and then in the text message to pete she says she was angry but she was the one that cheated on him first, so she has no room to be mad at all. oh and i mention?.....she is a full 100% two-bit whore
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So it's not over. That's good. Otherwise, I would have suggested deleting that epilogue and trying again.
The continuation is here, but its likely to get cancelled for lack of interest or comments...
http://www.lpsg.org/161731-paid-vacation.html
http://www.lpsg.org/161731-paid-vacation.html
This story was great. i read it over two days, i was hooked, and it turned me on more than any porn imaginable.
i was actually really happy with the epilogue, because i thought the whole Dave + Trey thing was too weird and came out of nowehre. That would have been my only complaint about the story, so i'm happy the epilogue clarified everything.
Once again great story, 158/ 10
i was actually really happy with the epilogue, because i thought the whole Dave + Trey thing was too weird and came out of nowehre. That would have been my only complaint about the story, so i'm happy the epilogue clarified everything.
Once again great story, 158/ 10
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this was a great story by far the best Ive read on this site and most all i do is read these stories, i was slightly disappointed when i realized Dave and trey were together, mainly because there were part you made it seem like Pete and trey were going to stick it through the thick and the thin. my only qualm about this whole thing is what happened to brain he just disappeared. but like most have said before im definitely a fan and i sure as hell cant wait for the squeal to a great story perhaps it could be about Pete's new adventures, o some how trey go with Pete hmm hmm well only time will tell
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I've never posted here, but I so loved the story... until the end. Why can't gay stories have happy endings? That makes me not watch gay movies. You made me fall in love with Pete just like Trey. I dreamt of Pete and what he would experience next, and I anticaped it during the day eager to get home and cum with him. When he left Trey at the end it hurt me too, because I've loved a few straight guys. Who hasn't, right? I half expected Pete, Trey, and Dave to live together and fuck each other every night. I wish you would continue the story with a home-cumming from Pete ready to live a new life with Trey. You made me emotional, so I have to admit you are a great writer. Thanks.
As sad as this sounds, I've never read a book cover to cover as I loose interest way to fast. However with this story, I just couldn't stop reading. I was late for work late for appointments.......it just sucked me in. GREAT JOB. Write another one with the same bi sexual twists.........PLEASE
bump... wish Peter would realize he needs to be with Trey.. that would have made for a much better ending.
No. Trey and Pete should have been together. I respect your writing, but I absolutely hate the pairing.
Loved the story , I loved how the erotic portions always had an emotional side. That makes the sex so much more intimate which the deck Orion of great sex. IMHO .
The ending was appropriate b/c Peter was too conflicted to committ to Trey. And he was completely un trustworthy. All the guys were fucking hot. And you 've left room for a conti uation of the story. Maybe some hot sex between Pete and Dave.
The ending was appropriate b/c Peter was too conflicted to committ to Trey. And he was completely un trustworthy. All the guys were fucking hot. And you 've left room for a conti uation of the story. Maybe some hot sex between Pete and Dave.
FINSUP:
Those were some of the hottest scenes I've ever read! Your imagination, set-up and writing skill are superlative!! Thank you for sharing your story!!!
Now PLEAAAAAASE continue...
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This is the best story ever. It took me a month to read it but I kept looking forward to every chapter. Its the perfect combo of sex, love, and relationships. Havent read the epilogue yet, but I will eventually.
Thank you so much for writing this. It hit the heart in the right spot.
Thank you so much for writing this. It hit the heart in the right spot.
