Doctor John
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New chapter for my beloved fans,
Johns changes had gone to his head and was confident that he could do anything i mean after all he was damn near invincible. They had run tests that involved a brutal assault of weaponry and hand to hand combat and not even gunfire could penetrate his skin. Ashley came and visited everyday, well she practically lived there now because she only went home to sleep for 5 hours a day and then back to the hospital. John no longer needed sleep he just felt a constant energy flowing through him and could start to channel it by focusing on stuff. His hormones had surged a lot and had hurt a few doctors in a blind rage and just grabbed their head and ripped it off and threw it at one of the guards.
The doctors were also interested in Ashley's pregnancy as it had grown quite faster than usual. They decided to get married and after a month of planning just took it on a whim and had a small ceremony inside the building in Johns room. Only the most closest family and friends attended and not much was to be said till John expressed his love for Ashley by saying a very deep and heartfelt wedding vow.
Every night John had dreams that involved him taking over the world, he wanted more and he knew nothing can stop him. He finally got so pent up with all the testing and just knocked down the wall and left behind a note as he walked out.
John started in south america, he quickly captured all the leaders of the country as nothing could stop him so he just walked into the secure building minding the bullets and pulled down the steel doors and captured and killed the leaders declaring himself Lord John of South John as he decided to rename the country to him. He had friends flown in and family to look at his new empire. Something that surprised everyone was how great the economy was at John had taken on a green/environmental side and started many earth friendly projects to restore the former beauty. There was also a dark side as John had his way with over 20 woman a day. He gave them great love and they always asked for more afterwards. Ashley had decided that she had to give him his pleasures and freedom, after all he does save himself for her every night.
John and Ashley raised their baby as a king and spoiled it just as his dad did to him. He would eventually teach his child how to be self reliable and efficient. Since John had medical background he sometimes went to villages with supplies to look after everybody. This was just a show of being a humanitarian and he had a dark idea going on inside his head.
This is a very weird ending i have planned. I have no idea why i wrote it this way but i was watching something on the news and i recieved an email/comment about doing a erotic horror ending :] hope you enjoy as i have no idea when i will be inspired again but i promise i will finish this
Johns changes had gone to his head and was confident that he could do anything i mean after all he was damn near invincible. They had run tests that involved a brutal assault of weaponry and hand to hand combat and not even gunfire could penetrate his skin. Ashley came and visited everyday, well she practically lived there now because she only went home to sleep for 5 hours a day and then back to the hospital. John no longer needed sleep he just felt a constant energy flowing through him and could start to channel it by focusing on stuff. His hormones had surged a lot and had hurt a few doctors in a blind rage and just grabbed their head and ripped it off and threw it at one of the guards.
The doctors were also interested in Ashley's pregnancy as it had grown quite faster than usual. They decided to get married and after a month of planning just took it on a whim and had a small ceremony inside the building in Johns room. Only the most closest family and friends attended and not much was to be said till John expressed his love for Ashley by saying a very deep and heartfelt wedding vow.
Every night John had dreams that involved him taking over the world, he wanted more and he knew nothing can stop him. He finally got so pent up with all the testing and just knocked down the wall and left behind a note as he walked out.
John started in south america, he quickly captured all the leaders of the country as nothing could stop him so he just walked into the secure building minding the bullets and pulled down the steel doors and captured and killed the leaders declaring himself Lord John of South John as he decided to rename the country to him. He had friends flown in and family to look at his new empire. Something that surprised everyone was how great the economy was at John had taken on a green/environmental side and started many earth friendly projects to restore the former beauty. There was also a dark side as John had his way with over 20 woman a day. He gave them great love and they always asked for more afterwards. Ashley had decided that she had to give him his pleasures and freedom, after all he does save himself for her every night.
John and Ashley raised their baby as a king and spoiled it just as his dad did to him. He would eventually teach his child how to be self reliable and efficient. Since John had medical background he sometimes went to villages with supplies to look after everybody. This was just a show of being a humanitarian and he had a dark idea going on inside his head.
This is a very weird ending i have planned. I have no idea why i wrote it this way but i was watching something on the news and i recieved an email/comment about doing a erotic horror ending :] hope you enjoy as i have no idea when i will be inspired again but i promise i will finish this
Not sure.... but whatever it may be... ive definitely become a better writer! WAY better lol... wrote this over 5 years ago! Ton's has changed...
Halflife, This story was a pretty solid first effort, as far as imagination is concerned. I'm curious to see how your writing style has changed and improved over the last few years. Looking forward to reading your new stories.
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