Tommy's tales of size and conquests (MF, MFF) - redux

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  1. maxgirth

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    Long term visitors to this section of the LPSG site may have noticed some popular old stories have been deleted as a result of recent changes in the forum rules. These have outlawed some scenarios that previously were OK, including stories set in high school, even where the participants were identified as seniors.

    Among these deleted stories was Tommy's Tales of Size and Conquests (MF, MFF), featuring the awakening and first experiences of a shy horsehung boy (size 12-13", enlarged part way through the series to 14"+ by an encounter with a girl well versed in the ways of the vacuum pump). This tale was brilliantly started in 2009 by waytoohungforyou and continued by him through 9 excellent pages - readers may, like me, have fond memories of Tommy's encounters with breasty lab partner Mary, tall, slutty Jill, the amazing Goth Faith, and movie house handjob specialist Jessie. waytoohungforyou left the story unfinished in 2010 to move on to other things and I took it up from there, finishing Tommy's encounter with Jessie and introducing slender redhead cheer captain Sarah Masterman into the mix.

    Soooooooo.... After some conversations with the mods, I've got the OK to retool the tale to a college setting. Which I'm happy to do, and take it on from there when I have time. Problem is, having salvaged the whole epic from various caches, I find it currently runs to an amazing 56,000 words of top quality hardcore.

    My own view is that TTSOC was one of the top two or three stories on the site, which is why I took it on and kept it going. But retooling (hem) half a novel's worth of text is going to take time. So I have one question for you guys: is there much demand, if any, for me to do it? Does anyone want Tommy back, in college, as a freshman, but with everything else pretty much as was?

    Let me know. If there's demand I'll get to it by Christmas.
     
  2. mereynolds2

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    i would love to see that continued
     
  3. ConanTheBarber

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    I'd like to see it.
    I also think the adaptation might not take all that much time.

    Mind you, 56,000 words isn't half a novel ... it's a novel, albeit a shortish one.
    Kurt Vonnegut's Slaughterhouse-Five, for example, has 49,459 words.
    (At the other extreme, Leo Tolstoy's War and Peace has 587,287 words.)

    But never mind.
    Crank 'er out.
    A new generation will read and enjoy it.
     
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    I would love to see it as well.
     
  5. bimmer210

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    Awesome story, totally do it
     
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    yes. dear god yes.
     
  7. D_Peter Potamus

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    I really enjoyed all those stories, especially when they involved sex with married women, and shocking less well-endowed males with his huge cock.
    Thanks for taking this on!!
     
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    yes - please rework it - obviously the times and places have to change - (college dorm room, frat party, etc.) but the interaction between a woman and his huge cock can remain the same!
     
  9. xaviercm20

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    Max,
    Consider it a gift to the ages. Posterity will look favorably on your effort.!
    YES, by all means Yes, please update and repost.
    X
     
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    bring it back for those who never read them
     
  11. dailymoon00

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    Oh yes, please!
     
  12. uhhmichael

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    i say yes
     
  13. maxgirth

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    Thanks for the feedback. I guess it's worth tackling. Stand by - I will try to get the first sections up by Christmas, but they're the ones that will need most retooling, so we'll see.

    In the meantime, for those unfamiliar with Tommy, here he is in action with the phenomenal Faith...

    “I feel like I’m stroking a horse!” she squealed.

    Tommy nodded in agreement as she continued stroking his manhood. All the day's activities had taken their toll on it however, and it still looked red and bit raw and Tommy was unsure if he could cum again.

    Then without warning she leaned back resting on one arm, and started to pull his thoroughly lubricated and thick crown into her body with the other. The feeling was so intense and there was so much pressure that Tommy thought for sure he was going to tear her apart.

    “Fuck Faith you are too tight!” he yelped “I don’t want to hurt you!”

    “Don't you worry sweetie, it's small but very, very hungry!” she smiled passionately.

    Remembering the effect that making these sorts of challenging comments to her had earlier, he wasn’t surprised when she proceeded pulling even harder on his shaft, trying to stuff his lemon sized head into her tiny womb. Slowly but surely the head made it’s way into her body, and he watched in amazement as the thick part of his helmet pushed past her outer lips causing her tiny pussy to stretch obscenely.

    “Oh my God, you are splitting me in two” she half screamed into the night air “I can’t believe how thick your fucking cock is!”

    Ever diligent with her pulling she continued the assault on her tiny opening stuffing more and more of his turgid flesh into her. She made sure to pump it in and out slightly as it went in order to keep things lubricated, and Tommy could do nothing but watch in horror as she violently penetrated herself with his tool. He watched her pussy intently as she went on, noting on each outward thrust how her inner lips clung to his flesh and extended at least an inch from her body, and on the inward thrust her pussy lips seemed to fold in on themselves and disappear into her hole with more of his dick. Her exposed clit was also at full attention, and on each thrust the hooded creature danced and skipped across the top of his flesh causing her to shudder.

    After several minutes of her pulling and stretching accompanied by a lot of moaning, at least six inches of fat hard dick was now invading her snatch in slow in and out movements, and on each thrust he could clearly see her belly go up and down indicating how much space his prick was occupying inside her.

    “Ohhhhhhh Goooooddddddd….” She moaned eyes clamped completely her head tossing side to side.

    She then removed her hand from Tommy’s appendage in order to lower herself to her back. Once there she put her legs over his shoulders and grabbed the edge of the hot tub with her hands.

    “Now fuck me!” she grunted.

    And with redhead extraordinaire Sarah Masterman...

    Tommy helped the girl sit up. Then wrapped one hand around Sarah’s hair and, twisting, forced her gently to her knees. Then he pressed down again so until the girl was on all fours on the soaking floor. And then he lowered himself and knelt so that he was directly behind her and his body was shielding hers from the pounding spray. With Tommy’s hand still in her hair and his strong young arms holding her down, Sarah now had no choice but to surrender her pale body up to him. Focusing intently on the task now facing him, Tommy carefully positioned himself with his knees just inside hers and his calves pressing hers outwards, so that he was forcing her legs apart in such a way she could not have closed them again even had she wanted to. Her copper colored cunt was now defenseless and fully exposed to the gigantic, shaven, bloated dick that jerked and jutted proudly from between his own firm thighs.

    Through the splashing of the water, Tommy just caught the sharp little gasp, half lust, half fear, that Sarah made as her breath caught in her throat involuntarily. He could sense her skinny body tensing as it anticipated his invasion.

    He leaned forward so her mouth was beside her left ear and his chest was against her back, and he felt her trembling. Gently, he stroked her thick red hair. ‘Just try to relax,’ he murmured.

    ‘I am trying. I can’t,’ Sarah moaned.

    ‘I know it’s scary, a bit. But I promise that you’re going to surprise yourself with what you can take and how much you like it.’ He sounded like he meant it, but she shuddered convulsively once again.

    ‘It is going to hurt, isn’t it? Jesus, Tommy, you’re freaking enormous, you know you are. And it’s not just the length either, it’s the thickness. I’ve never even thought about putting something near that size inside of me before’

    ‘I’m not going to hurt you, Sarah. I’ll take it easy, I promise. And your body will adjust to me, I swear it will. You can tell me if I go too deep.’

    ‘Tommy, I do want to. I want him… you. But I’m really, really small down there. When I play with myself, even a finger seems tight.’

    ‘You’ve just taken three of my fingers,’ he reminded her. He kissed the side of her neck, little butterfly kisses that made her gasp again. ‘Look, Sarah, I’m not going to lie to you. It’s not going to feel like anything you’ve had with other guys. It’s gonna stretch you, and you’re gonna feel filled up like never before. But it’s gonna be a good feeling, right?’

    With his left arm, Tommy reached down around her shoulder, over her firm breasts to her waist and hugged her to him. He felt one rock hard nipple jut into his elbow. She was badly turned on and he judged that she just needed a convincer. With his right hand, he reached between her legs and gently thumbed her clit, forcing it back to rub against its hood. She shook again, a long jagged pulse of pleasure that started somewhere around her shoulders and passed slowly and thrillingly through her lithe torso to her toes. As it passed, she exhaled with a low gasp, then sucked another shuddering breath in through her teeth.

    ‘Tell me what it will be like,' she whispered. 'What do the other girls say?’ ​
     
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    And finally with movie theater cock fetishist Jessie...
    Still kneeling, staring intently, with her face only an inch or two away from him, the cinema girl now wrapped both her hands together around Tommy’s dick. Swollen as it still was by its testing session in the pump, it had to be the best part of nine inches round, she calculated. Jessie felt half sad but more than half relieved that she’d not dared to test the monster in her pussy. And still not quite hard, she thought to herself as she gripped the swollen cockflesh harder.

    This was quite true. Tommy had never felt bigger than he did right now, yet – bloated and heavy though his penis was – the session in Jessie’s vacuum tube had left his monster yielding and a little spongy. Jessie curved her hands round until her thumbs met on the thick ridge that ran along its base, and as she jerked with ever-firmer strokes, she pushed both hard against her partner’s corpus spongiosum, squeezing Tommy’s urethra half-closed once again.

    A second or two later, she redoubled her assault, leaning forward to stretch her mouth as far over the immensity of the boy’s glans as it would go, jabbing at his piss-slit with her tongue, running her piercing across and along the hypersensitive spot at the base of his glans, then lapping and sucking on the whole of the head with all her might. For Tommy, at the receiving end, the sensation was unreal. He felt as though his monster dick might burst. Under Jessie’s urgent ministration, his apple-sized crown had swollen further still, and it now stood nearly half an inch proud of the shaft, by now dribbling a veritable Amazon of pre-cum. As Jessie gagged and pulled her face away, Tommy could see through his cum-clouded eyes that the clear liquid was mixed now, as he neared his end, with ever thicker, longer strands of off-white sperm. Jessie’s kept sucking and lapping noisily at the boy’s darkening pole. Then, as she drained his drool in obscene gulps, he heard her begin to murmur – more to his cock, it seemed, than she did to him.

    ‘That’s it, baby, that’s it, come on now,' she said. ‘Let it go, let it shoot. Cum for me. It’s all right, sweet, I promise, promise, swear to you. It’s all OK, relax and cum, shoot it, shoot it now, oh please. I swear, I swear, I won’t stop you, I won’t stop you again. I’m done. It’s time, cum now, cum hard, I’m waiting for you, baby, cum.’

    And she said this, Jessie began at last to jerk Tommy’s cock with the firm, fast strokes he sensed would quickly bring him to almighty orgasm. He was almost unconscious with pleasure as the first great stream of pent-up cum jetted from his aching balls and coursed along his vastly swollen dick, emerging finally at high pressure from the tip. That blast was followed by another, and another, seemingly endlessly. But, as Jessie had promised, he felt his orgasm more intensely than before, sensed his seedmakers churning, the muscles in his cock contracting powerfully, rhythmically. Above all, he felt a pleasure so enduring, so extreme he doubted it could ever be surpassed. It seemed almost as if he had never come before.

    This was glory. The great, jagged pulses of an immense orgasm sent Tommy into spasm. Never, never had he felt so good. A rich tide of warmth built unstoppably from his tightening balls, and wave after wave of ecstasy crashed through brain and body, surging through every last corner of his being like some liquid fire. Bolts of pure pleasure built swiftly from the muscles that were twitching at the base of his vast cock until the sensation became all but unbearable, and if it had not been for the relief that Jesse was supplying with her firm, unyielding hands, Tommy really thought that he might have passed out altogether.

    As it was, the girl’s firm double-handed jacking had finally begun to scratch the nagging itch in Tommy’s pencil-thick urethra, and his angry, pulsing dick was at last enjoying the one thing it demanded: the pure release of cumming and cumming and cumming again. Now, each one of Jesse’s urgent twelve-inch strokes was speeding a sticky bolt of thick white man-scum along the length of Tommy’s endless sperm canal. The boiling jizz went scudding up his spasming length and it exploded from his body in thick, heavy-scented ropes. The little usherette kneeling before him flinched involuntarily as large gobs of cum shot with great force onto her face, spattering her cheeks and teeth, roping into her hair, half-filling her open mouth and dripping from her nose and chin in viscous, swaying strands to spatter on the concrete floor below her. But Tommy was still not done. As yet another tsunami of pleasure crashed down over him, his toes curled, his teeth clenched, and every muscle tensed in the agony of orgasm. It seemed to him as though his whole body had become nothing but one stupendous cock, all veins and blood and aching stiffness, its only purpose pumping sperm, its only pleasure spastic twitching, existing for no reason other than to feel the endless joy of spewing out cum – cum enough to give Jessie a child, cum for Faith, Mary and Jill, gouts and gouts and gouts of sperm, enough for every girl in his college, every girl in his town, every girl in the entire world.
     
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    Love those snippets. Can't wait to read the full thing once it's retooled.
     
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    Im looking forward to this.
     
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    Instead of retooling (ha ha), why not just have it start after he graduates and is in college? He can go to school locally so the characters remain, or go off to school and meet others... as well as come home for breaks and the summer where the old crew can come back in...
     
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    Yeah, I'd really like to see the story back up.
     
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    Would love to see it again, as you said one of the top stories to ever grace LPSG easy.
     
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    i think its a little past christmas...
     
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