The Shop (mostly MM, Romance and Size)

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    After posting this story in scattered segments previously and finding a few fans, I'm putting it back up as a new topic. This includes everything I have written so far. Expect a strong romantic theme, with borderline unrealistic size/growth fantasy. (Sorry, no 24 inchers in this story hyper-cock fans haha)
    I appreciate feedback and compliments so I know the work is appreciated, so without further ado here it is! Enjoy!
    “Oh god, its so big!”
    I furiously beat my meat as the scene played out on the screen before me. One guy was fucking this cute little girl while he got rammed with another dude’s huge pole from behind. The guy in the middle was moaning the loudest, and I didn’t blame him. The guy in back had to be 7 inches long and as thick as beer can. He forcefully pulled the guy in front back, going deeper than ever. Middle boy looked like he was going to pass out with pleasure.
    The girl pulled away, revealing his 8.5 inch, skinny dick. The guy in back quickly flipped his bottom over and started pounding away. In seconds, bottom boy was moaning all the louder and squirting streams of cum all over his slender abs. This was promptly followed by the top also pulling out and drenching the bottom with puddles of cum.
    As they cooled off, I too blew my load, just before the bottom walked over to the camera and winked “Hope ya liked it Brad!” before shutting it off.
    I sighed to myself as I cleaned up. That was my online buddy Peter and his boyfriend Max, with some girl they picked up at the dance club, and he’d been “kind” enough to send me a video. Of course, while it was hot, it didn’t exactly bolster my self esteem to see my little 4 inch boner compared to those 2 guys.
    I figured I should head down to the porn shop where my buddy Ryan worked, I hadn’t been to see him since he started working there, and maybe he had something that could help me gain even just an inch.
     
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    *ding-a-ling*
    A little bell jingled as I walked in. Looking around, I was pretty impressed. Having never been in here before I hadn’t really expected anything in particular, but the rows upon rows of DVDs would certainly earn more attention after I talked to Ryan.
    Coming around the corner of a shelving unit I found the counter, but with a small surprise. Instead of Ryan, I found a slender guy with auburn hair sitting on the countertop with a porno-comic in his hands. He looked up and smiled at me. “Can I help you?”
    “Well, I’m here looking for my friend Ryan, I thought he was working today…”
    “Oh he is” The guy replied, flashing that smile again. “He’s just on lunch break for an hour. Were you looking for him specifically, or did you have another toy in mind?”
    Well, he certainly wasted no time with the innuendos! I figured he was certainly cute enough and could just as easily help me find what I needed. “Well, I was looking for something to…ya know, bulk me up a little down south…if you catch my drift…”
    “Oh, well then, there’s a few different things you could try out. There’s all these herbal-mumbo-jumbo things I’d normally try and sell ya, but since you’re Ryan’s…friend…I’ll skip that routine.”
    “Ryan and I aren’t together, if that’s what you mean to ask.” Although I appreciated his innuendos and flirty looks, I wanted to set the record straight just so Ryan wouldn’t have to back-pedal later.
    “Oh, of course not, I see” something in his smile told me otherwise, but I went with it. “At any rate, we also have these sheaths that you can use during sexy to help you both enjoy things more, with various textures.” He continued, lightly slipping off the counter and strolling over to a small rack of curiously shaped…things.
    “Those sound interesting…” I admitted, still confused as to what exactly these things were.
    “Yes, they’re all fun, but one of the simplest and time-tested methods are these.” He smiled, moving to the next rack; that almost resembled a rotating rack for jewelry, except this one was filled with something I knew about all too well from pornos. “Cock rings” He grinned.
    “How exactly do those increase size? I thought they only helped keep you hard.”
    “Well yes generally, but we have a few special types that do a little bit more. They help regulate your blood flow so that over time, your erection can hold more blood.”
    “Okay fair enough, how much are they?” I asked, expecting a ridiculously high amount that I’d reject. But I was pleasantly surprised.
    “Well, since you’re so cute an all, I’ll give you this one here for free.” He grinned, for the first time almost blushing himself. “Well, almost free.”
    “Almost..?” I queried, my face bright red as well as he held the cock ring out to me.
    “Well, I gotta get SOMETHING out of this, right? Come a lil’ closer and I’ll tell ya what I have in mind.” His sweet voice was hard to resist, so I did as he asked. He put his hand under my chin, and leaned in to delicately kiss my lips. After only a brief touch, he drew back and handed me the cock ring. “That was all, cutie.” He smiled, walking back to the desk and lightly hoping back up onto it.
    I smiled back, now deep red, and made my way to the door and back to my car.
     
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    Once back at home, I pulled the ring out of my pocket and looked at it. I couldn’t really tell what the material was, but it was clear and somewhat stretchy, yet it seemed that small golden wires ran through the material. It felt cold and metallic to the touch.
    Attached was a little instruction card:
    ~One size fits all
    ~Wear always
    ~Remove to wash in warm water without soap
    ~Enjoy!
    As instructed, I rinsed it with warm water, surprised to find it still seemed cold to the touch after rinsing. I then pulled out my limp cock and slid the ring on with some difficulty, given the softness. With it firmly in place, I zipped my fly back up and went back to working on homework at the computer.
    After a while I felt the ring grow warmer. For a moment I dismissed it, thinking that it must have finally reached the same temperature as my cock. But it continued to warm, and an intense tingling started to spread all throughout my crotch. Ripping my boxers off, I gazed down at my soft 2-incher. It quickly hardened under my gaze to the usual unimpressive 4 inches, and I sighed with pleasure. But the tingling intensified, and my eyes shot open. As I watched in awe, my cock began to grow even longer, harder, thicker. Waves of pleasure began washing out from my cock, over my whole body. “mmmmm oh” I sighed quietly under my breath.
    I grabbed for the ruler off my desk and held it up to my cock just as it swelled past the 5 inch mark. But still it grew, the pleasure building every second. Soon I was swelling past 6 inches, 7 inches, 8, 9, 10! “ooooh God mmmmuh!!” I grew louder as the pleasure increased, my thickening cock pumping with each heartbeat, each throb sending another wave over my whole body. It was getting to be just too much, and with a loud “aaaah!” I fell to my knees, unable to stand the pleasure was so great.
    As I watched, my cock grew even bigger, though more slowly now. It creeped up to the 11 inch mark, and then something truly amazing happened. The skin seemed to stretch as new waves hammered my body, now covered in sweat. I was growing a foreskin!!!! The skin thickened, before sliding back to reveal my swollen head once again. That’s when the pleasure reached its peak, I fell back, now sitting on his knees, as my body quivered with pleasure. “Ooooooh FUCK! My….cock!!!!!” In the full mirror across the room, I could see myself squirming on the floor, such a hot expression of pleasure contorting my face. Finally, with a great thrust of my hips, and an anguished cry “OOOOOOH FUCK SHIIIIIIIIT CUM!!!!!!!!!” A great jet of white goo fired out of my cock like a cannon. I grabbed my dick with both hands as glob after glob launched itself out of my goo gun.
    After 11 squirts, I collapsed in exhaustion on the floor. In the mirror, now half covered in cum, I could barely see myself, lying in a tangle of limbs, face the picture of pure satisfaction.
    I caught my breath, gazing down at my cock as it “shrank” from its erect 11 inches to a plump 6 or so. Grinning to myself over the mess I’d made, I got up to find a towel, loving the feel of the thick dick swinging between my legs. I had no idea how this cock ring had done it, but it worked and that was good enough for me. I dried the splatters of cum from my body, and whipped the mirror clean, pausing to star at myself in the reflection again.
    I was relieved that no one had been home to hear me as I grew, but just as I got dressed again, I heard my dad come home from work. I sighed, since I had been planning to go back to the porn shop, but now I’d have to wait until tomorrow. Just wait till Ryan found out about this…if he hadn’t already.
     
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    The next morning I rolled over only to gasp as jolts of pleasure shot through my body. I looked down to see my huge morning wood tenting up under the sheets. Despite my best attempts to keep it in my boxers last night, it had constantly flopped out, so I slept in the nude. Now, my morning wood was rubbing against the sheets, not only leaving a dark trail of precum, but also teasing my swollen head.
    Pulling the sheets back, I looked down in pride at my throbbing erection, grinning as precum leaked out of my cum-slit. Struck by a sudden thought, I leaned forward and licked my glistening cock-head, instantly smiling at the delicious taste. I had never even come close to reaching my dick with my own mouth before, and here I was licking pre-cum off it with ease. Deciding to explore further, I opened my mouth and sucked in the plump head. Delighted by the sweet taste of pre-cum on my tongue, and the silky feeling of my lips around my cock-head, I greedily gobbled up more until three thick and throbbing inches filled my mouth. Spit laced with precum dripped down my cock, and I reached out with both hands to grasp my shaft firmly, realizing for the first time how genuinely big 11 inches was. With ease, I slid both hands up and down as my mouth worked my head and my tongue teased my cum-slit. The muffled moans of pleasure this drew only enhanced the enjoyment as I could only hum onto my cock, causing it to vibrate slightly. I eagerly worked the shaft with both my hands, sliding my new foreskin up and down and sliding my tongue under it.

    Within moments, I felt the tension building and gripped my rod tightly. Releasing my cock from my mouth, I kept my face close to watch the pre-cum pour out in an almost constant flow. Seconds later, I moaned and lunged onto my cock just as thick jets of warm man-cream gushed from my cum-slit. Grinning all the while, I swallowed as much as I could, which was in fact most of it. The remainder leaked out onto my cock and stomach, which I could have cared less about as I laid back and basked in the enjoyment.


    As the glow faded, I remembered what I had planned for today. Quickly I whipped the cum away and walked around my room looking for something to wear. I still got immense enjoyment out of feeling my plump dick swing back and forth between my thighs, and reluctantly slid into a pair of loose boxers. With minor difficulty, I slipped into a pair of jeans, and grabbed a clean shirt before running downstairs to grab a quick bite on my way out the door. As I drove the short distance to the porn shop, I realized I had had gotten a text from Ryan while I had been jacking off.


    “Alex told me you stopped by yesterday, next time just come to the back door, I’m doing back-stock today”


    I pulled into the parking lot and drove around back to park. Walking towards the big garage door they used for deliveries, I started to hear a most interesting sound.


    “Oh god yes, deeper uh uh uh mmmm!”
     
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    I crept around the corner to see something totally unexpected. Ryan was on his hands and knees, face contorted with a cross of pain and pleasure as a man in a UPS uniform slide a big dildo in and out of his upturned ass. I knew Ryan was a bottom, but “seeing him in action” was something altogether different. The big round bubble but I had always admired him for stuck out from his torn boxers, plump and firm.
    And as if if Ryan begging for it wasn’t hot enough, the delivery guy sure did the trick. His undone button-up shirt showed off a big broad chest, with a healthy amount of hair, leading all the way down to a fuzzy 6-pack and a defined v-cut. Following the luscious happy trail down further, my eyes froze on the main attraction. His thick dick hung down out of his undone fly, wagging with his every move. I had though the dildo was large, 7 inches or so, but even soft this man looked to be more. As I watched, he pulled the dildo out and slapped his cock against Ryan’s crack.
    “You think your greedy little hole can handle the real thing bitch?” He grunted, continuing to slap his cock across Ryan’s ass, quickly growing harder and thicker.
    “Oh please, give it to me, fuck me with your huge cock!” Ryan begged, his grin growing each time that mighty meat thumped against his bubble butt. By now it was fully hard, with the biggest mushroom head I’ve ever seen. It had to be twice as wide as the man’s shaft!
    “Okay, you asked for it, so try not to cry…MUCH.” He grinned as he lowered himself to Ryan’s winking hole. With some degree of patience, he pushed his massive head up against the pink tissue and slowly slid inside, as Ryan positively squirmed under him.
    “Oh GOD your head is so big, you’re gonna split me open!” Ryan whimpered, still clearly enjoying himself despite the discomfort. Another moment, and the head finally went all the way in with a wet “pop” so loud I heard it clearly from outside. Ryan looked like he would pass out, but his grin stayed on. Delivery man show quickly shoved the REST of his (relatively speaking) “thin” cock into Ryan’s ass, causing Ryan to let out a most delicious moan as the delivery guy easily picks him up and begins lifting him up and down along his cock.
    By now my own huge cock was pushing against my jeans and begging to be set free. I gladly obliged, delicately undoing my fly and pulling the monster out of my pants. A thin stream of precum instantly dripped from my cock and on to the ground. I began to slowly work it up and down as the delivery man increased his pace and force, drawing progressively more moans from Ryan.
    “How do you like that cock now little bitch, huh?” He grunted, laying Ryan down again and slowly pulling his mushroom head out (with another equally loud “pop”)
    “Oh I love it, please….put it…back in!” Ryan begged somewhat breathlessly.
    “Oh you still want it? You’re greedy hole hasn’t had enough?” He teased, shoving his whole head back in at once.
    “MMMm uh---huh” Ryan moaned unintelligibly.
    “Ah, so you like that?” Delivery man teased, pulling his head back out and then quickly pushing it back in. He repeated this over and over, before finally burying himself to the hilt again, in one single thrust. Ryan gasped and promptly shot his load all over the ground beneath him. “Oh that’s right, clench your ass on my cock when you cum, yeah that’s the way!” he encouraged. Little did they know, I had just shot my own load on the side of the building next to the door.
    Figuring I should get outa sight before they finished and noticed me, I shoved my semi back inside my jeans and walked around the front of the store, wondering to myself what Alex might be up to.
     
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    *dingaling*
    I strolled in and turned the corner to see Alex once again perched on the counter-top.
    “Well hello there again lovely” He grinned at me, setting down his prono mag. “Back again so soon?”
    “Yeah, Ryan said he’d be working today…I guess he’s on break again?” I played dumb.
    “I suppose you could say that.” He replied with a knowing grin. “Looks as though you’ll just have to suffice for my company instead. Pity eh?”
    “I suppose you could say that.” I countered in kind, winning another smile from his pretty face, accentuating his full lips.
    “Well sadly my shift is over soon, so I won’t be around much longer…but perhaps…” he slid gracefully off the counter-top and crossed the distance between us, delicately placing his hand on my arm “you would care to join me this evening. I had thoughts of going out to Nook tonight to find myself some…eligible company, but it occurs to me now that I could simply bring the eligible company WITH me.”
    I rapidly flushed at the way compliments flew elegantly from his lips, almost at a loss to reply.
    “What’s got you so quiet pretty boy?” He mocked in a quiet, ever so slightly seductive tone, moving his hand from my arm, to my waist.
    “Oh, nothing, just thinking over to be sure I had no other plans tonight…I’d be delighted to go.” I managed to reply in a level voice, my usual ease with words strongly inhibited by his disarming demeanor, and the idea of going to the club with such a beautiful guy.
    “Good, I’ll pick you up at 10.” He grinned, gently squeezing the side of m stomach with his hand before drawing away “Here’s my number, call me a bit before-hand to lemme know you’re ready and give me directions.” He scribbled his number down on the back of a business card and handed it to me. “I’ll see you then lovely boy.” He leaned back in to kiss my cheek as he had on our previous visit, before turning and strolling out the back door behind the counter.

    Standing there in a slight degree of shock, I hardly even noticed Ryan come in, his hair an absolute mess, his clothes in poorly disguised disarray, and thin sheen of sweat on his skin.
    “I guess somebody enjoyed the show?” He asked somewhat breathlessly.
    Snapping out of it, I looked at him in shock. “What?”
    “Don’t play dumb with me mister, as Robbie was leaving I saw your cum-splat on the wall outside.” He taunted me. “Talk about a big load man.” He chuckled.
    “Ha, who are you to poke fun? I wasn’t the one getting his ass turned inside out by the delivery man.” I retorted, chuckling.
    “Hey, its my responsibility to perform….quality control…for all the merchandise we receive. I was just doing my job.” He quipped, sticking his tongue out at me.
    “Well in that case, I think I’ve got something else you’ll wish you could ‘test out”. I walked over to him and grabbed his hand, guiding it to my crotch. Obediently like the uber-bottom he was, he groped my jeans and gasped.
    “Holy crap Brad, what’d you stick in there? A cucumber?”
    “Nope, that’s real.” I gloated “Maybe if you behave yourself I’ll show it to you sometime. For now though, I have a date to prepare for.”
    “Oh, who with?” He shot a skeptical look my way.
    “Alex.” I grinned, and with great satisfaction at the sight of his jaw hit the floor, I turned and walked out to my car.
     
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    I spent a good portion of the day shifting through my entire wardrobe searching for something to wear. Each time I decided on an outfit, I’d lay it out and go do something else, only to return half an hour later because I’d changed my mind. I finally settled on my favorite (and also tightest) jeans which show off my ass (and now the new bulge in the front as well). I selected a black and white top comprised of solid fabric on some portions and fishnet on others, and decorated with silver and gold patterns. I also grabbed a matching belt and choker.
    After calling Alex to confirm our plans, I jumped in the shower and soaped up. Of course, I was drawn to my thick cock and started to play with it, feeling the water flow over me. Before I knew it, that monster was rock hard and throbbing in time to my heartbeat. It was so big I could hardly turn around in the shower stall without whacking it against the wall and sending shivers through my body as the head slid across the smooth, wet surface. Very quickly I had had enough and grasped the monster with both hands, sliding the foreskin up and down. Moments later, my cum cannon gushed out torrents of juice to mix with the shower water, running in think rivulets down my body. Diligently washing it away, I finished up my shower and returned to my room.
    Seeing that it was only 5 minutes to 10, I rushed into my clothes, backing away my heavy semi into the tight pair of briefs I had selected. Hastily doing up my hair, I looked out the window just in time to see a 2008 Camero pull up to the curb, and Alex step out. He almost instinctively looked up and caught my eye. I smiled back down at him and turned away from the window. I shut off the light and almost flew down the stairs and out the door.
    “Well, aren’t you a vision of beauty.” He grinned at me, reaching out his hand to take mine and open the car door for me. As I passed, he leaned in to kiss my cheek before closing the door and walking around to his side.
    He was dressed similarly to myself, jeans that showed off an ass I hadn’t noticed he had, a tight white fishnet shirt with a loose button-up grey shirt over it.

    We shared some small talk on the way and the conversation flowed very naturally. Before I even knew it, he had stopped the car and was getting out. I hurried to follow him across the small parking lot to the short line into the club. Being the only gay club around, Nook was always fairly busy, but we had arrived early enough to miss the heaviest rush. I shivered in the crisp early spring breeze, and Alex reached around from behind me to wrap me in his arms.
    “Better pretty boy?” He whispered in my ear, gently caressing my torso with one hand. I nodded silently, closing my eyes to enjoy the moment.

    Shortly, we were inside and strolling to the dance floor. We slid through the crowd till we found a small opening and began dancing. The music had a good beat, some techno artist I had never heard, or perhaps a remix so overdone I could no longer recognize the original song beneath it. I moved close enough to touch Alex, but not so close as to become sexual, and that seemed to suit him just fine. He knew how to move his body well, and whenever I brushed my hand against his body, I could feel the slender muscles working.
    After a while, a relatively slow song came up, and Alex reached out to put his hand on my waist, drawing me gently closer. I gladly followed and pressed my body against his. Before long the rhythm took over and our bodies moved in time against each other.
    At one point, I slid my leg between Alex’s and grinded into him as some drunk dude bumped me from behind. My thigh was met with the resistance of what felt to be a rather sizeable bulge.
    “Found something you like boy?” He grinned. He must have noticed my small expression of shock. At a loss for words I just blushed and continued dancing.
    “Well don’t be shy.” He invited a few moments later, pulling me close so I was once again pressed against his crotch. With the same motion, his thigh pressed into mine and he grinned up at me triumphantly. “So, it worked I see.”
    With a grace I had come to expect from him, Alex dropped low and then slowly rose, keeping his face close to my body, pausing ever so slightly to bury his face against my bulge before continuing up to kiss me. When we returned to the normal rhythm, now MUCH closer together, I could have sworn I felt his bulge grow…just as mine was.
    “You ready to head out beautiful? It’s getting close to closing.” He asked, caressing my back. I nodded in silent agreement, and he guided me to the door, his hand in the back pocket of my jeans in a clear declaration to those remaining: this boy is mine.
     
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    And finally, The new chapter!

    Alex kept his hand in my back pocket all the way back to the car. He turned to kiss my cheek and whispered “You okay coming back to my place? Or should I drop you off at home?” in a way that I couldn’t say no to. I nodded in reply and noticeably blushed when I saw his delighted smile.
    He opened the door for me and helped me inside. Closing the door, he walked around to the driver’s side and started the car. In my mind I turned over the idea of resting my hand on his thigh, subconsciously moving my arm back and forth between my lap and the armrest. Noticing my indecision, he gently reached out and guided my hand to his leg, releasing it and returning his hand to the stick-shift. The city lights flew by as we raced down the vacant streets pierced only by the satisfying roar of the engine.
    We pulled into a small parking garage and stepped out. Sliding his hand into my back pocket again, Alex guided me to the apartment building door. We paused that the front door, and tilting his head down to me he whispered “Are you sure beautiful boy? I can still take you home.”
    I shook my head gently, and I felt a small wave of warmth radiate out from him. Kissing my cheek, he opened the door and led me up the stairs. His apartment was on the 2nd floor, and immediately upon stepping inside I felt an intangible comfort. Decorated in earth tones and beautiful nick-knacks, there was a feeling of relaxation. Alex pulled me close to tenderly kiss my lips, one hand around my waist and the other caressing my cheek. “Would you like some wine?” I nodded, and he released me to walk into the kitchen.
    As he retrieved glasses and a bottle of red wine, I wandered into the living room covered in tapestries and fluffed with cushions. I jumped slightly when I felt him behind me. “Easy there lovely, don’t want to spill this” he chuckled, nodding at the pair of wine glasses he held. “Shall we go to my bedroom…?” He asked quietly as he handed me one glass
    I drank a small sip before responding. “Well this looks very comfortable, but you decide.” I blushed in response, still somehow taken aback at the seemingly impossible balance of lust and chivalry in this man.
    “I’ve wanted you all night, a little while longer won’t hurt me.” He grinned, sinking onto the couch and gesturing for me to do the same. I sank into the soft fabric and his arms, resting my head naturally against his chest. “Now now, don’t go doing that, I want to be able to reach your lips.” He gently lifted my chin to kiss me, the tart flavor of wine now shared in our kiss. He pulled me closer as the kiss deepened, his hands caressing my back in random patterns.
    “Brad, are you a bottom?” He asked directly when our lips finally parted and had taken another drink from his glass. Containing my shock at the sudden forwardness, I tried to answer coherently.
    “I um…er, might be….”
    “Meaning you have no idea?” He grinned indulgently, rescuing me from my embarrassment. I only nodded in response. “Well tonight you can discover what you are, we can take all the time we need.” He assured me, leaning in for another deep and tender kiss, more urgent this time.
    “Take me to bed?’ I asked breathlessly when he finally released me.
    “It would be my pleasure angel.” He gently pulled me up and guided me down the short hall to his bedroom.
    Flicking on a light-switch, he bathed the room in a purple glow from strands of holiday lights strung around the room. Taking my glass, he pushed me towards the bed, catching me off guard so I continued the motion and sat on the corner of the bed. “There’s plenty of room” he grinned, placing our glasses on the bedside table and climbing onto the bed from the other side. “Come here.” He gestured *come hither* with one finger, with not even the smallest hint of command in his tone yet I was compelled to obey.
    Turning, I crawled across the bed to him, my slender body swaying with a seductive motion I didn’t know I was capable of. Clearly he noticed, because Alex reached out with his finger and lifted my chin to look me in the eyes.
    “You are the most sensual virgin I’ve yet to discover.”
     
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    I hope everyone enjoys it, While I make no promises I'll of course listen to suggestions or critiques.
     
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    Excellent writing and great story ! I feel compelled to read on... You have a fan ! Please, do write more.
     
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    hmm i just stumbled over this and im glad i did seems like a good plot so far, cant wait for more
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    Excellent story, please finish it :)
     
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    Damn! I'm certainly not disappointed that I stumbled across this! I don't really have words for this, but it's got a great plot so far, as much as you can get with this kind of sex story anyways. You've got that growth aspect in there from the beginning, and I'm honestly jealous of Brad. Keep it up
     
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    Expect many more updates soon as I go on spring break this coming week :)
     
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