The Waiter

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  1. smally

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    Our sex life had started to grow stale, so we tried to get away one weekend; to try to get back on track. We went to an out of town hotel and were dining in the restaurant, discussing our sex life – a source of frustration for Cindy. We had been together for nearly three years and at a tall and fit 5’-9”, Cindy was as fine now as she was when we met.


    Cindy has always been hard to please, sexually. Before me, all her lovers were on the large side. The range was 6 ½” to almost 8”; all were thick – this didn’t bode well for me, since I’m modestly endowed with a narrow 5 inches. Otherwise, we get along great, but she has been a challenge to me sexually and we’ve tried toys and I’ve had to perform orally every single time we have sex. I love it, though, but she deserves to be satisfied.


    She had just told me that she had been fantasizing about having a 3some with a hung guy joining us. I was shocked enough, then she grinned as she toyed with the shrimp cocktail – saying she needs more than a little shrimp. Just as she was saying this, our waiter came over to deliver the main course. His name was John and he was thin and small; about 5-6, with dark hair. He was smiling and I had no doubt that he heard everything. Cindy smiled back at him and I caught her checking him out.


    Later, I excused myself and went to the men’s room. It was empty and I went to the middle urinal. After a few seconds the waiter, John entered and was at the next urinal. He slowly unzipped his slacks and leaned back as he slowly pulled out his cock. I never look, but I couldn’t help it as he was so far back. I found myself staring at his big cock; it was easily bigger soft than mine is hard. I also was a little shocked because this is the very guy that was flirting with my Cindy. He caught me looking and said “now that you’ve seen mine, you have to show yours”. I let him see mine and could see him smirking too. “You should have to use that one”, he said while pointing at the junior urinal to the right. He was being a little mean, but I had to laugh along. “How do you think you compare?” he asked. “Not very well, I’m afraid”, I said.


    He told me I should keep an eye on my flirty girlfriend; “If she ever felt one of these (pointing at his cock), you’d be in trouble”, he said. I told him that I already was. He smiled, and then washed up. We both walked out and I could see that Cindy saw us talking as I returned.


    “What was that about?” Cindy asked. He knew you were checking him out and told me I should worry about your flirting, I told her. She asked if I had noticed anything; I nodded.


    Within minutes, John returned to clear the plates. He smiled and asked Cindy if she would like any desert; she said she “could go for a nice creamy canolli”. He told her that they didn’t have them on the menu, but if she waited she could have one later; he gets off at 11:00. It was 10.15; she asked for the bill. When he brought it, she paid with her credit card. When he returned with the slip, she drew a line through the tip area. She told him that I would take care of the tip, and then she got up. I gave him $50 and a card with our room number. “Are you sure you can handle this, little man?”, he asked. I told him that I had no choice. “Good”, he said smiling, “see you at 11”.


    Walking away, I realized that I didn’t question or try to refute his “little” remark – I just accepted it. I was sure that he was pleased by my acceptance as he was smiling. I left him and joined Cindy at the bar, where she had been watching. “Are you as intimidated by John as you look?” she asked, smiling- enjoying this all too much.
     
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    more! more!
     
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    MORE!! Fucking fantastic...
     
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    **I realize that I allready posted this beginning of the story, but I've changed it a bit... and I have further plans if it's well received**

    We had a couple drinks at the bar, and then went up to the room. If she had any inhibitions before, they were gone by then. She came over to me, standing in front of me while I sat on the sofa. She drew me toward her and held me – my head resting against her stomach. I looked up and she smiled.


    She was about to get changed, when the phone rang – it was the night manager at the front desk. She said they were going to have to move us to another room; some big-shot needed adjoining rooms. She said that she would give us an upgrade. Someone would be up in a few minutes to help us upstairs.


    A bellboy showed up within minutes and helped us gather and move our stuff upstairs. He was definitely checking out Cindy and she was especially flirty with him in the elevator. We arrived upstairs and the room was huge; a suite. Cindy practically ran over to the huge bed and climbed up onto it. She crossed her shapely legs and gave the bellboy a great view of her thighs. I slipped him a five and he was reluctantly on his way.


    It was 11.10 and there was a knock at the door; I answered it and John entered. He handed me a small bakery box and said “this is for later”. I placed it on the coffee table.
    When I turned, I saw that he moved over to Cindy and she gave him a hug. I thought that she felt something from that hug, the expression on her face showed it.


    Smiling, he said to Cindy,” I want you to see a little contest”. He told her that she will be the judge and had her sit on the edge of the bed. As we stood there, I towered over him at 5’ – 11” to his 5’ – 6” max. He nodded at me, so I unzipped my pants and nervously took out my soft cock. It couldn’t have been any more than 2 inches – because of my nerves. Next, he took out his flaccid cock. It looked so thick and heavy as it hung nearly 6 inches.


    Cindy looked so hot kneeling there, as she stared at his big soft cock, then at mine. When I saw the smile on her face, I started getting hard. Within seconds, I was at my full length – just under 5 inches. She held mine in her left hand and his in her right. He had already bested me in his soft state, but it soon got much worse as he started getting hard. Cindy then held his cock in two hands with about 2 inches sticking out beyond her second hand. I looked down at my cock, and then over at his – once again made to face the truth.


    John was very pleased; he told Cindy “I love it when they realize how badly beaten they are. The look on their face is priceless as the confidence drains from them – realizing they don’t have a chance. “He doesn’t have a chance, does he Cindy?” he asked; Cindy shook her head then took his big cock into her mouth.
     
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    very good when will there be more??
     
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    Thank you for the feedback Duchess, Big, and Mike! I'm happy that there is interests, so I will write some short chapters and add them when I can.
     
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    She was quickly lost in pleasuring his cock, but he eased her off after a few minutes and led her to the end of the bed. The bed was so high; she comfortably bent over on it and rested on her forearms. He motioned for me to sit on the floor, leaning against the bed, just next to her right leg. I had a perfect view of her panty-clad crotch as I looked up and over.

    He told me to relax and watch, then he slid her panty to the side and pressed his cock under her pussy. He was rubbing her clit with the head of his thick cock and I could hear her breath quicken.

    Once again, he told me to relax as I watched his cock enter her. My Cindy let out a guttural moan as his cock spread her wide. He thrusted deeply and she was moaning and writhing like I’ve never seen. I couldn’t believe how her pussy looked as he drew his cock back; her lips were necking as his cock head tugged them outward.

    I was transfixed, unable to look away and he spoke again; “relax and watch each thrust, you will become more relaxed with each one”. I did watch and I did actually get more and more relaxed as his cock worked Cindy over. He also told her, in calming tones, to focus on the feeling of each thrust as well.

    I felt as if I was in a dream, the room was hazy and it seemed like they were in slow-motion. I could see her flat stomach bulge out a little as he drove deep inside her. He said something else to us both, the Cindy began thrashing about, leading her up to an unbelievable climax.

    He pulled out and stood in back of her with his cock standing straight. It was covered with my wife’s hot juices and it shone in the low lighting. “What do you think Cindy, should I let Tim try to have a turn?”, he asked. She begged for him to fuck her some more, so he had her get up.

    He laid on the bed, with his legs spread and hanging over the end of the bed. He told me to watch closely and motioned for me to kneel facing his cock. Next, he had my Cindy climb above his cock, her back to him.

    She eased her pussy down onto his thick shaft, already moaning again. The view was amazing as her pussy swallowed his entire cock; the look on her face was amazing too, so focused. It was as if she was alone with John, like I wasn’t even there.

    Every so often, he would speak to us about focusing and relaxing. It was working too; as if his words were echoing from within my head.

    Cindy was sweating on her forehead and above her upper lip as the action continued at an unbelievable pace. Before long she was thrashing and bucking on his cock, groaning and cooing. He pulled her down fully on his cock and held her tight. I saw his balls get tight, then she practically screamed when he tensed-up and came inside her.

    He wasted no time lifting her off of his glistening cock and I watched intently. Her pussy was drenched and his cum began running out of her gaping pussy and down her leg. The room got real warm and went dark.
     
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    That is really good writing
     
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    I really enjoy your work. The stories aren't long but they are well conceived and well executed.
     
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    thank you for the kind words. should i write a continuation? how far should i take it?
     
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    its great, deffinately keep going, and take it as far as you think it goes :smile:

    really like it though, great work
     
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    loved it

    i love the small penis vs. big penis

    definalty keep going but maybe make the differences even bigger like smaller then 4 and bigger then 8.

    and maybe a gay one?
     
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    Thx for the feedback; it's what keeps me writing... Here is the next chapter...



    I came to and was incredible relaxed. He was counting backwards from 10, then snapped his fingers. I couldn’t look away from her pussy and the cum leaking out. It had started running down her leg, so I moved in and licked it from her leg. It felt so right; I wanted more, soon I was sucking on her swollen pussy, mouthful after mouthful of their mixed juices poured out. Without question, I swallowed it.

    Cindy came again; must have been from my licking and seeing my submission.

    John approached me and stood, looking down at me. His glistening cock was hanging in front of my face. It looked so much larger than before, maybe 9 ½ inches and still hard after fucking my wife. I looked down at my own and it seemed even smaller than before. I didn’t care at that point, things were different now. I knew I could never satisfy Cindy after tonight; I have a new role. I looked up at John’s cock and saw a string of cum hanging from it. I knew I couldn’t let it fall to the floor, so I opened my mouth and leaned in, catching it.

    An incredible feeling washed over me as I tasted the cum from his powerful cock. I looked up at John and saw the pleased look on his face; his pleasure made me feel good. He spoke to Cindy and I heard him say something about his cum being a trigger. I didn’t know what it meant; all I knew was that I liked it.

    I had tasted my own, in the past, and didn’t really like it. I would eat it from Cindy’s pussy after we fucked; she loved it and it usually made her cum. His was different; I wanted more, I needed more.

    He stepped back and began swinging his cock around in front of my, while he gave me more instructions. He swung it side to side, up and down, and even stroked a little. I watched intently and, once again, I saw a string of cum form from his tip.

    He told me to open my mouth, but don’t try to touch his cock…just wait with my mouth open. He teased my mouth with his cock. Occasionally he would brush his cock against my mouth, frustrating me.

    Finally he let it rest, half hard in my mouth. “Suck me hard”, he commanded. I licked and sucked and he was hard again within seconds. Watch this, he said, as he moved between Cindy’s legs and plunged deeply on the first stroke.

    The look on her face was amazing; she was so wild with his cock in her. He rode her to 3 more orgasms, each stronger than the next. Finally he came in her as well as over her stomach.

    Cindy called me over, saying “lick me off now, Timmy”. I cleaned them both again, feeling the warm overpowering feeling as I ate it.

    Cindy said “no cummies for you tonight, maybe next time”
     
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    awsome keep going
     
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    I'm looking forward to more.
     
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    An excellent story! Checked the prof. & see there are more which will keep me very happy, thanx!:smile:!
     
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