Write a Porn Scene for Women and Men

Discussion in 'Women's Issues' started by Standard Deviant, Dec 26, 2007.

  1. Standard Deviant

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    Feminists assert that pornography is "male-centric." I agree, most of it is. It's much too fragmented, too quick-orgasm-driven, too wham-bam-thank-you-virtual-m'aam. But unlike a lot of feminists, I do not think the solution is to go anti-porn or to support only "erotica" that is devoid of anything explicit.

    I love sexually explicit media! I believe it has tremendous potential that we are only now beginning to scratch the surface of. And as a longtime member of LPSG.ORG, I would like to propose that we get busy writing new, more exciting, imaginative, satisfying pornotica that combines the things both men and women get turned on by and get off on. Particularly, in our case, stories and images related to extraordinary male genital endowment. I hope porn producers are looking in and will get some great ideas from us for improving their "product."

    So how about taking a try at writing a short scene below for a pornorotic film or video in which the portrayal of sex is explicit but somehow much sexier and interesting than the usual blatant, simple-minded everyday porn? We could move this thread to the "adult websites" or "fiction" sections, but I especially want to hear from the women of LPSG, since I believe one of the main problems with porn is that it is too imbalanced toward a male point of view.
     
  2. Rugbypup

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    Interesting... i might have a think.
     
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    EXAMPLE

    Screenplay 1: My Deep Throat

    Opens with side-view shot of an attractive woman in her early 50s at a YWCA swimming pool. She is standing at the shallow end, holding her hands out behind her, knees bent, in a posture that shows she is about to dive in. She hesitates as something catches her eye. Her expression is one of being caught off guard and sudden distraction.

    CUT to very wide shot from behind the woman, where we can see two figures across the pool. Quick ZOOM in on those two figures, a young man and woman, standing face to face, very close but not as close as an established couple would stand.

    CUT to closeup of the young man and woman in swimsuits standing across the pool from the older woman. They are about 18-19 years old, cute, sexy, nubile young things. Both are wet, look like they have been swimming, like they just got out of the water a short time ago and have just discovered each other and are hitting it off well. The young woman is a knockout, erect nipples showing through her flattering one-piece suit. She is obviously very excited by the young man, who has a fairly average body, not too athletic but lean and appealing. He is wearing Speedos.

    CUT to closeup of the young woman's face. She has that look of someone who is early in the attraction process with this young man, very self-conscious and overly smiley, trying hard to make a good impression. She keeps glancing downward at his very visible bulge and occasionally licks her lips. It's a turnabout of the usual scene of the man glancing at the woman's bust. He is fixated on her face and very calm but grinning from ear to ear and also wide-eyed. She is talking nonstop, very animated, and visibly shivering at times in between sentences. Closeup on goosebumps on her arms. Viewer doesn't know if she is cold or excited, but it appears to be some of both.

    Cut back to the older woman hovering over the edge, still not diving in. Her head is cocked up and she is staring. Cut to a two-shot of the young couple from about the mid-thighs up. Cut back to closer shot (upper body and head) of the older woman still hovering, sort of teetering, still hesitating to dive in, now staring forward. Cut to closeup of the young couple's faces, the girl still chattering away but now she is smiling more broadly, and her eyes are glued downward on some part of the young man's body. Cut to young man's face. Slow tilt down, down, down to young man's crotch, which is visibly bulging. As the camera holds focus on his crotch, there are a couple of slight jumps in the fabric occur as his organ grows rather suddenly. Cut back to the older woman's face, closeup tight on her eyes. Although we can't see her eyes, Older Woman's eyes give away the fact that a knowing smile or smirk is creeping over her face. Cut to closeup on the young man's now enormous bulge--a bulge so huge it is automatically obscene. Camera remains on and "savors" the bulge for a rather long time. Young man's body language shows nervousness, shifting his weight back and forth slightly from one leg to the other, which, along with artful lighting, really shows his cock as some kind of a thinly veiled masterpiece of manhood. Camera is used to capture subtle but definite movements that give the big curved-down dick a role equal or greater than those of the other three characters shown so far.

    VOICEOVER Narration begins (in the voice of the older woman about to dive in): "Whoo! (impressed, slightly excited, but also with a sigh) Does that bring back some nice memories..."
     
  4. D_Kay_Sarah_Sarah

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    Well i am no story teller so i will just say that i have no problem with any porn excepted when it is obvious that the woman is being forced to do something she does not want to do. ie: rape scene's, forced gang bangs, extreme skull fucking and some bondage S&M films

    otherwise i dot really see porn as demeaning to women as even if they are in compromising positions in the film they have chosen to be there, doing what they are doing.
     
  5. JDean

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    (Excuse me for playing the devil's advocate)... but some women enjoy being submissive during sex as well, as do some men. My girlfriend loves me being on top, and at times she lovesss it rougher (as do I) and at other times more loving and passionate, and some times the roles are even reversed. This is the same for a lot of porn. There's plenty of femdom porn out there too... just depends what you're into. Kinda a pointless statement I think, there's enough variation to go around for everybody's kink or fantasy.
     
  6. whatireallywant

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    I consider myself a feminist but I am not against porn unless it is child porn or something violent or particularly demeaning -generally anything forced. (I actually got into a big argument with the Feminist Psychology Yahoo group over this and some other similar issues, and the "old guard" practically kicked me out! What's weird is that I thought THEY were not feminist enough because they bought into old gender stereotypes too readily. :rolleyes:)

    As for writing a scene, well, I've never done that, not sure I could. I think more in images and "feels" rather than words, sometimes, when it comes to sexual scenes. Plus I'm not sure how people would react (I'm way too sensitive to criticism...). I have a very specific fantasy, and most of the sexual "scenes" I come up with in my mind are variations on that fantasy.
     
  7. lovesmen

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    It depends on the mood and I agree with Jdean some wonen like to be submissive. I agree with it. It depends. Like some men like to be submissive, dominiate , tender, rough and etc... Women think just like men do. Only we hide it under great nighties and, high heels :) we're talented!
     
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