My first story opening (let me know your thoughts)

[tyler19872]

As they lounged on the sofa together - Tyler and Adam, great friends since school, were growing tired of the Thursday night television. Tyler's attention was waning, his legs curled up under his bum and his eyes darting around the room as he focussed on the dimly lit face of his friend.

There had always been a palpable sense of tension around Adam and Tyler, it was one of the reasons they had spent so much time together but it wasn't obvious, it was subtle but palpable. In the moments between their frequent laughter as friends there was a silence which was as addictive as it was awkward. It was unspoken but often in their conscience.

The light from the TV continued to dance across Adams strongly contoured face, Tyler became concious that he was staring - turning away quickly he felt a warm hand on his legs. Tyler felt his heart jolt, he didnt dare look back - in that one touch the tension which had existed as a warm comfort blanket of the friendship had disappeared, this felt new but intriguing.

Slowly turning toward Adam, the first thing that struck Tyler were his eyes; piercing blue in the darkness he had never noticed the depth of colour. Staring again, an almost numb Tyler was awoken by a laughter - a seductive laught that suggested so much.

Adam reached forward slowly, placing his hand betwen the cushions he grabbed the remote control and turned the TV off - with only the moon light now filling the room Adam proceeded to remove his top. Throwing the top on the floor, the moonlight cast shadows over the fine muscles of his body.

Taking his lead, Tyler proceeded to unbutton his shirt as he felt Adams warm hand reach against his tight trousers for his throbbing cock, his heart raced as he bit his lip and there eyes met once again. This time though, the eyes suggested so much more.

TBC
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Let me know your thoughts guys, especially if you'd like to hear more

x

 

[absey]

im liking a lot and waiting to hear more buddy

 

[william1]

Yes more please, a good start

 

[wantlowballs]

Good start! Hope there's some growth.

 

[tyler19872]

As they lounged on the sofa together - Tyler and Adam, great friends since school, were growing tired of the Thursday night television. Tyler's attention was waning, his legs curled up under his bum and his eyes darting around the room as he focussed on the dimly lit face of his friend.

There had always been a palpable sense of tension around Adam and Tyler, it was one of the reasons they had spent so much time together but it wasn't obvious, it was subtle but palpable. In the moments between their frequent laughter as friends there was a silence which was as addictive as it was awkward. It was unspoken but often in their conscience.

The light from the TV continued to dance across Adams strongly contoured face, Tyler became concious that he was staring - turning away quickly he felt a warm hand on his legs. Tyler felt his heart jolt, he didnt dare look back - in that one touch the tension which had existed as a warm comfort blanket of the friendship had disappeared, this felt new but intriguing.

Slowly turning toward Adam, the first thing that struck Tyler were his eyes; piercing blue in the darkness he had never noticed the depth of colour. Staring again, an almost numb Tyler was awoken by a laughter - a seductive laugh that suggested so much.

Adam reached forward slowly, placing his hand betwen the cushions he grabbed the remote control and turned the TV off - with only the moon light now filling the room Adam proceeded to remove his top. Throwing the top on the floor, the moonlight cast shadows over the fine muscles of his body.

Taking his lead, Tyler proceeded to unbutton his shirt as he felt Adams warm hand reach against his tight trousers for his throbbing cock, his heart raced as he bit his lip and there eyes met once again. This time though, the eyes suggested so much more.

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Part 2

Adam lent forward, the light of the moon shining brightly down his torso; the shadows cast by his abs reflecting the light on his supple, youthful skin. As he locked his lips against Tylers, he tilted his head and could feel its warmth across his whole body- the rhythm was automatic, he had never experienced this feeling before, but without instruction he knew exactly what to do.

Pushing Tyler backwards, Adam placed in hands inside Tylers unbuttoned shirt and slowly removed it as it fell to the floor. All that stood between them now was Tylers dark denim jeans and brown leather belt. Quickly fiddling with the buckle Tyler removed the belt and undid the button. His cock was rock hard, stretching the denim of his jeans and as Adam lent forward and kissed Tylers neck he could feel their hard cocks rub against each other. Adam chuckled, he could feel Tylers heart beating faster with every kiss and every movement, spreading his legs apart, Adam arched over Tyler, gently teasing Tylers cock.

Kissing his neck and making his way down Tylers smooth, young body he pulled the tight denim jeans and they fell to the floor. Tyler was now lying flat on the sofa and the prize was in sight, crowned only by a pair of CK trunks.

Adam ran his mouth over the curve of his rock hard bulge. Tyler reached forward to remove his trunks as Adam pushed his hands back and held them down. They shared a smirk as Adam pulled the trunks off with his teeth revealing a beautiful uncut cock. Keeping Tylers hands behind his head, Adam placed his tight lips around the head of Tylers big smooth cock and as he rotated his mouth in a clockwise direction he saw Tylers head fling backwards with a sigh that peaked his excitement.

As he rotated his head down the thick veiny shaft, Adam could feel Tylers pulse increasing - with every movement Tyler became more vocal. Stopping for a moment, Tyler felt a smooth set of fingers beneath his balls - he knew where they were going and his body tensed with anticipation. As he felt the warm finger touch his tight hole he gasped but as Adam began to rim it gently he relaxed and his head fell backwards once more. Using his wet thumb, Adam strummed Tylers tight hole, sending shivers across Tylers body.

Then Tyler felt something wet, so warm and so beautifully wet. Looking down his moonlit torso he saw the trendy hair and perfectly formed face of his new lover - his strong hands were placed evenly on the top of Tylers thighs spreading his virgin ass cheeks and with every lick he could feel his ass relaxing as if it were an invitation.

Standing up and rotating Tyler on the sofa, Adam looked Tyler straight in the face and with a pure look of passion grasped his shins and pushed them upwards; bending his legs onto the edge of the sofa. Exposing his tight wet hole, Adam spat on his hand and began to gently stroke his long 8" cock - it glistened in the light and as he began to run it over Tylers ass he could feel it beckoning him inside.

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Part 3 coming soon...

Your comments are always appreciated

x

 

[absey]

good stuff fella
and what a coincidence my nickname is adam hahaha