Two farm boys collide at university

It’s too funny! To be honest not a single one of this things even remotely crossed my mind.

Well, of course not! I mean, you're not a businessman or contract law specialist!
(Are you?)

But at least some of it must have crossed your mind.

Like the fact that Jacques knows that Jo isn't cut out to run the family business by himself. You made that clear in the first conversation between Jacques and Piet.

And you knew that Jacques was the ATM. Even if he complains about it when Jo spends too much money treating the gang to drinks at the pub, he still pays the credit card bill and didn't take the card away. (Though he may have taken it by now, since the boys have an income of their own.)

And you knew he was happy to finance Anna's restaurant. (I don't think you wrote this outright, but I got the impression that opening a restaurant was at least half Jacques's idea.) You just didn't think of the details of the business arrangement.
 
That's the truth ...

Jo and Piet hadn’t been back to Stellenbosch University much since taking over the DeWet fam—since dorm rooms had hummed with tension, water polo and rugby consumed lives, and the space between twin beds had become a no man’s land of desire, confusion, and slow-burning loyalty. Time had passed. Distance had settled things. But now, they were back.

It started with an invitation: a presentation Jo had to give on sustainable grazing methods for a visiting professor, and Piet tagging along to support—and maybe scope out an opportunity for his winemaking research. One night turned into a weekend, and Jo, ever the instigator, had a plan.

“We do this proper,” he’d said, slapping Piet’s shoulder with that old, lopsided grin. “Braai master night. Bring the whole gang back. Even Spencer.”

Piet had hesitated. Spencer, with his jagged fallout from the group, his sharp tongue and colder glares—hadn’t spoken to half the crew since last year. But Jo had a way of pushing momentum into places even fear couldn’t block.

And so they did it.

They borrowed the rugby house’s backyard—a low, slanted patch of grass under string lights and the outline of Stellenbosch mountains. Jo showed up in flip-flops and a sleeveless tee, that tin of braai spice still in his bag like a relic. Piet arrived with a crate of hand-bottled shiraz, a vintage he’d helped craft with the wine crew. The rest trickled in—old faces, newer ones, loud laughter dulling the rust of time.

Even Spencer came.

He lingered on the fringe at first, arms crossed, sunglasses on despite the evening sun. No one spoke to him much. Until Jo thrust a pair of tongs into his hand.

“You still know how to turn a wors without mangling it, or you gone all soft on us?”

That cracked it.

The fire roared. Flames hissed as fat dripped onto coals. The scent of boerewors and marinated lamb filled the air, earthy and thick with memory. Jo flipped meat like he was conducting a symphony, whistling an old Afrikaans tune under his breath. Piet poured wine with quiet grace, offering glasses with that steady smirk that made people feel steadied too.

Old grudges softened in the firelight. Spencer’s laugh—rare and raspy—finally slipped free after Jo dared him to race to the vineyard fence barefoot. Someone played guitar. Someone else sang off-key. The group, fractured once, found shape again in the smoke and spice.

Near the end of the night, Piet caught Spencer leaning close to Jo, murmuring something. Jo laughed, clapped him on the back, and passed him a rib bone like a peace offering. Their eyes met—not all the way trusting yet, but the bridge was being built, one ember at a time.

And later, as the last embers glowed and people drifted off, Jo and Piet stood side by side, beer bottles in hand, watching the flames crackle down.

“We still got it,” Jo murmured.

“Ja,” Piet said, his voice low. “Think we brought it all back. Even him.”

Jo nudged him, a grin forming. “Maybe we never really lost it.”

Piet didn’t answer—but his hand brushed Jo’s as they both reached for the last piece of steak. Not on purpose. Not entirely by accident either.
Nice update but don't mess with their happiness...lol...:)
 
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Jo and Piets last day in Stellenbosch after a weekend visit that turned into a week started with the kind of morning that made people linger in bed a little longer, stretching out into something more than just habit. For Jo and Piet, this was the last visit to Stellenbosch for a while; too many memories, too much nostalgia. Jo had said to Piet. Ja, the gang can rather come to us, Piet stretched in bed. The vineyards outside still shimmered with dew, the quad still echoed faintly with last night’s laughter, but everything felt more final. Today didn’t feel like a goodbye to Stellenbosch; it felt more like a promise to see each other again in a long time, perhaps only at graduation next year.

But they didn't spend it sulking. The gang was already waiting.

They met outside De Lapa, the usual corner under the ancient oak tree. The whole gang was there, chatting over takeaway coffees and clingy hangovers. Spencer was there too, leaning against the railing, too casual, too aware of his own presence.

Jo bounded up with his usual lopsided grin, freckled and easy. Piet followed, hands deep in his pockets, jaw tight. They were here to make this day count, and to tie off one last frayed edge: Spencer.

The group spent the morning at Coetzenburg, tossing a rugby ball around, sweat mingling with laughter. They teased Spencer like old times, with light jabs about his tragic dancing skills and the way he takes group project meetings way too seriously. Jo, always the center of attention, kept things breezy, never giving Spencer more than a glance, but his energy pulled everyone into orbit, Spencer included.

Beers were cracked by noon. Henk handed Spencer one. Piet watched, making sure every offer was deliberate, no one left out, but nothing given too freely either. Spencer was being allowed back in, not welcomed with open arms. That was the unspoken rule. He wasn’t a leader anymore. He was just… Spencer.

But Spencer wasn’t playing it clean. Every so often, his gaze lingered a touch too long on Jo’s neck. His hand brushed Jo’s shoulder during a joke and stayed an extra beat. Jo, oblivious as ever, just grinned, nudged him back like nothing. But Piet caught it all, the stare that lasted a second too long, the half-compliments wrapped in mockery, the way Spencer’s body always angled toward Jo.

It came to a head when the gang decided to head to Die Braak for Sunday lunch. The walk through the cobbled streets was lazy, filled with midmorning tipsiness and cracked jokes. Jo walked ahead, chatting animatedly with his old mates. Spencer trailed behind, near Piet.

Piet slowed until they were out of earshot, then stepped closer, his tone flat but sharp. “You’re pushing your luck, bru.”

Spencer blinked, caught off guard. “What?”

“You know what,” Piet said, jaw clenched. “All that touching and staring. You think we don’t see it? You think I don’t?”

Spencer opened his mouth, but Piet cut him off. “Don’t. Just don’t. The gang’s being civil because Jo and I asked them to. That shit you’re pulling? It will end the groups play nicely vibes at the drop of a hat.”

Spencer’s expression twisted, half wounded, half defensive. “I’m not doing anything—”

“Exactly,” Piet snapped. “You’re not doing anything. Not fixing what you broke. Just circling Jo like a bloody vulture, hoping no one will notice.”

Sarah had fallen behind, hearing the raised voices. She stepped in, arms crossed, voice low but lethal. “Piet’s right. You’ve been given a third chance, Spencer. Don’t blow it.”

He turned to her, guilt flickering in his eyes. “I didn’t mean—”

“But you did,” she said. “We’re all trying, but you're making it hard. You don’t get to creep around Jo, hoping something just clicks. Jo’s not here for your redemption arc.”

Piet gave one last look, then turned and walked ahead, catching up with the others. Sarah followed, leaving Spencer standing alone on the cobbled path, hands shaking slightly.

Behind them, Spencer stood still for a long time. The bell from the church rang out in the distance, distant chatter from families and tourists flitting past like ghosts. He stared at the curve of Jo’s shoulders up ahead, Jo laughing without a care, Piet beside him, always grounded.

He could go after them. Fix things. Let go of whatever it was he still clung to.

Or he could turn his back on it all. Leave Stellenbosch with nothing but ghosts in his wake.

The wind picked up slightly, lifting the hem of his shirt. Still, he didn’t move.

Not yet.
 
Jo and Piets last day in Stellenbosch after a weekend visit that turned into a week started with the kind of morning that made people linger in bed a little longer, stretching out into something more than just habit. For Jo and Piet, this was the last visit to Stellenbosch for a while; too many memories, too much nostalgia. Jo had said to Piet. Ja, the gang can rather come to us, Piet stretched in bed. The vineyards outside still shimmered with dew, the quad still echoed faintly with last night’s laughter, but everything felt more final. Today didn’t feel like a goodbye to Stellenbosch; it felt more like a promise to see each other again in a long time, perhaps only at graduation next year.

But they didn't spend it sulking. The gang was already waiting.

They met outside De Lapa, the usual corner under the ancient oak tree. The whole gang was there, chatting over takeaway coffees and clingy hangovers. Spencer was there too, leaning against the railing, too casual, too aware of his own presence.

Jo bounded up with his usual lopsided grin, freckled and easy. Piet followed, hands deep in his pockets, jaw tight. They were here to make this day count, and to tie off one last frayed edge: Spencer.

The group spent the morning at Coetzenburg, tossing a rugby ball around, sweat mingling with laughter. They teased Spencer like old times, with light jabs about his tragic dancing skills and the way he takes group project meetings way too seriously. Jo, always the center of attention, kept things breezy, never giving Spencer more than a glance, but his energy pulled everyone into orbit, Spencer included.

Beers were cracked by noon. Henk handed Spencer one. Piet watched, making sure every offer was deliberate, no one left out, but nothing given too freely either. Spencer was being allowed back in, not welcomed with open arms. That was the unspoken rule. He wasn’t a leader anymore. He was just… Spencer.

But Spencer wasn’t playing it clean. Every so often, his gaze lingered a touch too long on Jo’s neck. His hand brushed Jo’s shoulder during a joke and stayed an extra beat. Jo, oblivious as ever, just grinned, nudged him back like nothing. But Piet caught it all, the stare that lasted a second too long, the half-compliments wrapped in mockery, the way Spencer’s body always angled toward Jo.

It came to a head when the gang decided to head to Die Braak for Sunday lunch. The walk through the cobbled streets was lazy, filled with midmorning tipsiness and cracked jokes. Jo walked ahead, chatting animatedly with his old mates. Spencer trailed behind, near Piet.

Piet slowed until they were out of earshot, then stepped closer, his tone flat but sharp. “You’re pushing your luck, bru.”

Spencer blinked, caught off guard. “What?”

“You know what,” Piet said, jaw clenched. “All that touching and staring. You think we don’t see it? You think I don’t?”

Spencer opened his mouth, but Piet cut him off. “Don’t. Just don’t. The gang’s being civil because Jo and I asked them to. That shit you’re pulling? It will end the groups play nicely vibes at the drop of a hat.”

Spencer’s expression twisted, half wounded, half defensive. “I’m not doing anything—”

“Exactly,” Piet snapped. “You’re not doing anything. Not fixing what you broke. Just circling Jo like a bloody vulture, hoping no one will notice.”

Sarah had fallen behind, hearing the raised voices. She stepped in, arms crossed, voice low but lethal. “Piet’s right. You’ve been given a third chance, Spencer. Don’t blow it.”

He turned to her, guilt flickering in his eyes. “I didn’t mean—”

“But you did,” she said. “We’re all trying, but you're making it hard. You don’t get to creep around Jo, hoping something just clicks. Jo’s not here for your redemption arc.”

Piet gave one last look, then turned and walked ahead, catching up with the others. Sarah followed, leaving Spencer standing alone on the cobbled path, hands shaking slightly.

Behind them, Spencer stood still for a long time. The bell from the church rang out in the distance, distant chatter from families and tourists flitting past like ghosts. He stared at the curve of Jo’s shoulders up ahead, Jo laughing without a care, Piet beside him, always grounded.

He could go after them. Fix things. Let go of whatever it was he still clung to.

Or he could turn his back on it all. Leave Stellenbosch with nothing but ghosts in his wake.

The wind picked up slightly, lifting the hem of his shirt. Still, he didn’t move.

Not yet.
Jayson--awesome as always. Your character development and writing always amazes me--Will buy your book/books any day as well as others.

Piet is a gown ass man now---awesome.

Thanks!!!
 
“But you did,” she said. “We’re all trying, but you're making it hard. You don’t get to creep around Jo, hoping something just clicks. Jo’s not here for your redemption arc.”

Very good point, and effectively made, especially the last line. I'm glad Sarah hung back and heard them.

As much as I understand the desire to use Spencer as a speed bump under a bus, I kind of feel sad for the guy. Almost nothing in his upbringing has prepared him for what he's now being expected to do: be genuine and sincere, don't scheme or plot, just let things between him and other people develop. If he can make things at Stellenbosch work, it'll be a big chance at growing into a functional adult that he wouldn't otherwise have gotten (especially if he had never left Sandton and his parents).

I think Spencer has been circling around Jo partly because he still thinks jo's hot, but partly because he just doesn't know what else to do with himself.

And I wish poor Piet didn't always have to be the bad cop in this situation.
 
Very good point, and effectively made, especially the last line. I'm glad Sarah hung back and heard them.

As much as I understand the desire to use Spencer as a speed bump under a bus, I kind of feel sad for the guy. Almost nothing in his upbringing has prepared him for what he's now being expected to do: be genuine and sincere, don't scheme or plot, just let things between him and other people develop. If he can make things at Stellenbosch work, it'll be a big chance at growing into a functional adult that he wouldn't otherwise have gotten (especially if he had never left Sandton and his parents).

I think Spencer has been circling around Jo partly because he still thinks jo's hot, but partly because he just doesn't know what else to do with himself.

And I wish poor Piet didn't always have to be the bad cop in this situation.
I like the way Piet is strong and now puts up with no crap----He and Jo complement each other.
 
Here's a question ...

Piet and Jo each own, in their own right, 50% of the VDMDW farm.

If, a few years down the line, Jo does decide to run off to Cape Town to form a throuple with Byron and Matt -- or if, in a last-ditch attempt to demonstrate (to whomever) that he's not gay (because he hates labels, hey?), he decides to run off to Cape Town and shack up with Henk's sister (against the advice of Henk and everyone else) --

... would Piet be better off having married Jo (making the farm and everything else joint marital assets), or is he better off not being married to Jo, and maybe not even civil partners, so that Piet's ownership interest in the farm is free and clear and not tied up as a marital asset?

Or, perhaps more interesting, what would be the three parents' reactions to Jo running off (especially to shack up with a woman)?

And how would they react when Jo came crawling back (from the failed throuple or failed attempt at heterosexuality) like the Prodigal Son?
Wow, what an interesting point. But I think you kind of helped my point of view here. Whether they stay together or not the farm can still be taken over by Jo's family for a host of reasons. As it stands now both Piet and jo own 50% of VDMDW. However Jo is the Heir to his family's farm which Piet has no access to. So Jo would retain all the rights and benefits of their farm and 50% of Piet's farm and Anna's Restaurant because if something were to happen to Anna while Jacques had shares in it, that would also pass down to Jo as well. Whereas if Anna financed the restaurant on her own, Piet would be the only heir to it and thus retaining all the rights and benefits free and clear of Jo and his family.

If Jo wanted to be vindictive for any reason, there is no provision in the contract for compensation if Jacques were to take the farm over. If Piet were to intentionally allow any of the products to fall below the established goals Jacques could take over and still own 50% (or whatever % they decide) in Anna's restaurant and there would be no recourse for Piet.
 
If Jo wanted to be vindictive for any reason, there is no provision in the contract for compensation if Jacques were to take the farm over.

Actually, we don't know that. Jayson didn't give us the entire contract, and he only gave us part of what the attorney in Cape Town drafted for Piet regarding that one condition about breach of contract.

More importantly, we don't know what Jacques has or hasn't put in his will or what he may put in it at any point in the future. So Jo isn't necessarily the only heir to van der Merwe Enterprises. He might be or might not.

(At Jo's and Piet's current ages, I think it's a fair bet that Jacques has made no final decision. And, for the purposes of this discussion, let's assume that Jacques is not going to die tomorrow or next week or any time before he has made a decision.)

What we do know is that
  • Jacques doesn't think Jo is up to running the entire family business by himself. (And I think we all agree that Jacques is right.)
  • Jacques seems to be fond of Piet, to be glad Piet's part of his family, and to have faith in Piet's abilities.
  • Jacques does not seem to be the kind of man who would look kindly on Jo abandoning the family business and his partner to run off and become part of a throuple.

How Jacques would react to Jo running off to try to be straight and shack up with a woman isn't so clear. I bet Jacques would be skeptical. I also think he'd be sympathetic to Piet having been abandoned.

And we know (I think it's clearly implied, at least) that Jacques wants van der Merwe Enterprises to thrive long-term, even after he retires or dies. And right now, Piet is the only prospect of that happening.

So (despite fears I expressed when they were negotiating the contract) I don't think Jacques is interested in muscling Piet out and taking over the VDMDW farm. Doing that would be contrary to Jacques's primary goal, the long-term success of the family business.
 
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Actually, we don't know that. Jayson didn't give us the entire contract, and he only gave us part of what the attorney in Cape Town drafted for Piet regarding that one condition about breach of contract.

More importantly, we don't know what Jacques has or hasn't put in his will or what he may put in it at any point in the future. So Jo isn't necessarily the only heir to van der Merwe Enterprises. He might be or might not.

(At Jo's and Piet's current ages, I think it's a fair bet that Jacques has made no final decision. And, for the purposes of this discussion, let's assume that Jacques is not going to die tomorrow or next week or any time before he has made a decision.)

What we do know is that
  • Jacques doesn't think Jo is up to running the entire family business by himself. (And I think we all agree that Jacques is right.)
  • Jacques seems to be fond of Piet, to be glad Piet's part of his family, and to have faith in Piet's abilities.
  • Jacques does not seem to be the kind of man who would look kindly on Jo abandoning the family business and his partner to run off and become part of a throuple.

How Jacques would react to Jo running off to try to be straight and shack up with a woman isn't so clear. I bet Jacques would be skeptical. I also think he'd be sympathetic to Piet having been abandoned.

And we know (I think it's clearly implied, at least) that Jacques wants van der Merwe Enterprises to thrive long-term, even after he retires or dies. And right now, Piet is the only prospect of that happening.

So (despite fears I expressed when they were negotiating the contract) I don't think Jacques is interested in muscling Piet out and taking over the VDMDW farm. Doing that would be contrary to Jacques's primary goal, the long-term success of the family business.
I never suggested Jo running off to shack up with someone else, that was your example. We have seen how Jo responds when he is not happy with something. Even when Piet showed up at the wine shed to help out, he wanted him gone. He was hesitant when Rachael suggested giving lurker a call to help out. So it's not unconceivable that Jo would act in a way that could jeopardize the whole operation.

We do know the the details of the contract when it speaks about the terms in which the farm can be taken over as read by Piet per the revisions at the contract signing. All I am saying is Piet has more to loose than Jo does.
 
I never suggested Jo running off to shack up with someone else, that was your example.

Yes, definitely it was just something I suggested as an example. It's also something I wouldn't (yet) put it past Jo to do. (That is, I think he'll grown out of impulses like that eventually, but he's not there yet.)


We have seen how Jo responds when he is not happy with something. ... So it's not unconceivable that Jo would act in a way that could jeopardize the whole operation.

I absolutely agree with that.

All I am saying is Piet has more to lose than Jo does.

I agree with you there. I'm just saying, as an add-on to your point, that I don't think it's likely that Piet would actually lose it.

Jacques is no dummy, and while he loves his children, we haven't (yet) seen anything to indicate that he'd let sentiment overrule good business sense. He also knows that good business sense is something Jo doesn't have. (Yet.)

Which is to say that Jacques and van der Merwe Enterprises need Piet, and if Jo did something impulsive that jeopardized the whole operation, I think Jacques would side with Piet.

Hm. Maybe, instead of marrying Jo, Piet should push to get adopted by Jacques.

Jayson, are adult adoptions legal in South Africa?
 
Yes, definitely it was just something I suggested as an example. It's also something I wouldn't (yet) put it past Jo to do. (That is, I think he'll grown out of impulses like that eventually, but he's not there yet.)




I absolutely agree with that.



I agree with you there. I'm just saying, as an add-on to your point, that I don't think it's likely that Piet would actually lose it.

Jacques is no dummy, and while he loves his children, we haven't (yet) seen anything to indicate that he'd let sentiment overrule good business sense. He also knows that good business sense is something Jo doesn't have. (Yet.)

Which is to say that Jacques and van der Merwe Enterprises need Piet, and if Jo did something impulsive that jeopardized the whole operation, I think Jacques would side with Piet.

Hm. Maybe, instead of marrying Jo, Piet should push to get adopted by Jacques.

Jayson, are adult adoptions legal in South Africa?
Let's remember that this is a love story.. :}
 
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Yes, definitely it was just something I suggested as an example. It's also something I wouldn't (yet) put it past Jo to do. (That is, I think he'll grown out of impulses like that eventually, but he's not there yet.)




I absolutely agree with that.



I agree with you there. I'm just saying, as an add-on to your point, that I don't think it's likely that Piet would actually lose it.

Jacques is no dummy, and while he loves his children, we haven't (yet) seen anything to indicate that he'd let sentiment overrule good business sense. He also knows that good business sense is something Jo doesn't have. (Yet.)

Which is to say that Jacques and van der Merwe Enterprises need Piet, and if Jo did something impulsive that jeopardized the whole operation, I think Jacques would side with Piet.

Hm. Maybe, instead of marrying Jo, Piet should push to get adopted by Jacques.

Jayson, are adult adoptions legal in South Africa?
Anything is possible in South Africa if you know who to bride! HAHAHAHAHA Jokes!!
 
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