look inside, the sight that would greet him, might make it worth the discomfort. He slowly shimmied along the trunk, lying down in order to keep his balance. After a minute of positioning, his head was beside the hole he peered inside. His vision was a little bit limited but he saw the large bath quiet clearly. Suddenly a man entered his frame of vision. The man was standing with his hands at his hips, the water lapping at this thighs. He turned around toward Edwin's direction his torso and head still out of sight. Fuck, thought Edwin with a rapidly rising feeling of disgust and dread. This man's tool was huge, it hung down, well past his equally huge ball sack. The girth of the top half of his shaft was as thick as that of a can of beer, it narrowed slightly toward the end to the size of a can of deodorant. At the end it thickened out again, with his huge mushroom head. He was hung like a quarter horse, but what was truly amazing was the size of his balls. They seemed abnormally big, comically big, especially as he swivelled to the side. His rod slowly began to stiffen and rise.

    The man, presumably Robert began to move his hips slightly and slap his hardening cock from thigh to thigh until it was completely erect. He stopped moving and put his arms by his side. Edwin was stunned, he reckoned that it must have been at least 9 inches. Turning slightly on his side he looked at his own shrunken organ, now it wasn't even acorn sized, it had almost completely disappeared along with his receded nut sack. How pathetic it seemed to Roberts, how embarrassing it would be if they happened to meet naked in the locker room at Fentwick Country Club. Edwin looked thought the hole again. Robert had moved slightly away, and his companion had swam up beside him. She was in front of him and was sucking, giving Robert a blow job. Edwin couldn't see her face, and could only catch glimpses of her jet back hair at the side. It seemed to be tied up, leaving much of her neck exposed. Robert turned around a bit more and soon Edwin's view of the woman was completely obstructed. How would he view the action now?
     
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    3. A Terrifying Sight Behind the Fence

    Edwin decided that he would get a better view by looking over the fence. Slowly and steadily he moved from a lying position to a crouching position. Without making a sound he stood up, balancing himself carefully and using the fence as a support he looked out into the garden. He now had a clear view of the hot tub action, and the sight was truly beautiful. At the edge of the tub the woman was bent over, her huge bottom facing him. Her upper body was bent over the edge of the pool and her head was buried in her arms. Her beautiful big peachy bottom, glistened in the moon light. Robert, and it was Robert, Edwin could see his face now, went over to her and straddled her body, unusually he was facing away from the woman and toward Edwin, his huge tool sticking out menacingly. It soon became apparent what he was doing, Robert had her in some kind of spanking hold, so he could more effectively spank her her huge bottom. And spanking her, he certainly was. Edwin was shocked by how hard her was slapping her bottom, which was changing in colour from pink to red. Edwin had liked to spank his wife bottom but he would never have done it with as much vigor as Robert was doing. After her bottom was well reddened, Robert turned around and slowly eased his penis into her pussy. She moaned and howled in what seemed to be a mixture of shock and pleasure, then she started to squeal like a pig about to be slaughtered as Robert's big cock fucked her inside out and filled her completely. The noises she made were so loud, so coarse, so slutty so completely unlike his Judy who moaned and hummed quietly when they made love. That woman whoever she was, was in complete ecstasy.

    After a while, Robert slowed the pace of his thrusts and then stopped and sighed. He slowly pulled out of the woman as she moaned even louder. Robert spoke "Turn around bitch" he said "I want to come on you face". His voice was harsh and unfeeling. What a crude, thug thought Edwin. The woman responded immediately by turning around and rapidly stuffing Robert's tool into her mouth. It seemed so big, and barely fit into her mouth, it was pouring out of her face. Suddenly every nerve in Edwin's body froze, he recognised the woman's face. Judy, its Judy. The bastards fucking my Judy's mouth with his huge cock. Edwin watched in horror as Robert pulled his cock out of her mouth and jerked it off. After a few seconds of jerking, he spurted a huge load of cum on Judy's face all while she looked up at Robert with a smiling face of love and appreciation.

    Then suddenly, Edwin heard a snap. As the branch snapped he fell backward onto the ground, his head smashing against one of the large rocks below. As he lay in perfect stillness, as darkness swept over him, a trickle of blood ran from his head into the gurgling pool. At the other side of the fence, Robert sat at the edge of the tub, and Judy crouched beside him, low in the water and looking up at him devotedly she gave his now quietening tool one final tender kiss before rising to rest in his arms.

    The End
     
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    With a dick like that he's better off dead anyhow.
     
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