Here's your chance to get all Ebert on me. As some of you may have noticed, I'm writing a story in the Fictitious Stories section. I'd like to get some honest opinions about it. If you don't like gay erotica then of course don't bother. It is long (maybe too long?). If you have 5-10 minutes, please take a look and tell me what you think of it. This is my way of returning something to the community. I've had some encouraging comments though given the differential between views and comments, I'm left wondering if the effort wouldn't be better spent on shorter pieces (or none at all!:biggrin. I intend to write in other gender genres as well as I acknowledge this sort of thing won't appeal to everyone:tongue:. I want to write stories that will, eventually, appeal to a broad range of people as this community is a broad range of people. PM me or whatever you'd like. I'm not seeking adulation, just an honest critique and all of your comments PMed to me will be kept confidential. Please speak freely and if you have suggested topics you'd like to see, please let me know. I want to give back something of value. Prolthalamium Thank you for your help. It is greatly appreciated and please be frank. I'm from New York. I can take it.