Breeding jenny

[halflife]

Okay! It's been a long time (5 years) since I've been here and i promise you, my work has gotten a lot better. I will eventually re-write Doctor John in the future to make it better and flesh it out into a halfway decent erotic short story. If all goes well, i may even write more so PLEASE... feedback is APPRECIATED and please post idea's and directions you want the story to go in, if you enjoy it. Now... lets begin!

Prologue:​

I wanted her. Bad. She was beautiful. Her name was Jenny and she was my goddess. I have loved her since the moment i first placed my eyes on her back in college. You see, i was just a dumb freshman who had high hopes of making something for himself and living the easy life. Her? She was the most gorgeous girl in her senior class. The nicest tits you can imagine with the sweetest ass imaginable. It was like God went into his secret stash to make this woman extra beautiful. She didn't have to wear make-up to cover up a thing. Her flawless Latino skin gave her complexion that was complimented only by that gorgeous smile. Those toned legs accenting every muscle and curve were to die for. Boy, was i smitten with her. I've never developed an erection that quick in my life, i about passed out. I had to have her, so began my mission.....

Chapter 1​

My name is Jack. I was completely in love with a girl and i had to make her mine. I would do this by any means possible. You see, i am a bit of a devious bastard and i have a bit of a fetish. I love to breed women, to creampie as many times as i can until i am shooting blanks. I mean, isn't that mankind's purpose in life. I mean come on, i am speaking for my half of mankind, the males. What better feeling is there than pumping your seed so deep inside a woman she can't feel it leak out until the next day? I tell you, there is NOTHING. So I began my mission.
I somehow didn't completely fuck up and managed to run into her after finding out where she likes to hang out around campus. I literally lived in that bar for two weeks until i happened to see her walk in. I immediately sobered up and began to put my plan into action. I had chatted up the bartender in the preceding few days and already knew her favorite drink. I waited until she sat down and then I had one sent to her. I was purposefully making a big show of playing on my phone and wasn't even looking her direction. I could FEEL her staring at me. This was part of the plan. She grabbed her drink and strolled down to the seat next to me. She started thanking me for the drink and trying to chat me up. I purposefully ignored her and only mumbled a few replies as i was still messing around on my phone. She starts to walk away. She thinks i'm not interested. Before Jenny gets two feet away, i quickly stop her and apologize profusely. I make up some excuse about being new to this area and being a freshman in college. She buys my excuse and sits back down near me. I buy her another drink while i order another for myself. We get into talking about the college we both attend. I play dumb and listen to her while she rambles on about how there is only one Starbucks on campus. Little does she know that i've caught my hook in her and i am slowly reeling her in. She is my prize. I subtly watch those magnificent tits jiggle around in that tight blouse she has on. I can just barely make out her nipples poking out in the dim neon lights that are scattered around the pub. She doesn't know what's in store for her. If only she did, she would run far away. I want her. I can feel my throbbing erection in my jeans. I would devour her and blast my load deep inside her. She will be mine.


Thoughts?

 

[deleted28572]

Halflife, I like the concept. Keep writing and we'll see how this shapes up. I'm curious to see how you decide to build the story.

 

[halflife]

Chapter 2​

I can feel my erection straining against my boxers. I feel the pre-cum dripping out and running down my shaft. I want her. She keeps leaning in towards me and touching my shoulder. She's flirting a lot with me as we continue our discussion. I order us a couple more rounds. She is really talkative. She think's she is safe with me. I've presented myself as a very open minded individual and very agreeable. She doesn't know what i crave. She doesn't suspect whats is coming, the thing's i am going to do to her. My erection is still throbbing away. Every time she gets close to me, i smell her perfume. It is intoxicating, it's making me harder. I can tell she is into me. We clink glasses together and down the last bit of our most recent drink. Jenny turns to go to the bathroom, while i reposition the erection in my pants so its less noticeable. She get's back and see's that i have ordered another round and a shot of crown royal for each of us. We finish these and are now talking about something with history of the college town we are in. I appear interested and have started on phase 2 of my plan to make her mine. I 'accidentally' brush her thigh as i am reaching over for some bar nuts. I hear a slight moan come out of her throat. I make another pass. She is starting to sweat as i hear another muffled moan. I bring up the idea of leaving the bar to go back to my apartment where i have more alcohol and netflix. I think she know's whats up. Next thing i know she is grabbing my hand and leading me out of the door. She wants it, good, this will make it easier on her. While we are walking to my apartment nearby, she comments about all the little stores we pass by. I mumble a few words here and there. She doesn't know that i am planning in my head. I have so many different images of me nutting deep inside that tight pussy running through my mind. I can tell her motor is running hot too. She is holding my hand as i lead the way up the stairs. When we get to the top, i unlock the door and open it. She braces herself against me and kisses me before we are even through. I grab a hold of her ass feel what i have been craving. I pick her up and march inside with her in my arms. I kick the door closed behind me. She is mine now. I will have what i want. I am going to creampie that pussy as much as i can.

I feel like i'm overdoing the whole idea of a dominating male. He seem's a bit bruteish and hypersexual. Does anyone like the direction i am going in? Thoughts and comments appreciated!

 

[ilpallazo]

I was afraid the story would go into rape, but so far it's quite fine. Hopefully Jack won't even have to try to force her into anything

 

[deleted28572]

Halflife, Personally, a little bit of bruteishness is fine. There's nothing wrong with going after what you want, and in this specific case she's going into the lion's den of her own accord. Perfectly good direction to take at this point. Let's see where you take things from here.

 

[halflife]

Chapter 3
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Yes. Things are going so perfect. I have her in my arms. I can smell her. She is intoxicating all of my senses. I feel my dick pulse with each step towards my bedroom. She is easy to carry. I finally make it into my bedroom and put her on the bed gently. I turn to close my door. She cannot escape so easily now. I turn back to face her and she is undoing the back of her dress. I move over to help her while i kick off my shoes. She lets me and proceeds to unzip my jeans. Wow, she wants it. That act only makes my cock throb harder. She slides off her dress in one quick motion while i quickly take off my jeans and underwear. I am undoing her bra now to free those beautiful tits and see them for the first time when she stops me. She tells me she is not on birth control and asks if i have condoms before we go any further. I tell her yes and grab one out of my nightstands drawer. She is so oblivious at this point. She doesn't know i had this all planned out. These condoms are special you see. The tip is designed to dissolve after a few minutes, while the rest remains intact. You'll glance down and still see the rubber on my shaft, but won't suspect in the slightest that i am blasting my fertile load deep inside of you. She takes off her bra and lets me see those nice 34-DD boobs. I can see her nipples standing erect and her face and skin flushed. I kiss her once and then move to nibble on her earlobe while my hands explore her body. My hands finally reach her ass and i grab it hard to let her know that it is mine. This whole time my throbbing cock rubs against her panties, soaking them in a mixture of my precum and her wetness. I hear the occasional moan while i am doing all of this to her. She is loving it. I grab a hold of her lacy panties and slide them down off her. As she steps out of them, i glance down to see that she is completely shaved clean. I can see that tight pussy, its glistening with how wet it is. I am so close to what i have wanted since i've first seen her. She is lusting for me. I move her closer to me and begin to kiss her passionately. I use my free hands to rub my cock head against the outside of her pussy, teasing her. I can feel how wet she is. She begs me to put on the condom. I oblige and roll it down my shaft. I lay down on my bed and watch as she prepares to get on top. As she prepares to let me enter her, i feel no guilt nor remorse for what is about to occur. I NEED this. I want to unload everything into her unprotected pussy. I feel the burning desire as a man to spread my seed. It feels primal and gives me strength. She think's she's safe, its laughable. As she starts to slide down my shaft, i watch the expression on her face turn from desire to pleasure. I hear the beginning of a moan as she begins to already start the ascend back up my shaft. I meet her thrusts with my own and we both start moaning. She is really into it and starts to cum already. I feel her wetness drip all over my entire crotch. It only makes me want to fuck her harder. I feel her orgasms milking my cock, squeezing and releasing it as i am pumping it in and out of her tight hole. As i go to thrust back in, i suddenly start feeling her pussy even more. I remember the tip must have dissolved by now. Game on. I speed up my thrusts and i start rubbing her clit area with my thumb in a clockwise direction as she continues to ride wave after wave of pleasure into multiple orgasms. She is moaning uncontrollably and trying to hold onto me as i suddenly roll her onto her back and pounding her missionary style. I feel the need burning, deep in my nuts. I need to get as deep as possible into her before i cum. I watch her playing with her nipples, pulling on them and massaging them, this turns me on even more. I pick up my pace pounding her hole as she has her legs wrapped around my back, pulling me closer. She has one more orgasm from this doubled up effort. My eyes start rolling into the back of my head as i start grunting as i unload two weeks worth of cum deep into her fertile pussy. I feel it pumping out the tip of my cock, deep near her cervix. I feel it pooling up as i keep still. I feel her pelvic muscles massaging my cock as her orgasms comes to and end as well. I keep my dick inside her as a sort of cork, so my cum doesn't immediately start pouring out of her. She finally stops orgasming and i pull out. I immediately say "Oh shit!" and she now notices my cum dripping out of her. I take off the condom and show her the 'rip' in it. She is not happy. Little does she know, this is all part of the plan. I explain that it got a bit rough there and it probably happened then. I hand her a towel to clean up with.


Thoughts?

 

[deleted28572]

Dissolving condoms...... I like it. Creative and not implausible. I think to this point he's not likable, but I don't hate him either. Keep it going and let's see where you go from here.

 

[halflife]

Dissolving condoms...... I like it. Creative and not implausible. I think to this point he's not likable, but I don't hate him either. Keep it going and let's see where you go from here.

Well i am trying to make him masochistic and primal. An alpha male who wants to spread his seed. I am not sure if i should change the title and bring in other characters for me to explore this, or stick with her. I could make a few more chapters of her, but beyond that i think i'd be severely limited to only have two characters to play with (pun intended). Ideas?

 

[biggieschlong]

Personally I find the breeding of a woman in sex talk and then if she's totally down for it hot as hell, but I don't care for it in terms of a dirty trick. Like, I find it insanely hot if a woman wants to be knocked up by a huge guy (like me for example, seriously my favorite fantasy in chat on here) but I don't care for it to be dissolving condoms or anything like that. For example, if you were to take the angle of she just wants sex with the alpha stud male, and then spin it to where he really wants to breed her and he asks her if she wants his baby and she's totally down for it to the point she is begging him to knock her up with that monster cock. That's my kind of story. Still an alpha male that wants to spread his seed, but he does it through pure animal attraction that she wants him to knock her up, not that he has to trick her to do it. My 2 cents.

 

[halflife]

Okay, i've decided to pretty much abandon this as it hasn't really gone anywhere. I'll be writing something else in a completely different direction soon! Look for it in the next couple of weeks :]

 

[ilpallazo]

Good luck on your next endeavour =)