Well, it doesn't look good.
However, I will say this:
I don't read the fiction site much, but she's the best writer in there. If I remember correctly from another thread, she works with written words (as an editor or some such).
He/she has tremendous talent with words, and if Veronica Divine is one of her literary creations, I'm not going to rain on her parade.
I'll just say this: KEEP WRITING, VERONICA!!
and as a side note I would just like to say your nick is very accurate : o )