I'm trying to see if some of my short stories are good enough to sell. All feedback is appreciated.
Raymond is a very classy and successful business man. He owned an upscale hotel that was making him millions, but he didn't let that go to his head. He was humble and very down to earth. He would often hang out with a guy named Matthew. They traveled everywhere together, but it seemed like an odd pairing since Matthew was nowhere near as wealthy...hell he barely had 2 nickels to rub together. Somehow Raymond bonded with Matthew eventhough they came from different sides of the tracks. They became best friends and remaned close throughout the years. Matthew had intense feelings for Raymond that he hid for many years. He didn't want his lustful thoughts to ruin their friendship. Little did he know he wasn't the only one having lustful thoughts.
One Saturday afternoon Raymond picked up Matthew and asked him to go shopping with him. Matthew loved to shop so he happily went along. After a long drive they eventually arrived at this upscale clothing store on the other side of town. Only the high rollers shopped here. Matthew was in heaven, but pretty bummed that he could only window shop in such a pricey store. While the two of them were carelessly browsing they stumbled upon a bin filled with very nice underwear. Suddenly Matthew hears "Pick out 5 pair of underwear that you think I would like". "What?" Matthew said. You heard me. Pick out 5 pair for me and I'll see if I like them". Hesitant, but intrigued, Matthew very carefully picked out 5 pair. When he handed them to Raymond he glanced at them and whispered "Someone's a little freak". Matthew embarrassingly smiled and they proceeded to the register to pay for the underwear.
"That will be $490 please" said the sales clerk. "Damn these are expensive! Let me pick something else." Matthew said clearly in sticker shock. "Don't worry about it. I got it!" Raymond boasted while swiping his debit card. They left the store, had lunch and Raymond dropped Matthew off at his apartment. "I've got some business to take care of, but I will be back later. "Ok" Matthew said while Raymond drove off. Raymond returned to Matthew's house 4 hours later with a packet in his hand. He sat down in the living room and asked Matthew what he was doing. "I'm trying to find a video game to play. I'm bored as hell." He said. Raymond seized the moment and said "I know a game we could play". He told Matthew to come with him. They 2 hoped into Raymond's Lexus and drove to an abandoned park several miles outside of the city. Nobody would know they were there. "What the hell are we doing here?" Raymond whispered. "You'll see." Raymond stated while walking towards a picnic table.
The two men sat down across from each other and without warning Raymond opened the packet placing 5 pictures on the table. They were pictures of the underwear he had purchased earlier. After he placed all of the pictures on the table Raymond said something that shocked Matthew. "If you can guess what pair of underwear I have on right now I'll let you see me naked." WHAT?!?!?! Are you serious?!?! Matthew yelled. Yes I'm serious. I knew you liked me a long damn time ago. I've seen you checking me out when you thought I wasn't looking. I don't mind if you see me naked. "You're joking, right?" Matthew stated. "Do I look like I'm joking?" Smirked Raymond. Matthew became nervous as hell looking at the pictures. "C'mon. This is innocent fun" Raymond stated, but we all know innocence doesn't last very long.
Do I at least get a hint? Matthew said. Only one hint...black. That was absolutely no help considering that all 5 pair were black. They both laughed and Matthew proceded to pick. After 2 guesses Matthew got it right and Raymond stood up proceeding to undress, showing off his well toned 6'0 tall golden brown body. His rock hard abs and toned legs were to die for. Not to mention his soft round jiggly ass. Raymond seductively danced around in the underwear turning Matthew on. He didn't give a damn that they were in public or that they could get caught. He was enjoying being the center of attention. Just before Raymond removed his underwear he pulled Matthew up off the seat and forced him to get on his knees.
"Let me show you what HD really stands for." Raymond said in a sultry voice before removing his underwear and exposing his gorgeous 10 inch thick hard dick that hit Matthew in the face. Matthew was in complete shock that he was seeing the massive amount of meat that Raymond possessed. His balls were hanging low and pre-cum was dripping from the tip. "Well, I'm waiting." Raymond said. Shocked to the core Matthew whispered "HERE?!?!? Are you Insane?!?" "Aw c'mon Matthew, where's your sense of adventure?" Raymond said urging him on. This offer was too good to pass up. Matthew started sucking Raymond's gorgeous dick while Ray's balls slapped his chin. After 25 minutes Raymond finally shot a large load of cum down Matthew's throat. Matthew swallowed every sticky bit of it as if it was icing on a cake. After a few laughs the men got dressed and left the park.
"Damn you really know what you are doing. I have never had a blowjob that good" Raymond said grinning. Still in shock that he just sucked his best friend's dick Matthew politely said "Thanks" while a joyful smile on his face. It was late so the men decided to go to Raymond's house and hop into bed. Before Matthew went to the guest room Raymond said "Get some rest. I have a task for you tomorrow." Matthew nervously said ok and proceeded to go to bed. Matthew laid awake wondering what task Raymond had in mind before he drifted off to sleep. At 5:00 am the men woke up, showered and left to go to Raymond's hotel. The 30 minute car ride was filled with sexual innuendos and visions of the night before. Matthew could only imagine what was going to take place once they got to the hotel.
They arrived to the hotel long before front desk staff was scheduled to be there. The hotel was at full capacity and most people were still in their rooms asleep. It was so quiet you could've heard a pin drop. The men walked through the lobby and stepped into the glass elevator. Raymond opened a hidden slot to reveal a secret button. As he pressed it he told Matthew that this button was taking them to the roof of the hotel. The elevator ride was intense and the sexual tension was so thick you could've cut it with a knife. They arrived on the roof overlooking the gorgeous city. This is where Raymond turned up the heat by pushing Matthew against the wall and kissing him while shoving his hand down Matthew's pants. Matthew was very hesitant to allow this, but eventually gave in to his friend. The passionate kissing and groping of his dick was feeling too good and he didn't want Raymond to stop. The rooftop set the stage for one of Raymond insane sexual desires. Barebacking his friend on the roof of his hotel.
He grabbed Matthew and pushed him down onto a lounge chair that was conveniently placed on the roof. He proceeded to lick Matthew's entire body from head to toe before thrusting his tongue deep into Matthew's bubbly ass. Raymond's slippery tongue drove Matthew over the edge and turned him into a helpless sex slave for Raymond to do whatever the hell he wanted to with. For the next 2 hours the roof was set ablaze with Raymond's sexual perversions. Anal Beads, candle wax, neck biting, hair pulling...it seemed like nothing was off limits. Matthew was viscously fucked in every position imaginable and he enjoyed every moment of it. Raymond was in absolute Ecstasy as he had dreamed of this moment for over 10 years. All of his lust for his friend was being released and he treated his friend like a $2 whore. His rock hard dick demolished Matthew's sore hole and the sex underneath the hot sun left him weak. When Raymond felt that he could no longer hold his load he let out a loud grunt and shot his hot cum deep inside of Matthew's ass. Matthew screamed in shock and pleasure as he felt his best friend's creamy load deep inside his hole. The men laid there exhausted under the sun's brutal rays relishing in the fact that their slutty dreams had just become reality.
They cleaned up their mess and took a secret elevator that only Raymond has access to. This led them to a hidden room within the hotel that Raymond would sometimes hide in while he observed the employees to see if they were goofing off. The men showered and took a much needed nap. Matthew finally woke up hours later to the sight of Raymond's lovely dick right in front his face. He looked up at his best friend as if he was awaiting his instructions. "It's time for you to drain my balls again baby". Matthew happily followed orders and sucked every ounce of cum out of Raymond's balls. Raymond loved this so much that he decided to put Matthew on staff as his personal whore...err assistant. Now Matt was being paid to give his best friend several blow jobs daily and booty as much as possible. Life can't get much better than that.
Raymond is a very classy and successful business man. He owned an upscale hotel that was making him millions, but he didn't let that go to his head. He was humble and very down to earth. He would often hang out with a guy named Matthew. They traveled everywhere together, but it seemed like an odd pairing since Matthew was nowhere near as wealthy...hell he barely had 2 nickels to rub together. Somehow Raymond bonded with Matthew eventhough they came from different sides of the tracks. They became best friends and remaned close throughout the years. Matthew had intense feelings for Raymond that he hid for many years. He didn't want his lustful thoughts to ruin their friendship. Little did he know he wasn't the only one having lustful thoughts.
One Saturday afternoon Raymond picked up Matthew and asked him to go shopping with him. Matthew loved to shop so he happily went along. After a long drive they eventually arrived at this upscale clothing store on the other side of town. Only the high rollers shopped here. Matthew was in heaven, but pretty bummed that he could only window shop in such a pricey store. While the two of them were carelessly browsing they stumbled upon a bin filled with very nice underwear. Suddenly Matthew hears "Pick out 5 pair of underwear that you think I would like". "What?" Matthew said. You heard me. Pick out 5 pair for me and I'll see if I like them". Hesitant, but intrigued, Matthew very carefully picked out 5 pair. When he handed them to Raymond he glanced at them and whispered "Someone's a little freak". Matthew embarrassingly smiled and they proceeded to the register to pay for the underwear.
"That will be $490 please" said the sales clerk. "Damn these are expensive! Let me pick something else." Matthew said clearly in sticker shock. "Don't worry about it. I got it!" Raymond boasted while swiping his debit card. They left the store, had lunch and Raymond dropped Matthew off at his apartment. "I've got some business to take care of, but I will be back later. "Ok" Matthew said while Raymond drove off. Raymond returned to Matthew's house 4 hours later with a packet in his hand. He sat down in the living room and asked Matthew what he was doing. "I'm trying to find a video game to play. I'm bored as hell." He said. Raymond seized the moment and said "I know a game we could play". He told Matthew to come with him. They 2 hoped into Raymond's Lexus and drove to an abandoned park several miles outside of the city. Nobody would know they were there. "What the hell are we doing here?" Raymond whispered. "You'll see." Raymond stated while walking towards a picnic table.
The two men sat down across from each other and without warning Raymond opened the packet placing 5 pictures on the table. They were pictures of the underwear he had purchased earlier. After he placed all of the pictures on the table Raymond said something that shocked Matthew. "If you can guess what pair of underwear I have on right now I'll let you see me naked." WHAT?!?!?! Are you serious?!?! Matthew yelled. Yes I'm serious. I knew you liked me a long damn time ago. I've seen you checking me out when you thought I wasn't looking. I don't mind if you see me naked. "You're joking, right?" Matthew stated. "Do I look like I'm joking?" Smirked Raymond. Matthew became nervous as hell looking at the pictures. "C'mon. This is innocent fun" Raymond stated, but we all know innocence doesn't last very long.
Do I at least get a hint? Matthew said. Only one hint...black. That was absolutely no help considering that all 5 pair were black. They both laughed and Matthew proceded to pick. After 2 guesses Matthew got it right and Raymond stood up proceeding to undress, showing off his well toned 6'0 tall golden brown body. His rock hard abs and toned legs were to die for. Not to mention his soft round jiggly ass. Raymond seductively danced around in the underwear turning Matthew on. He didn't give a damn that they were in public or that they could get caught. He was enjoying being the center of attention. Just before Raymond removed his underwear he pulled Matthew up off the seat and forced him to get on his knees.
"Let me show you what HD really stands for." Raymond said in a sultry voice before removing his underwear and exposing his gorgeous 10 inch thick hard dick that hit Matthew in the face. Matthew was in complete shock that he was seeing the massive amount of meat that Raymond possessed. His balls were hanging low and pre-cum was dripping from the tip. "Well, I'm waiting." Raymond said. Shocked to the core Matthew whispered "HERE?!?!? Are you Insane?!?" "Aw c'mon Matthew, where's your sense of adventure?" Raymond said urging him on. This offer was too good to pass up. Matthew started sucking Raymond's gorgeous dick while Ray's balls slapped his chin. After 25 minutes Raymond finally shot a large load of cum down Matthew's throat. Matthew swallowed every sticky bit of it as if it was icing on a cake. After a few laughs the men got dressed and left the park.
"Damn you really know what you are doing. I have never had a blowjob that good" Raymond said grinning. Still in shock that he just sucked his best friend's dick Matthew politely said "Thanks" while a joyful smile on his face. It was late so the men decided to go to Raymond's house and hop into bed. Before Matthew went to the guest room Raymond said "Get some rest. I have a task for you tomorrow." Matthew nervously said ok and proceeded to go to bed. Matthew laid awake wondering what task Raymond had in mind before he drifted off to sleep. At 5:00 am the men woke up, showered and left to go to Raymond's hotel. The 30 minute car ride was filled with sexual innuendos and visions of the night before. Matthew could only imagine what was going to take place once they got to the hotel.
They arrived to the hotel long before front desk staff was scheduled to be there. The hotel was at full capacity and most people were still in their rooms asleep. It was so quiet you could've heard a pin drop. The men walked through the lobby and stepped into the glass elevator. Raymond opened a hidden slot to reveal a secret button. As he pressed it he told Matthew that this button was taking them to the roof of the hotel. The elevator ride was intense and the sexual tension was so thick you could've cut it with a knife. They arrived on the roof overlooking the gorgeous city. This is where Raymond turned up the heat by pushing Matthew against the wall and kissing him while shoving his hand down Matthew's pants. Matthew was very hesitant to allow this, but eventually gave in to his friend. The passionate kissing and groping of his dick was feeling too good and he didn't want Raymond to stop. The rooftop set the stage for one of Raymond insane sexual desires. Barebacking his friend on the roof of his hotel.
He grabbed Matthew and pushed him down onto a lounge chair that was conveniently placed on the roof. He proceeded to lick Matthew's entire body from head to toe before thrusting his tongue deep into Matthew's bubbly ass. Raymond's slippery tongue drove Matthew over the edge and turned him into a helpless sex slave for Raymond to do whatever the hell he wanted to with. For the next 2 hours the roof was set ablaze with Raymond's sexual perversions. Anal Beads, candle wax, neck biting, hair pulling...it seemed like nothing was off limits. Matthew was viscously fucked in every position imaginable and he enjoyed every moment of it. Raymond was in absolute Ecstasy as he had dreamed of this moment for over 10 years. All of his lust for his friend was being released and he treated his friend like a $2 whore. His rock hard dick demolished Matthew's sore hole and the sex underneath the hot sun left him weak. When Raymond felt that he could no longer hold his load he let out a loud grunt and shot his hot cum deep inside of Matthew's ass. Matthew screamed in shock and pleasure as he felt his best friend's creamy load deep inside his hole. The men laid there exhausted under the sun's brutal rays relishing in the fact that their slutty dreams had just become reality.
They cleaned up their mess and took a secret elevator that only Raymond has access to. This led them to a hidden room within the hotel that Raymond would sometimes hide in while he observed the employees to see if they were goofing off. The men showered and took a much needed nap. Matthew finally woke up hours later to the sight of Raymond's lovely dick right in front his face. He looked up at his best friend as if he was awaiting his instructions. "It's time for you to drain my balls again baby". Matthew happily followed orders and sucked every ounce of cum out of Raymond's balls. Raymond loved this so much that he decided to put Matthew on staff as his personal whore...err assistant. Now Matt was being paid to give his best friend several blow jobs daily and booty as much as possible. Life can't get much better than that.
