Wedding surprise

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  1. Dan1982

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    Wrote this on a boring train journey today. Always wanted to try my hand at this. It is, annoyingly, only half done. Let me know if I should bother finishing.

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    I had to put on a fake cheery disposition all day. In reality I was feeling like shit, but I couldn't really act like it at a friends wedding. My girlfriend had broken up with me the day before. The constant questions of "Jason, where's Tessa" was getting a little tedious. I kept batting it off. "She's not feeling very well." "Really bad cold". One friend I told that she had really bad period pains, just because I knew it'd get back to her that I'd said it.

    I was pretty pissed off about the whole thing. To me, things between us were good. We'd met at the gym about a year ago. She was a total stunner. Easily a 9. At 5"11 she was a little shorter than me with blond hair, tiny waist, and big ass and big tits. It was her that had originally come upto me. "Whoa. Hey there big guy. New here?". We'd flirted like hell and I'd made sure to scratch the back of my head a few time to give her a view of the gun show. I know - arrogant prick, right? To be honest, I don't care. I've worked really hard for my body and I'm not ashamed to show it off. I've also got a decent size piece of meat between my legs. It gets me girls. Tessa and I were fucking 20 minutes later in the disabled toilets. Our sex life was amazing, and she really got off on my cockiness.

    I'd always had a pretty high sex drive. I can't help I get horny a lot. For me, sex is something I want at least once a day. Being a bit of an alpha male, dominating her perfect body drove me wild. "It's just too much sex, Jason. It's all you want. I just don't think we have anything else in common", to me was a pretty shitty break up line.

    So here I was, single with a bit of a bruised ego. Like I said, I'm a pretty hot. I've never been dumped before. Generally I don't really get into relationships, more of a fuck em, leave en, and fuck em again kinda-guy.

    It'd been a few days since Tessa and I had fucked. That should have been the first sign something wasn't right. I was horny as hell as well as feeling sorry for myself. But I was in a total catch 22. Weddings are usually an excellent hunting ground for some action. That would mean I'd have to admit to being dumped, or look like a total cheating wanker. So instead I decided to drink and just put me n a fake smile. "I'll nip to my room and have a wank if it gets too much for me" I thought to myself. In retrospect, I should have just said I'd dumped her. Idiot.

    I couldn't help but eyeing up the completion in the room. I like to be the alpha. Here, I think I was doing pretty dam well. A suit really shows of my physique and my ass. 6'2 and solid muscle gets me attention. Girls coming upto me and flirting, giggling and finding excuses to touch my arms or chest. God I wanted to give most of them a pounding they'd never forget. I was clearly the hottest piece of meat on the menu at this shindig, except that I wasn't actually on the menu. These were friends from university. Not the closest friends. I'd fucked a few of them before, but' been four years since we graduated and I was a bit surprised to get the invite.

    At about half eleven I decided "fuck it", I need to fuck it. I was going to screw one of the bridesmaids. The day had started early so by this time the room had started to empty, and a few of us started to move into the bar of the hotel as we were getting kicked out of the main hall. Lots of drunk uncles and aunties stumbling to bed. Left about four of us in the bar on our own, including the barman. It was me, The bridesmaid Jenny (the target), and the brides brother Charlie (the competition). It was a bit unfair on Charlie to call him the competition. Don't get me wrong, he's a good looking guy. Silver eyes and dark features good looking, with pitch black floppy hair. He clearly looked after himself as well. But tonight he was up against the stallion. It was going to be my face that was buried in Jenny's big bouncy tits tonight not this student pretty boy.

    Best to just be blunt with him. It'll save us time and hassle. When Jenny went to the loo I turned to him and quietly said "look mate, I don't wanna sound like a dick, but would you mind fucking off. I think I gonna get a bit intimate with Jenny".

    He just raised an eyebrow. "All muscle and no brains. Didn't you notice she took her room key. She's gone to bed mate. No pussy for you tonight."

    "What... oh, bollocks."

    "Don't worry. I can keep you company", Charlie said flashing his pearly whites.

    "Eh? Flattered, but not into that kind of thing". And I'm not. Nothing against it, and have no issue whatsoever if guys wanna check me out in the gym, or in the changing rooms. Fill your boots lads.

    "I'm not gay, Charlie. But thanks".

    "Neither am I. But I want a blow job. And I think you're going to be the one to give it to me"

    With that I burst out laughing. "Mate, if I was in that game, you'd be the one giving me the blow job."

    "Well, I'd just assumed it was the man that got his cock sucked, not the bitch."

    I was a bit taken aback by this. What I thought was banter had a bit more of an edge to it given the hard tone to his voice. He was saying it as if it were just true. If he was clearly the man, I was his bitch, and I was going to blow him.

    "Ok, son. Wind your neck in a bit. I'm not gay". I thought I'd try and lighten what felt a bit tense of a mood so added "and let's be honest, if I was gay I could do better than you."

    "You actually think that don't you". As he said that he in folded his legs and man-spread then. Rather inconspicuously, along the inside of his right trouser leg was what looked like the outline of a pretty meaty looking cock. "You thought you were going to come in this bar with me and some chick. Be a big man, ditch me and fuck her. I've seen how you walk around, like you're some alpha male. I think you need to be set straight, so to speak".

    As he was talking I couldn't help notice the bulge was steadily growing in his pants.

    Charlie just smugly grinned and said "I know you're starring at it." His words broke my half trance. "It's big. Really big. You can't quite see in properly here" he said grabbing his obscenely big bulge. "But I doubt you've seen anything like it".

    I was stunned. Stunned by the fact that he'd said it, and by the fact I was so turned on by it. My mouth had gotten dry. It took me a few moments to realise my mouth was gaping and I'd not reacted to his words. I spluttered out "I'm... I'm not starring... what are you talking about?".

    He smile dropped and he looked a bit more serious. "Jason. Shut the fuck up and get over here". As he was this he grabbed the bulge down the leg of his trousers. I swear it had creeped in closer towards his knee and gotten thicker. "Touch it.".

    Again, I didn't know what to do. I was now openly staring at it.

    Charlie, with not just a hint of authority, snapped "now".

    Without thinking, I got up. Sat next to him. I didn't do anything. I didn't quite know why I'd gotten up, or why I'd sat next to him. I certainly didn't know what I was going to do next. All I knew was that there was something just urging me to do exactly as I was told. This seemingly mammoth cock growing down his trouser leg gave him some kind of control over me.

    Charlie man spread his legs and said "I said now". Without a bit of hesitation I reached over and grabbed hold of his enormous bulge. I grabbed the middle of it. It was so fat, and clearly not fully hard. The heat coming from it was impressive.

    Charlie tilted his head a little and said "all that time in the gym. All those muscles. Yet this is the first time you've felt what it means to be a real man isn't it?". He grabbed my chin with his hand and made me look at him in the eyes. "Isn't it?".

    "Yes". I'd even surprised myself that I'd said it.

    "Good. Do you want to see it?"

    Again, the "yes" escaped my lips before I'd even thought about it.

    "Right. You're going to have to earn it. Take me to your room". Reluctantly I let go of his cock, and started walking to my room. It was on the ground floor of the hotel, and just around a corner from the hotel bar.

    Stood at my door I was scrambling for my keys. I felt a mild cold sweat come over me. I wasn't sure what I was doing or why I was doing. All I know is the had to do whatever Charlie told me to do. His hands grabbed my hips and push me against the door. The kid was strong. Like really strong. I'm a big guy and he didn't seem to struggle to push me. And hold me against the door.

    He leaned in and whispered into my ear "get that fucking door open now. You want to see my cock don't you? You want to feel it don't you? See what a real man with a real cock looks like? Well? Do you?"

    "Yes" was all I could muster. I'd never been so dominated by anybody before. He strength and power were completely overwhelming me. He pushed his hips forward and I could feel his size. My mind could not understand a cock this big was actually real - but there it was, Rubbing against my muscle butt, attached to this freakishly strong cock-sure kid.

    Finally the door swung open and I stumbled in, nearly tripping over. It was a big room. He turned the lights on, and evenly walked over to the comfortable sofa seat in the corners I just watched him, not knowing what to do. Waiting for my next instruction.

    "Take of your clothes”, he said as he sat down, slouched in the seat and folded his legs. He reached into the inside of his suit pocket and pulled out packet of Marlborough Gold, took one out and lit it. All the while never taking his eyes off me. “Mate, if I have to repeat myself again, Im not going to be happy. And if Im not happy, you’re going to know it.”
     
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    Hey l like it, please continue :):)
     
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    Mate I got a boner - more please ;)
     
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    great story.....
     
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    Very good! Love the gym stud being put in his place by an alpha cock, hope to read more!
     
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    "Take of your clothes”, he said as he sat down, slouched in the seat and folded his legs. He reached into the inside of his suit pocket and pulled out packet of Marlborough Gold, took one out and lit it. All the while never taking his eyes off me. “Mate, if I have to repeat myself again, Im not going to be happy. And if Im not happy, you’re going to know it.”



    I hadn’t realised that I was just stood their staring at him, nervous and waiting for him to tell me what to do. I automatically started to take my jacket off, followed by my tie. He just sat their, virtually unmoving in his chair, taking slow drags of his cigerette, his face blank, yet determined. Seeing his plump lips on the cigarette I wondered what his lips my taste like. Beer and smokes? It was at this point that I felt a degree of sobriety come back. What the hell was I doing? This was ridiculous. I was being ordered around, and I needed to stop it.



    The words initially caught in my throat, but I pushed through and said “l…look, I’m not sure what we’re doing here. Im pretty tired. Maybe go to bed now, mate?”



    Charlies eyebrows furrowed, looking a little annoyed “No”



    “Mate, its late and this is a bit…”



    He cut me off “I said I wouldn’t tell you again.” And with that he stood up an walked over to me, oozing authority with each step. He grabbed the open ends of the collar of my shirt with both his hands and pulled them apart. With ease he pulled my shirt open, with the buttons scattering on the wooden floor.



    Before I could react, and in a smooth single move, he reached behind my head and pulled me in for a kiss. It was deep and strong. Wild and controlled at the same time. With his other hand he grabbed my own and pulled in it to grab a hand full of his meaty package. its heat and girth shocking me as much as it had last time. It had gotten bigger but still didn’t feel solid yet. How big was it? What is he going to make me do with it? What do I want him to make me do?



    Pulling back from the kiss, staring in my eyes with his silver ones, that smirk back on his face he said “Do you really want me to go?”



    I didn’t even think about it. “No. Stay.” There was something about the feel of his huge cock through his trousers, his strength, his confidence that just draw me too him. Ive never been led like this by anyone. Ive never wanted a man. I wanted to do what Charlie told me to do.



    “You’ve got a lot of bulk on you. Can only barely see your six pack.” Charilie said this as he threw off his jacket, then lifted up his shirt with one hand, cigarette in the other. “This is a man’s stomach”. beneath was a tight nit group of abdominal muscles that were so thick and tight and perfectly smooth that they looked like they were fighting to jump from his torso. “Lick them” he ordered. “After you’ve finished taking off ALL your clothes”.



    I hurried to comply. I finished what he had started to get my shirt off.and nearly fell over as I struggled to get my trousers around my ankles, until I’d realised I’d forgotten to take my shoes off. Which I did after sitting on the end of the bed. This left me sat there in a pair of tight white briefs that did little to hide my thick 7 1/2 inch rock hard cock. The cock I was once so proud of, that had once been the weapon I’d used to impale countless women. It was thick enough to have left quite a number of them feeling me for days afterward. But all I could think of at this point, looking down at my once proud boner straining my boxers, was how insignificant it was in the face of the monster that sat int he trousers of this cocky boy. No, not boy. Man.



    If I’ve left women feeling full and stretched, what has he done. How had Charlie left them.



    “off” I heard him say as I was temporarily lost in thought. I snapped out to look up at him as he turns his back to me to put his smoke.
     
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    I stood up to take my underwear off and face him again. The is the part i was normally proud, but I found myself nervous. What would he think? How would he react? I just took the plunge and pulled them down and stood up. My cock was as hard as it has ever been, it felt like a 7 1/2 inch steel pipe to me, pointing straight at him looking for approval. Approval that it didn’t get.



    “Is that it? You walk around like you're a big man and its because of that. I’m going to show you a real man. I’ll show what big means. But you know that already don’t you? You’ve already felt me. You think you know what is coming. You don’t. Get over here and get on your knees.”



    I did as I was told. I was becoming completely compliant in a way I didn't know that I had in me. Three steps between us felt like a nerve racking lifetime. As I got to my knees I never took my eyes from his, as Charlie continued to stare back impassively.



    He lifted his shirt with my head just level to his naval. “Lick my abs”. I reached out to grab his sides with my hands and lean in, and they felt like steel, totally solid. I slid my tongue along his thick muscle. His skin was smooth and flawless, like a marble statue. He smelt sweet. To my surprise my cock twiched and felt like it got harder.



    Charlie started taking the rest of his shirt off, something I only noticed when it fell to the floor behind him. I looked up to see the rest of him. It was not what you’d think. He wasn’t as bulky as me - and to be clear, I’m not fat, more like a rugby player bulk of muscle. You can see my six pack, and I have good definition. At least I thought I did. Charle’s body was changing my mind about what definition was. He was not as big as me, but he was nothing but muscle. Tight solid, defined. Every part of him looked hard without a bit of fat anywhere.



    “Didnt expect this did you?” he said as he flexed both of his arms. The biceps seemed to leap from his arms and form rock solid mountains the size of grapefruit. It explained why he was so strong, and so easily able to man handle me earlier, and the ease with which he ripped my shirt open.



    As he said the words I’d swear a bit of pre-cum seeped out of my throbbing cock.



    “But this isn’t what you wanted. Is it? You want to see what is in my trousers. I’m not just stronger than you. You’ve been wanting to see how much bigger than you I am. You want to see why I’m the man? And compared to me you may as well be a boy.”



    He took a half step back, moving my hands from his tight waist. Slowly he undid his belt. The whole while staring straight at my eyes with a wicked grin on his face.



    “You want this don’t you? You want to see what it really looks like? You want to taste it, don’t you?”



    “Yes.” was all I could muster. My mouth had become quite dry. Without thinking about it I had grabbed my own cock and slowly started to stroke it. I was so turned on by his control. His confidence. His power. It was a power that didn’t come just from his cock, or his shredded body and strength. It was like it was from his very being. His deep voice was so sure of itself, and so far, everything which he had said had been true. He was better than me in every way, and I was in his awe.



    “Of course you do. Everyone does.” i was now fixated on the bulge in his trouser leg. He opened his trousers and bent down to pull them off in a quick movement. Blocking my view.



    But then he stood up. And there is was. All of it. So thick. So long and so fucking huge. Like the rest of him it was perfectly smooth, but a slightly darker shade to the rest of his body. Uncut, with a pink head sat underneath the dark skin. He wasn’t hard yet and it has bigger than me. A neat but thick thatch of hair covered the top but nowhere else. I shaved everywhere. It just made me feel more like a boy.



    “Well? Don’t just fucking gawp at my big cock. Make it bigger.”



    I crawled forwards the short distance toward him till I was right in front of him. “Do it” came the order. I reached out and touched him with both hands. It didn’t feel completely soft, but it was by no means hard. I lifted it up to get a better look. There were thick veins running down the front. Not surprising - this thing must need a lot of blood. Udernewath was two huge balls tightly packed in his ball sack. I’d seen some porn stars with huge dicks with unseemly balls hanging too low. Not Charlie. Everything about him was perfect.



    “Don’t just fucking stare at the fucking thing.” There was a bit of annoyance in his voice. I instantly leaned in and licked his balls. They had the sweet smell of the rest of him, but the taste was a more salty musc. Dancing till late at a wedding, I remembered, would have helped sweat build up. The thing was, I liked it. I liked the taste and the smell, and the heat that was pouring off him. And with that my inhibition seemed to leave me, well what was left of it anyway.



    Here I was, on my knees, in my hotel room at my friends wedding, licking the balls of a guy with the biggest cock I had ever seen, who had spent the evening humiliating me and showing how much more of a man he was. This is not how I had planned this weekend, but I was now going for it.



    My tongue was licking and I was trying to get one of his huge balls in my mouth like a man starving. I stared to move up his cock, which was definitely starting to thicken and get longer. It felt like silk in my hand, against my cheek and on my tongue. I moved along to the end, and it felt like it took forever he was so big. I wanted to get it into my mouth before it got to big to fit in.



    I opened as wide as i could - and I have a pretty big gob - and lunged forward stuffing in as much as I could before it became a struggle. I then stared to push forward bit by bit. After I was completely stuffed by his mammoth cock I could hear him grunt from the back of his throat as he started to get to mine. He wasn’t even half way in.



    “You are hungry for a mans cock, aren’t you. Lets see how hungry” and with that he put his hand firmly on the back of my head and started pushing deeper with some force. I couldn’t take it, I started to choke and had to recoil, but his strength held me in place as he squeezed an extra two inches in, before letting me go.



    I had to catch my breath for a moment, and it wasn’t just because i could breath properly again, it was because I could now see it in all its glory. it was now rock solid, a single thick vein travelled the whole length of the shaft from the base to the head of this fat monster that was so heavy it poined downwards, but was still pushing up. A big pink bulbous head poked out of his forsaken. I don’t know how big it was. I broke my mind. 13 inches maybe. And so fat. I instinctively reached out to touch it as he stood there looking down with a satisfied look on his face and his hands on his hips.



    “Now you can see, can’t you?”



    “yes”



    “What can you see?”



    “Your cock is enormous”



    “And?”



    “You’re bigger… Better than me”



    “And?”



    “And I want it”



    “Good, cos your going to get it. All of it. And you’re never going to feel the same again, knowing that someone like me is out there”



    He did give it to me. All of it. And I never did feel the same again.
     
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    I may write a different story again later. If people like this one. But I actually think its best to stop this one here. You can imagine what comes next probably better than I can write it (If I have written well enough to here, that is).
     
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    NO!! Give the story an ending. . Do they end up in bed?? What happens??? Please tell us!!! :D:scream:
     
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    Damn, this was incredible! Loved the college pretty boy destroying the jock. Please write more!
     
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    Thanks! Very nice of you.
     
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    Wow. Incredibly hot. Can't wait to see what else you've got in you! Would love to chat as well.
     
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