Thomas The Boy Next Door ( Gay / Bi )

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  1. Talesof_Ted

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    About three months ago a family moved into the flat next door to mine , The mother was about 40 the kind of woman who likes a drink and lives for her next giro ( Social security cheque) some would say she had the face of a hard life. Two daughters one still at school and a son who was 18 years old. Although the kids were not in any way ugly they were a bit unkempt I suppose Rough would be the way to describe them. So I was wary of them . first impression was that they would steal the eyes out your head . Within two weeks the mother had been to my door borrowing everything from a paint brush to some bread and eggs but she was pleasant enough and in a way I felt sorry for her. The kids seamed a bit wild and she did not seam to have any control over them .
    Anyway one afternoon the door bell rings and when I answered it the boy from next door is there asking if I had any cigarette papers . I knew his name was Thomas because his mother had mentioned his name to me on a few occasions. But this was the first time that I had actually been face to face with Thomas. He was standing there in a blue un ironed polo shirt Grey Nike track suit bottoms and a pair of off white socks that must have been on his feet for a few days at least But the thing I noticed most was his teeth they were perfectly straight and dazzling white I must admit this threw me a bit because I would have expected him to have a mouth like his mothers best described as like a row of condemned buildings.
    I invited Thomas into the flat I always had some papers around as I like a joint now and again to help me sleep . Thomas tells me that he is gasping for a smoke and has some dog ends he wanted to roll a smoke from . I offered him a cigarette which he was happy to take . He noticed the PC and asked if I had internet access . I told him that I had so he asked if it would be alright for him to check the Job centre web site to see if there was any jobs available that he could apply for. Not being one to miss an opportunity of having the company of hot young guy in my flat I was only too happy to allow him the use of my PC. He was quite a chatty young guy a pleasant smiley face he stood about five foot 10 inches tall with Jet black hair not long but not short either .
    Within seconds he had found the site he wanted and started to search for jobs in our area . I was sort of leaning over him keeping him right on the pc I could smell that musky stale sweat that some young guys emit not a strong unpleasant smell but that musky smell some guys get after they have been playing football or running about and I must admit I found it arousing it had been a while since I’d had the opportunity to get so close to that smell and a sexy young guy. But he was my next door neighbour and I hardly knew him I did not want any trouble so I controlled my urges and tried to hide the excitement building inside my nylon football shorts. After about fifteen minutes of searching and not finding any suitable jobs Thomas thanked me and on the way out asked if he could take the few dog ends from the ashtray I normally only smoke about half of my cigarette before stubbing them out and as I would never relight them I was happy to let him have them and off he went back to his own flat.


    Just after 8pm the door bell went again and when I answered it Thomas was standing there again still in the same clothes as earlier. Sorry to bother you again Teddy I was wondering if you have any more dog ends you could let me have. Once again I invited him in to the flat and gave him a cigarette and told him to help himself to the buts that had built up since he had last emptied my ashtray a couple of hours earlier. I was having a few beers and was just about to get another from the fridge when the door bell had rang seizing the opportunity to get to know my new neighbor a little better I offered him a bottle which he accepted gladly.

    We chatted for about an hour as he drank two beers I even rolled a joint and we shared it then he went back to his own flat with a handful of my dog ends and a couple of cigs. As soon as he was away I had my cock out and began wanking thinking about Thomas and his cute tight arse and soon I was catching a handful of creamy cum I even battered out another thinking of his smell and cute smile before I went to sleep that night.

    The following afternoon I had only been in from work about five minutes when the door bell rang I was hoping that it would be Thomas he had taken up quite a bit of my thoughts that afternoon my gaydar was telling me I could be on to something with Thomas and I was excited about the possibilities I was fantasizing about in my head.
    He was still wearing exactly the same clothes as he had on the day before even the socks
    “Hi Teddy would it be ok if I check the job site web page to see if there are any new jobs on it today”. He asked beaming me one of his sexy smiles.

    “Yea com’on in bud”

    When he came in he had two cigarettes in his hand then when he sat in front of the PC he offered me one of them but I said no as it was not my brand and liked to stick to the one kind. He lit one and put the other behind his ear. As I switched on the PC for him. And as the PC booted up I went through to the Kitchen to make a cup of tea for us both. When I came back in Thomas was a little flustered.

    “I think I clicked the wrong thing Teddy” he said in a worried voice.
    I looked at the screen and he was on the Gaydar log on page.. I had told him just to click on the job center web site that I had stored in favorites the day before but he had obviously clicked the wrong link and was at the gaydar homepage.
    I was a bit embarrassed and quickly clicked on the site he needed and got him on to the job center page. I went back to the kitchen my face still bright red and brought through the tea gave him a cup and tried to make small talk asking about his day trying to cover up my awkwardness .

    I could tell Thomas was also a bit embarrassed by what he had saw it was obvious that it was a gay website by the two handsome semi naked men and the words GAYDAR. And the fact that it was listed in my favorites would have made it clear that it was a site I used. I broke the Ice;
    “I never realized that Gaydar advertised on the job centre web site you thinking of getting a job as a gay model”. His face had turned as red as mine had been only a minute or so before.
    “No I just must have clicked onthe wrong link sorry”.
    “Not your fault mate that’s just me being a pervert sitting here at night getting myself all excited I should be more careful about what I save in my favorites”.

    Thomas lit the cigarette from behind his ear and took a mouthful of his tea. .

    “So do you go on that site Teddy”?

    “Yea every night mate I get a laugh chatting up all the gay boys in the chat room”

    “Do you pretend to be gay then Teddy”.

    “Yea I noise them up saying I will meet them and shag them.
    “Cool that sounds like a laugh”.
    “It is mate you should come in some night and go on it’s good fun”.
    “What time do you go on at then?”
    Normally about 10pm for a couple of hours”.
    “Would it be ok if I come in tonight then.
    “Sure why not”. I replied trying to hide the growing organ that was beginning to show in my working jeans.

    Thomas drunk his tea as he checked the job centre web site but once again nothing suitable was on offer he finished the tea then went back to his own flat.
    I took a shower had my supper and relaxed in front of the TV to watch the soaps in my usual spot sprawled across the sofa in my tea shirt football shorts. I booted up the PC about 9pm then bang on 10pm The door bell rang and it was Thomas for the second time that night. When I opened the door to him it was clear that he had just showered his hair was still wet and the smell of soap and deodorant was very fresh he had changed his clothing and looked pretty cute as he stood there hair wet and his smiling face.

    “Come in bud you ready for some fun”

    “Why not anything has to be better than sitting bored in there”

    Before he came in I had created an e/mail address for him and a profile on Gaydar. Young handsome guy looking for older for cock fun. I showed him how to log in to the chat room and told him to pretend he was gay.

    Within minutes he was getting bombarded I left him to go and get a couple of beers. “Teddy he wants to know what I like doing” Thomas called out to me
    I brought the beers through

    “Tell him you like to get your dick sucked and your arse rimmed” .
    “What is rimmed” .
    Getting your arse hole licked out” .
    “Yuk that sounds minging” .
    “I know but it feels great that is one of the things guys do to each other just type it” .

    I had to tell him to shut some out, as he could not finish what he was typing before another profile cut in wanting a private chat with the new chicken. With in half an hour he was getting right into it asking me what to say and sending the message I suggested.
    He soon had all the patter Kwel, wiggles, and blushes, Top, Bottom he sounded like a real little slut and it was clear that was really enjoying it.

    I went through to get some more beers for us and he began shouting at the top of his voice through the house.
    “Teddy we wants to know if I have ever had a carrot up my arse”.

    I nearly fainted I ran back through to the living room I was sure his mother would have been banging the door down any minute wanting to know what was going on he shouted he had shouted that loud.
    “Jesus Thomas don’t shout like that every one in the building can hear you”.
    “Sorry Teddy I got carried away” “will I say I have”
    “Yea tell him you use them as a Dildo all the time” .

    At around 1 am I had to tell him it was time to go as I had work in the morning and had to get to bed I had so wished that I was taking him with me but I was still unsure about making a move on him. I had stopped hiding the hardon in my shorts as I stood looking over his shoulder watching what he was typing. He must have noticed it more than once but I could not see if he was getting as excited as me because of the way he was sitting slouched over the desk and he had not risen from the seat once since he took the position 3 hours earlier. As Thomas made his way out I walked him to the door I took the chance and patted his arse just before I opened the door

    “Good night mate and no wanking to all the old poofs you were chatting up tonight” .

    “Don’t worry Teddy I will think of you when I have my bedtime wank tonight”.
    He winked and smiled as he left. Fuck I so much wanted to drag him back in the door and carry him into my bedroom.

    Part 2 cumming soon ®talesofted@live.co.uk
     
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    PART 2

    The next afternoon Tam the name he told me he preferred to be called must have been waiting behind his door listening for me coming home because before I got to the kitchen with my shopping he was my the door.

    “You going on the net tonight Teddy”

    “Yea having a few beers and a laugh mate Friday nights are good fun on it”.

    “Is it ok if I come in again I really enjoyed that last night sorry if I hogged your computer”

    “Yea sure you can” “But for fuck sake don’t tell your mother what you are doing on there or I will get the blame of corrupting you”.

    “it’s cool I told her we were playing games on the pc”. “Is it ok if I bring in a few cans of lager my Mum is staying at my aunties tonight with my sisters and she is getting me a few beers before she goes”.

    “Yea no bother mate” Tell you what wear a pair of Football shorts if you have any so we can take some body pics for your profile it will get you more hits”.
    “Ha Ha but I don’t want them to see my face though”
    “Of course not only I get to see that”

    At seven thirty Tam was at the door again six cans of tenants in a bag and a complete change of clothes. He had on a freshly Ironed blue and white striped Polo shirt cream colored trakies and clean white socks but no trainers. He sat next to the pc I had already logged on to check for any messages on my own profile. I then switched on to his when he came in.

    He had eleven messages waiting nine from guys over 40 one from a thirty year old and one from a twenty one year old. I stood leaning over him As he read them the musky boy smell was gone and replaced with a clean just out the bath smell I was impressed although I still love that sweaty boy smell. Tam opened one of his cans and I got a bottle of bud from the fridge and put the rest of his cans in there to chill. By the time I got back he had two conversations on the go he chatted away to a number of guys for about an hour asking me what to say next. and as a lot of them were asking him for photos. I suggested he log off for ten minutes so we could take some pics of him and Tam agreed. So he logged off

    “I have got on football shorts under my trackies” Tam said

    “Let’s make them interesting we can take a few as you are then some of you stripping down to your shorts it will make them look more seductive”

    ”Yea fine where will I stand and remember don’t put my face in the pic”

    “I wont I promise” “Just lay across the sofa”

    I snapped a few of him fully clothed then I began to direct him

    “Take off a sock”
    “Nice now the other”
    “Great” “now take off your shirt slowly”
    “Brilliant you have a sexy body” “Now very slowly slide down your trackies let me get a few shots”
    “Get on your knees hands behind your head”

    Tam – “No way I cant I have a fucking hardon”

    Me – “All the better makes the pics look really good”

    Tam – “Makes me look like a pervert you mean”

    Me – “That’s why we get on both perverts together ha ha “
    “Fuck sake is that for real your fucking huge”

    I don’t consider my cock small I have a good 6.5 inches and have only ever seen two real life cocks that where bigger than mine hard and both had been on older men than Thomas. Two from around 40 is a good average but this thing looked massive behind the shiny white nylon material I was not only surprised but also shocked that this young guy was packing so much meat I had caught sight of his bulge a few times but it did not suggest that he was anything more than average.

    “Push out pose”
    “Lay back now “
    “Head back further grab hold of your cock”
    “Great” “Now stretch out across the sofa again left leg up right down”
    “Fuck what a cock you have there” “ Tent your shorts with it”
    “Amazing you will drive them mental with that thing”
    “Let it stick out of the waist band”

    Tam “Fuck not sure about that don’t want my cock all over the www”

    Me “No one will know who it is will they I am not putting your face in the frame”

    Tam “You’re the boss” “Fuck it lets go for it give them a full show to wank over”

    Me- “ Right about 2 inches out the waistband” “Lovely pull your foreskin back”
    “What a cock you have boy what size is that thing”

    Tam – “ Don’t know 7 – 8 inches I think”

    Me – “That’s bigger than that” “Right now your balls over the waistband”
    “Oh fuck you’re a porn star you could earn a fortune with that thing”
    “Stroke it” “hold your balls let your cock rest against your arm”
    ”Now bend over lets get a couple of ass and hole shots and then we can get these beauties posted”

    “I have an Idea let me get my measuring tape” I went to the kitchen I had a fabric measuring tape the kind a tailor would use I took it back through to my living room where Tam was still laying across my sofa with his massive hardon on full view I walked over got on my knees I placed the start of the tape at the bottom of his shaft then stretched it up to the tip showing Tam how to hold it for the picture 8.9 inches (22.6 cm) the measurement showed I snapped a few body shots and a few close up clearly showing the length .

    Tam - “Right that’s enough I need to piss”

    Tam left the room to go to the toilet I connected the camera to the PC and began uploading the pics to his profile. My own cock rock solid at the thought of what this boy had to play with. I heard Tam flush the toilet and shouted out for him to bring beers from the fridge on the way back. By the time he got back I had put up his clothed body shots on his profile and the cock ones in private to send with messages.

    A couple of minutes lter he was back in the chat rooms getting bombarded once more
    He had learned to control his chat only allowing two chat windows open at a time but he was getting constant requests for private chat.

    He was chatting with a guy more than twice his age the guy was telling Tam what he would like to do to him. I could see that Tom was getting fidgety I went over to the PC and knelt on the floor beside the seat. I could see that Tam was trying his best to hide his cock area without making it too obvious. I got the feeling that he was getting panicky with me being so close to him so I moved away back to the sofa.

    He had now finished his second can and I had went to get him and myself another drink. When I came back he was sitting on one of the sofa.

    “You had enough Tam”.
    “No just taking a rest fed up typing will go back on in a little while”
    He offered me a cig from his pack but I declined as again as it was not my brand. He lit the cig then asked if he could use my bathroom.
    “You don’t have to ask feel free whenever you need to go”

    When he stood up I noticed the little damp patch Just were his cock would have been sitting it was only the size of a thumb print but it was clear that it was a pre cum stain and not from his beer or piss. As he left the room I said
    “If you need a hand to shake that thing dry give me a shout”
    Tam- “I might take you up on that when I get a little drunker” he said giving me a wink at the same time.

    When he came back through I watched closely and could see that he had a hefty movement I assumed he must be still at least semi hard. I was getting really turned on but was trying to convince myself that it would be stupid to try anything on incase it went wrong and he kicked off.
    We sat chatting and drinking our beer for about 20 minutes all the time the thought Go for it Running through my head but I was still not sure if it went wrong it would be hard to avoid him when he only stayed next door. I managed to resist the strong temptation and he went back on the computer and logged back in to Gaydar.

    He was typing away then out of the blue he said
    Tam -“Do you wank yourself Teddy”.
    Me - “Yea of course I do mate all the time”.
    Tam - “ Me too you just cant beat a good wank can you”
    Me – “Well if I had a cock your size I could probably give myself a blow job that would beat a wank but hey a wank is still good”.
    Tam – “ Is my cock bigger than yours”?
    Me- “Fuck yea bud a good two inches at least Big Boy”

    Tam’s face flushed then said “Some of my mates at school used to call me the weapon it was embarrassing”

    Me – Oh so you are in the habit of showing off your cock to your mates”

    Tam – “Fuck off they would see it in the showers or changing room”

    Me – “Well I hope you had a wank to me last night like you promised” .

    “Of course I did I hope you had one to me after feeling my arse.
    “oh yea sure did” I replied
    He smiled at me then said
    “I bet you have probably met some of these guys and done stuff with them ha ha “
    “Of course I have cant beat a nice cock to suck on when your horny”

    My cock was now fully erect I just got the feeling he was enjoying the conversation He had turned and was typing away again. I moved over beside the PC again kneeling beside him I put my hand on his thigh and began rubbing gently Thomas just looked down at me and smiled.
    “Did you enjoy the wank to me I asked”.
    “Yea it was good hope you enjoyed the feel at my arse”.
    “It was lovely” I replied “but I would love to have felt your cock as well”.
    Tam sat bolt upright You could see his hard cock pressing to get out of his shorts I moved my hand up and began to caress his balls and cock through the leg of the shorts I Moved my hand up the leg and freed his massive young dick.
    I took his cock out and started to wank him for a few seconds then I could resist no longer I moved in with my mouth and for the first time got a taste of this massive uncut cock the softness of the coating skin over his rock solid dick a delight in my mouth the salty tasting head got the full attention of my tongue Tam just sat back and let me enjoy his meat no doubt enjoying the pleasure it was giving to him just as much as me. .(r) talesofted@live.co.uk

    Hope your enjoying my stories looking for some feedback on my writing style guys

    Part 3 Cumming Soon
     
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    I'm guessing by the colloquial style there's a hint of Scottish to your story writing. It certainly is fun to read & reminds me of a friend from Govan. He always seemed to have every fit young ned from Govan visit his house, tho didn't have the joys of the Net. Hell I only recently got him upgraded to DVDs & mobile phones.
    I'm looking forward to part 3.
     
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    @ Scotrandom
    Awe fur fuck sake so much fur tryin tae hide who ah um. Aye mucker the Gorbals
    only about 3 miles away fae Govan the bad side a Glesga.
    And thanks for the comment so much for the world wide web ha ha
    Teddy
     
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    Hot story please continue with more!
     
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    You allways write well - allways makes me so fekkin horny
     
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    PART 3


    As my tongue found and licked up a fresh blob of precum Tam’s hand was on my head and he was pushing me on to his monster of a cock as he pushed in to my mouth he was bucking as I was sucking but his length was way too much for me. Tam groaned and moaned as I worked my tongue around the head of his cock pushing back his long foreskin I worked his cock with everything I had. After about five minutes of sucking him he pushed me away. “Stop I am nearly Cumming Teddy take off your shorts so I can suck you”.

    Me- “Let’s go through to my bed”

    Tam- “Lead the way Mr”

    I could not believe how easily Tam was playing along with my game it was almost as if the tables had been turned and he was seducing me rather than the other way about I had been worried that when it came to me actually trying to touch him that he would panic and run for the hills something that has happened to me on a few occasions before but if anything he was encouraging my lust for him.

    I lead Tam through to my bedroom by the cock and he followed on like a good little puppy once inside the bedroom our lust exploded our lips crashed and tongues explored each others mouths minutes later we are rolling around on the bed stripping each other of the clothing we had on. Almost as soon as we had stripped we were in the 69 position sucking on each others cocks like hungry wolves on a fresh kill.

    This guy had been here before he knew how to suck cock and he tried with all his might to get his cock as deep in my throat as possible this kid was as cock hungry as I was. This was all far more satisfying than I could ever have hoped for but try as I might I found it impossible to take more than about 6 inches of this young hung studs meat but he was swallowing my six and a half as if it was a little two incher.

    We turned back face to face once again our lips met and our tongues explored as our naked bodies ground against each others this was full blown passion. I was used to leading the way seducing a boy a little at a time testing the waters to see how far I could get with him. I was the one being taught a lesson here not only was he proving to be a confident and experienced lover he was leading the way showing me how to please him he knew where to find my erogenous zones and how to tease them. Tam guided my cock to the crack of his arse he even provided the lubrication by rubbing his spit on to my cock.

    “Just knock at my door he whimpered sensually just hit it off my hole and withdraw I love that feeling”

    And I did as I was instructed grinding my cock between his tight cheeks my foreskin and his hole meeting like lips in a passionate kiss. The plucking sensation as I pulled back away again sending a current through my whole body I could feel the pressure building up in my balls but it was far too early for me to cum. I slid down his chest licking and sucking his nipples then drawing my tongue down his happy trail I licked the length of this massive young cock by far the biggest I had ever had the pleasure of handling. I gripped that long shaft as I kissed each of his balls then following through licking and kissing under his balls moving slowly and lustfully towards his hot throbbing hole.

    My tongue probed and my lips sucked as his muscles relaxed opening his tight young hole for me to explore further. I licked and flicked my tongue as deep inside him as I could reach Thomas moaned and groaned with pleasure one of his hands joining mine around his long leaking boy pole we stroked in tandem as one of my fingers joined my tongue in exploring his pulsing boy hole.

    “Oh fuck me Teddy give me your big daddy meat let me be your bitch” Thomas moaned in my ear.

    Listening to his words was driving me crazy I could have never dreamed in a million years that Thomas could be such a wonderful lover he knew what he wanted and was begging me to give it to him. I reached over to my bed side cabinet and got some condoms and my bottle of liquid silk lube. Thomas took the condom ripped it open with his teeth and fitted the condom on me as I lubed up his hole with the slimy liquid then with the condom fitted he wrapped his legs around my waist pulling me towards him he guided my rock hard cock into position then I felt the grip as I pushed through his ring into the warmth of his insides his moans telling me he loved what he was getting.

    “Kiss me Teddy I love being kissed as I get fucked” “fuck me Teddy fuck me hard”

    I pounded him like I had never pounded a guy before this was how it should be this was love making this was what I had read about and watched in porn movies. Yea I had fucked guys before but never like this it was always with caution trying not to hurt them being gentle and slow. This was how it should be this was fast hard and deep fucking my heart raced as the grip of his legs tightened around my waist pulling every little fraction of my cock inside him my balls slapped off his ass cheeks as his long hard leaking cock slid up and down my belly using our bodies to wank him. I could just not hold off any longer I felt my eyes turn in my head as 10,000 volts shook my body and I pumped squirt after squirt of my man milk into the condom deep inside this sexy young guy I honestly thought my heart was going to burst as I struggled to get breath and still my cock pumped out my creamy goo I am sure I must have came for about two minutes it was by far the most intense ejaculation that I had ever experienced.

    I collapsed fighting for breath on to Thomas’s chest he had obviously shot a wad himself as the slimy mess spread between our belly’s I wrapped my fingers around the end of the condom and as gently as possible with drew my still throbbing cock from inside my young lover there was no doubt I had never saw so much cum inside a condom easily twice as much as normal. I tied a knot in the rubber and reached for my cigarette packet I took two cigs out lit them and handed one to Thomas.

    As we lay there recovering and chatting Thomas told me that the minute he had set eyes on me he knew I was going to fuck him. He had only recently came out of a secret relationship with a man 10 years older than me and fuck that man had taught him well. Last night as I finished this story Thomas came in to read the final draft of course it was not possible to recreate that first time but by God we tried our hardest but hey that’s another story..
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    TOA on speed-dial "Taxi fur Gorbals" Lmfao!
    It's ok Ted - Secrets safe. It just evokes memories of a friend.
    Loved the tale. Hope there will be more.
     
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    Quite simply brilliant. You have an amazing style and this is such a great story. I remember "pretending to noise up the gays" online with my mate when we were younger... good times ;)
     
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    Excellent story, well written, very exciting. I had much fun reading it.
    Thanks..
     
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