Yeah I agree with the paragraph thing but jockstrapfetish STFU if you don't Like it don't read it or you make your own story and post it
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Yes, it all could happen that way. Of course, I compare it with the way in which it ought to happen between two young guys. I've been there and done that and by the time the sex happened my teen partner and I were both wanting and needing it. It took us a few weeks to get to anal. I never ever remark about the pain. With a caring partner and lots of time and lubrication what one ought to note is that there is discomfort but then that gives way to the great sensation of being united with a loved one.
You are young; I am old but I would wish for you the kind of happy journey into the fullness of your sexuality that I enjoyed. I have passed through your town several times this year. Next time I will be thinking of you and your story. I DO HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE. Yes, the suggestions about the paragraphs is good. I try to be easy on my eyes by ussing the bigger type.
Thanks for what you have given us so far.
You are young; I am old but I would wish for you the kind of happy journey into the fullness of your sexuality that I enjoyed. I have passed through your town several times this year. Next time I will be thinking of you and your story. I DO HOPE YOU WILL CONTINUE TO WRITE. Yes, the suggestions about the paragraphs is good. I try to be easy on my eyes by ussing the bigger type.
Thanks for what you have given us so far.
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@silvertriumph, dont i want them to be cross eyed? 
at ittibitti, thank you. at charlemange, im sure he likes it, he was just giving me constructive criticism, and at corius, really, youve been to cassopolis?
at ittibitti, thank you. at charlemange, im sure he likes it, he was just giving me constructive criticism, and at corius, really, youve been to cassopolis?:smile:
Now then charlemange do you read only what you want? Would i have said look forward to more if I didn't like it? Hmm well its okay but next time read EVERYTHING okay?:biggrin1:
Now then charlemange do you read only what you want? Would i have said look forward to more if I didn't like it? Hmm well its okay but next time read EVERYTHING okay?:biggrin1:
Good stuff, I'm setting up an email subscription so that I don't miss out on the next chapter!!!
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Oh my god! My first subscription! Well, that I know of.....I am so proud!!!!!!!!
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Don't worry...take your time...
I think it will be worth the wait...:yup:
But remember, break it up into paragraphs for easier reading...
I think it will be worth the wait...:yup:
But remember, break it up into paragraphs for easier reading...
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Oh Goodie!Okay
Since I'm a straight female I'm glad you said MMF, that's perfect.
I agree, please take your time, I'm sure the wait will be worthwhile.
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Thank you There might be some controversial stuff, but only to those who don't pay attention closely
There might be some controversial stuff, but only to those who don't pay attention closelyOkay, I'm a straight female as in not into women at all, but I find male-on-male totally hot just like many men who like to see women together. Put me in the middle of two hunky men so that I have two cocks to enjoy and that's even hotter (for me anyway). :tongue:
Or maybe the guy on top is doing the guy who's doing me, that works too - everyone's getting what they want - if only the world were that perfect!
Or maybe the guy on top is doing the guy who's doing me, that works too - everyone's getting what they want - if only the world were that perfect!
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Awww, you guys are so sweet. I promise that tomorrow I'm going to take a long look at my stash of pictures, and write the best chapter yet!!!!
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I will wait patiently......and even more so if there were pictures to
illustrate the story...:biggrin:
Oh, well it would be nice...
illustrate the story...:biggrin:
Oh, well it would be nice...
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If I knew how to post pictures, I would. The only reason I don't have any in my gallery is because 1) I don't have a camera, and 2) it would start a possible controversy.
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Okay, no luck in breaking the writer's block, so I am currently taking suggestions for Chapter Three of The Surprise of A Lifetime.
I would suggest that you just put the project on hold for now. You may be feeling pressured to write knowing that people are looking forward to more. If you relieve yourself of the pressure to write something may come to you.
Further, writing is a creative outlet, it's best not to try to force it.
Further, writing is a creative outlet, it's best not to try to force it.
