The Nurse

[B_btrelll]

I enjoyed the clipped narrative, the writer's almost bleak delivery had a feel of post apocalyptic literature, cut down to the bone with no fancy extras. I suggest a nun instead of a cheerleader.

I feel a nun is to cliched.

How about a sexy teacher. Plus, of course, soup.

 

[B_btrelll]

Typical sexist male orientated filth.
BTW - I like the bit about the big tits, and the big willy. Can you do one where John meets say a Secretary of State, called deep throat.

I like the suggestion, but why would John meet such a person?

I feel the narrative has to be pushed forward by the characters in a totally organic way, so unless it feels real, John won't be meeting a Secretary of State.

Now a good old busty secretary, that's a different matter. They'll both eat soup. Organic soup.

 

[wispandex_bulge]

LOL...

'Nuff said...

 

[B_btrelll]

LOL...

'Nuff said...

I assume LOL stands for "Laudably original literature"?

 

[Matthew]

You made a big mistake.


This does not belong in Fictitious Stories. You must post it in the Sex with a Large Penis section and SWEAR THAT IT'S ALL TRUE.

 

[B_btrelll]

You made a big mistake.


This does not belong in Fictitious Stories. You must post it in the Sex with a Large Penis section and SWEAR THAT IT'S ALL TRUE.

Haha! :biggrin1:

 

[Lordpendragon]

I like the suggestion, but why would John meet such a person?

They'll both eat soup. Organic soup.

Well, she's still a secretary.

Can you make it organic wild Italian mushroom soup? There's something about the taste.

 

[dreamer20]

"your cock is huge"

I loved it. It was short and sweet and the appearance of those punctuation marks was quite a shocking, yet thrilling departure from your usual literary style.:biggrin1:

 

[dreamer20]

Now a good old busty secretary, that's a different matter. They'll both eat soup. Organic soup.

Got your busty secretary right here btrell::biggrin1:



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[rob_just_rob]

I feel a nun is to cliched.

A nun is to cliched as soup is to appetizer. Brilliant! A metaphor for foreplay.

 

[B_btrelll]

A nun is to cliched as soup is to appetizer. Brilliant! A metaphor for foreplay.

To make up for missing out an "o" from that post, I'm going to make sure my next erotic story has you all saying, "oh" until you spunk like bitches.

 

[majormadness]

Incredible story. I'm chaffing due to furious masturbation

 

[Matthew]

I'm going to make sure my next erotic story has you all saying, "oh" until you spunk like bitches.

How do bitches spunk?

 

[D_alex8]

How do bitches spunk?

Refer to my video in the gallery for a demonstration of that particular phenomenon.

 

[dreamer20]

The Nurse returns for an encore.:biggrin1: