Fictitious Stories

[flaneur]

Hey guys and gals.

I'm 22, from Scotland but currently living in Vancouver, B.C.

I joined the site a couple of days ago. Been a long time admirer of the LPSG fictitious stories section, so thought I'd contribute my own. I've enjoyed writing for years and have wanted to write a certain story for a long time now. It's coming out now, to this site exclusively.

http://www.lpsg.org/190303-too-good-to-be-true.html

Let me know if you're enjoying it - always good to hear some support!

 

[BigInBellevue]

I have been reading your story and like it. Nice to know that you are from Scotland and where you are living. You might consider revealing a bit more about yourself. It makes it more interesting to know something about the author. I hope that some other aspects of LPSG are beneficial to you. Lots of good information.

 

[crescendo69]

Welcome. Your writing is wonderful.

 

[D_Gunther Snotpole]

Flaneur, your problem is you're just slightly too clever as a writer.
Which, as problems go, is kinda enviable.
You're 22 and on a fine trajectory ... very readable, very knowing about how far to develop things, really quite economical.
I look forward to more stories.

In other news: I hope you're enjoying Vancouver. Gorgeous city.

 

[flaneur]

Thanks so much for the comments and support, gents!

As for being too clever as a writer - that's possibly the best compliment I've ever been given! haha

 

[Cutecock87]

Ive read your story and its realy good. I enjoyed reading it, keep writing.