Tennis Buddies

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Max,
You're a gifted writer... Especially when one considers that English is probably not your first language. FANTASTIC story! Each chapter is vivid and well paced. Bravo!
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bump, loved the bit with jesse, perhaps you could see how his new knowledge of him effects how he plays him in a tennis match? is brad going to meet him?