ArtfulDominant
Experimental Member
Chrysalis -- that's a great story of you having the insight, desire and the tenacity to cast off the limiting mantras you were burdened with ... and to discover pure pleasure where you previously hadn't expected to find it. Your body was there before, but when your mind expanded, you really kicked it into overdrive. I think it shows that there's a lot of hope for many people who aren't getting much out of sex (or a particular aspect of it).
And you've got such a great narrative voive -- the way you ended your little vignette ...
"Where in the hell did you learn to do that?" he said, leaning against the dresser because his legs had gone all wobbly. "Um...from books?" I said, thinking of the Erotica. "Keep reading those!" he gasped
When are we going to be treated to some excerpts from the fiction you're working on?
And you've got such a great narrative voive -- the way you ended your little vignette ...
"Where in the hell did you learn to do that?" he said, leaning against the dresser because his legs had gone all wobbly. "Um...from books?" I said, thinking of the Erotica. "Keep reading those!" he gasped
When are we going to be treated to some excerpts from the fiction you're working on?